The First Person to Take the Wrong Approach with Swords

Your book is much better than the last one. At least you explained the story. Your last book was really illogical 🙂

The plot in the following chapters is much smoother than the previous chapters. The author is getting better and better as he writes! I believe this novel will achieve good results

This plot is really enough. It would be better if it were written honestly. It was completely carried away by the sword, not by people carrying the sword. Moreover, no matter how you look at the sword intention, it is wrong. It feels weird.

Your writing skills are so strong. Are you a screenwriter? Or have you written any masterpieces? Definitely not new.

I thought I would be invincible in five years. . .

Come on, it's so beautiful. I really want to know what happens next.

A good book must be fattened and then killed to be enjoyable. The author will update it soon!

I read many chapters in one go, and I still want to read them.

It's too inconsistent to mix martial arts with a Western background

Every time-traveling book has cheats. Before introducing the cheats and time-traveling, there are poisonous points. The introduction is always the same. It is better not to introduce it. It will look like garbage.

What I write always reminds me of myself. I don't know why, but it is obviously different from me in the novel...

It's so slow, it's been several days, and it's just a little bit faster. . Not enough~

It's really a "sword that goes astray"…

It's a good book, I'll keep up with the updates every day, so keep up the good work