Reborn Just to Tease You

Hello, I would like to make a small comment. Will the author check the content of the novel when uploading it? I just started reading this novel. I won't talk about the other chapters. I'll just talk about the sentence at the end of the chapter I just finished, "Chapter 21: Soft Hands." There are a few places where the sentences are not smooth in the previous chapters, which makes me feel a little tired. Also, the existence of this foreshadowing is really annoying after seeing it too much. Besides, it would be better if the foreshadowing should not be so directional. The ambush should be the kind that is neither good nor bad, which is the best. And like the foreshadowing left by the author at the end of Chapter 21, I Personally, I think I still have the ability to dissuade readers. Just like no one likes prophecies that are unfavorable to them, foreshadowing is to increase the interest of readers in reading novels. When it seems that the male protagonist is imagining the future with the female protagonist, such foreshadowing is included to make us readers feel a sense of schadenfreude? Rather than the feeling of being poured a basin of cold water on?