Great Qin Throne

As a time traveler, you can't change history, nor can you change the plot, so why do you still have a golden finger, have outstanding strength at a young age, and show yourself everywhere? This book has collapsed and the gods have retreated

Come on, give me a bottle of Hedinghong so that I can sleep more peacefully.

"The way of heaven is ruthless, and treats all things as rotten dogs" is explained in the article? Don't misinterpret the true meaning of Taoism, the way of heaven is ruthless, and treats all living things as equal. No, please understand and don't talk nonsense and slander!!!

This book feels like the author has never read Qin Shi Mingyue. The character of Ying Zheng is completely destroyed, and the timeline is wrong. Tian Ming is actually older than Hu Hai, and Li Ji actually gives birth to a child for Ying Zheng. It ruins the original book.

King Huan of Zhou lived for twenty years. In 770 BC, King Ping of Zhou moved the capital to Luoyang and moved eastward, which was called the Eastern Zhou Dynasty in history. Your first chapter was written in 239 BC. Later, you said that Qingyunzi picked up the Tao Te Ching written by Lao Tzu 500 years ago, which was more than 700 BC. But Lao Tzu lived from about 571 BC to 471 BC. Can you tell me why people more than 700 BC picked up books written by people more than 500 BC?

After reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The author's content is confusing, and his sense of time is also poor. He was able to kill people with a sword when he was 4 years old. When he was 7 years old, he let go of someone who might have killed him. Then he went on a mission to Korea and went to a brothel. Wow, that's amazing.

Seeing children's literature again, a three-year-old child is unparalleled among all the troops. Could it be that you, the author, are the reincarnation of Jiangnan?

Originally, I planned to kill time and just look around, not to mention anything else. With such high martial arts skills, it can be considered a bit of a layout, so it will be no problem here. Then, the protagonist's mother actually died? ? You deliberately wanted to protect, but then failed because you took a break because you were following for too long? ? After all the foreshadowing, he still died in the end. Seeing this, he gave up the trap decisively. You said that you, a person who traveled through time, let your mother die in such a simple way, let alone taking special precautions. Now I wonder if the author is sick? In order to let the protagonist grow up, he even wrote the protagonist's mother to death. The protagonist is the lone star of the evil god. Now that his mother has been defeated, the heroine may be about to be defeated, and maybe they will all die in the end. Then the protagonist sees through life and death and successfully breaks through to kill everyone in the world and rule the world. Then he ascended to the fairy world, resurrected all the dead, and lived a life without shame. (This poison is very powerful, fellow Taoists, take care!)

This must be writing a diary, definitely writing a diary! Self-pleasure diary

I thought it was the Qin Shi Mingyue villain system that had its name changed.

You can change the timeline, arrange the characters, and arrange the plot according to your own ideas. It's okay, after all, it's a fan. If you don't change it, it will be no different from the original work. But you are so stupid that I don't know what to say about using the original work as an outline.

Let's first understand the relationship between the characters in Qin Shi Mingyue. Bei Mingzi is Chi Songzi's senior uncle, and Chi Songzi is Xiaomeng's senior brother by seniority. What you wrote is so embarrassing.

The author must have found it easy to code recently. After all, he was writing according to the original work without having to think about the plot at all. Then you still write nonsense fan fiction!

The timeline is a mess, Tianming is fucking older than Hu Hai, I just made it up myself Bei Mingzi became Chisongzi's senior brother, but it's not bad, even the setting of the original work is not copied At the age of four, he can lift a big sword to kill people, at the age of 7, he can defeat the Mohist rangers, and he can go to South Korea to promote Han Fei's envoy to Qin, and then he can visit a brothel, awesome Then let's copy the anime plot The essence of the whole novel is summarized

The author uses the original work as the main outline, so I might as well read the original work. Do you know you are writing a fanfic? Fans! After reading Chapter 21, I encountered several subversive plots, and I really couldn't bear it anymore. Who do you think you are writing about, author? Long Aotian?

I endured it until it was released, but after it was released, the protagonist disappeared. If I wanted to watch the original plot, wouldn't it be better to watch it again? It was a waste of starting points.

I have read more than 60 chapters, and the protagonist has done countless things. To sum it up, it's just one thing. Help those enemies of Qin! Make friends with them. Then it feels like nothing has been done. Because it is still the same as the original work, not even a small detail has changed.

Has the protagonist been replaced by Jing Tianming?

The plot of Qin Shi Mingyue and Tian Xing Jiu Ge was in chaos without interference, and the relationship lines were also messed up. It was so embarrassing to watch.

It's rubbish. The more I watch it, the more uncomfortable I feel. I already know the plot of time travel, but I write it as if I don't know it. It's a waste of time traveling.

To be honest, it is far different from the Qin in my heart. Almost every novel about Qin has to write about Qin Shimingyue, and everyone knows that many things in Qin Shimingyue are simply wrong, but the author still copied it. The most important thing is that Qin Shimingyue writes about Jianghu, and the Qin Dynasty in my heart is about war, hegemony, and the war of the six countries. But there are only a few people in Qin Shimingyue, and sometimes they even belittle the Qin Dynasty. I don't understand why so many authors write like this! Who can tell me

The author writes that the protagonist is too weak. He can only kill people at the age of four. I suggest you write that the protagonist has opened up the Ren and Du channels in his mother's womb, released his true energy, can fly with a weapon since he was born, and can reach the stars and the moon at the age of two. This is how awesome he is.

Fan fiction should have its own style. Is this one written by the author different from the original Qin Shi Mingyue? It just has one more supporting character.

God came down to earth, Kai Wushuang saved his mother at the age of 4, went on a mission to South Korea alone at the age of 7, broke into the Korean palace alone at night to threaten the King of Korea, returned home and defeated Jing Ke's sworn brother, fought with the Hundred Steps Flying Sword, and drew with Ge Nie The timeline is so messed up, is Tianming's younger brother Xiaomeng about the same age? Ming turned 8 years old the day before his mission to Korea. When the plot of Qin Dynasty begins, he must be at least 20 years old.

As the son of Qin Shihuang, he doesn't have a good cultivation method? Can Qin Shihuang unify the six countries without any background?

Also, I think your writing, the author, is a little bit watery. My friend, are you the fourth Mizukage? So good at water?

I vomited this book. Children as young as three or four years old can kill professional killers with swords, not just by accident, but by a group. And then, Lu Buwei's suicide note after his death turned out to be a list of teachers, mixed with Qin theory and some vernacular text. It made me stupid to read it. This paragraph was written so rubbish. The only advantage of the ten or so chapters of this work is that the protagonist's IQ is online, unlike the protagonist in some novels who looks like a psychopath.

The book "Li Ji wrote you to death" is useless. The male protagonist has no role in the book. The rest of the story can be copied from the anime.

It's outrageous not to mention it, but it's completely wrong. Friendly reminder, don't go in if you've seen Qin Shi's. The generations are all messed up. What can I say?

If you say it looks good, that's it. If you say it doesn't look good, it's okay. I always feel uncomfortable, so I definitely quit.