Anqing Year Notes

The writing is very good, but the story seems a bit brain-consuming. The open and covert fights are quite difficult and require strict logic. The progress is a bit fast, and the characters are not very vivid, but it is good for newcomers. Some paragraphs are too long, it is recommended to shorten them. It is recommended to add a big title. The title can also be attractive. The name, cover and introduction are all attractive, but the text lacks the desire to make readers read on. I hope it can be improved gradually. It's not easy for newbies, come on!

Am I not worthy of having comments? Can anyone make me feel that someone is really reading this article...

Wow, this introduction sounds like ancient history.

To collect! Welcome back to "All Races Struggle for Hegemony"!

The author's writing is good, and the plot setting is also good, but the characters may not be so easy to understand, but there are hundreds of Hamlets for a hundred readers, just write what you feel in your heart, pay attention to the small details, and it will be fine. Not bad, come on⊙▽⊙