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Reyes died in a car accident? ! ! Is it the one who was acclimated to the Gunners and started at the top of his game? !
The achievements achieved by the protagonist should be more popular now than Yao Ming's back then! What achievements did Yao Ming have in basketball at the Olympics? In those years, Yao's income was hundreds of millions per year. What's more, can basketball compare with football?
De Rossi retired, old man, my first jersey was Roma, Red Wolves, damn it
Anyway, the little dragonfly can't write emotional dramas. A group of straight men are not as good as a harem. If you get stuck, you can just be a super model or something in two chapters. It's okay.
It's all booked, but I hope the author can get rid of the plot of the national (Olympic) team as soon as possible
I hope the author can get over the story of the national (Olympic) team as soon as possible, and have the experience of the national (Olympic) team. If he has scored goals or assists, he can add himself to the qualifications and background of playing in top European clubs... The Chinese team really can't afford it. This kind of YY is not relevant to the current situation. The real contrast is too great. As an old fan who has watched football for more than 20 years, it is really unpleasant... Really, there are too many plots about the national (Olympic) team, and I am ready to abandon the book... Patriotism and national sentiments can be displayed in any other aspect, but please skip Chinese football...
What's the use of keeping reputation without adding attributes? With Inzaghi's season card, drawing cards is not as good as +attributes. If the attributes increase, the strength will not be there. Don't worry so much
I have been waiting for updates from the author's old books. In the past few days, I suddenly wanted to click on the author's avatar and found this book. I just want to say that the author is in charge again and has a knife in his hand.
The first order has been made, but the author's IQ is online.
Don't slap someone in the face just for the sake of being slapped in the face. The protagonist is the best player in the French Ligue 1 of the five major leagues and a world-renowned star. He is the strongest leg of the National Olympics and the national team. The National Olympics and the country are built around pig's feet, which is the pig's feet. Leaders need political performance, and pig's feet need authority and mutual cooperation. See Argentina's Messi - if you don't have a good relationship with me, don't join the national team. Several local players in domestic leagues dare to isolate the pig's feet as long as they don't ride in the face. It's troublesome.
It is recommended to update at about 9,000 words per day. In the past, Lin Hai Tingtao had to update 15,000 words per day in order to become popular. Personally, I think the plot is quite good. The only flaw is that it has been updated. If it is updated at 9,000 words per day, this book will definitely rank among the top three competitive novels.
Now, let me talk about my views on this book. I hope the author will not beat me to death. First of all, unlike many people, I agree and encourage the author to write the plot of the national competition. Some people say that the more you read about the shitty reality of the national football team, the less interesting it becomes. This is actually a false proposition. Aren't many people happy to read the story about killing the United States and destroying the Japanese? Why didn't they compare it with reality? Can someone who writes all kinds of essays be considered a king by composing music and lyrics in real life? ? Everyone is YY. What are you saying? Do fans have a particularly high status? Then I return to the book itself and talk about the feeling of reading the book as a reader. The golden finger is unknown. At the beginning of the book, I thought that the protagonist's golden finger was to exchange cards for reputation and draw cards. The theme of the book would be "a super protagonist who can play different star styles in each game", because the cards are limited time or limited times, which is also very fun. The plots that can be written include the restrictive protagonist's tactics set by the opponent's coach who took off his hair. As a result, the protagonist collapsed because of the different card tactics this time, or the enemy's previous criticism was slapped in the face. Who knew that in the back of the book, Goldfinger was downplayed very quickly, or that there was too little description of Goldfinger, so that the protagonist suddenly became extraordinary? Why? The protagonist suddenly scores a goal, why? I have a very inexplicable feeling. If you want to write a powerful protagonist, then don't write Goldfinger. Since you have decided to write Goldfinger, let's write it to the end, okay? My feeling now is that the author wants to write a very literary protagonist who grows up through hard work and self-ability, but at the same time the author's reason tells him that this is impossible and he has to rely on a golden finger. It has become the contradictory feeling now. The author writes with contradictions, and the readers read with contradictions. This sense of contradiction is amplified again because of the author's writing style. When other people write about games, they write about games. When this author writes about games, he will make jokes and think about writing more off-field things. This will prevent readers from focusing all their thoughts on the game but thinking more, and then the sense of violation will become stronger. My personal suggestion is that the author should think about whether he should downplay the golden fingers or make sure that the golden fingers are the main focus of the writing. Don't continue to waver on both sides and be unhappy with both sides. To be honest, in fact, after Goldfinger was not portrayed much later, the protagonist gave me an abrupt feeling of growing up inexplicably and suddenly becoming stronger at the end of the period. This feeling of "missing the middle" is very strong... I have raised so many questions, I hope the author will not beat me to death.
Just discovered this on split push!
Give it a thumbs up and keep up the good work🌹🌹
Speaking of which, bro, take it easy. Why do I feel like this system is going to collapse? What should I do now that it's so great now? How are you going to come back? I'm afraid it won't be the end of the 200th chapter?
Not enough to read, update, what to eat, update, sleep, update, sex, update, I want to read a book 😆😆😆😆
I believe that you, the author, have seen everyone's high recognition of you in the comments. Objectively speaking, you are the second extremely talented football writer I have seen (the first one has entered the palace for the second time and I heard that he is doing well in Thailand because of his clean cutting). Lin Hai has been talking about breakthroughs, but when it comes to writing, it just increases the difficulty of the protagonist and labels it as persistence of dreams and struggle against fate. The content has not changed. It is still good but very boring. It can be seen from the subscription that there is a large loss of readers. The author has no reader base because of the poor performance of the old book, and he cannot get various recommendations. However, the readers who read it all like it means that your writing is great! So now is the time to seek a breakthrough! Update it! Fifteen thousand a day will allow more people to see you, and your rapid fame will allow more readers to appreciate this book!
Do you have any other football novels to recommend?
I don't understand why so many writers think Inzaghi is very strong.
You have won the league's top scorer once in your life, what is your strength? There are only a few times in your life when you have scored more than 15 goals in a single season. What is your strength? What is the strength of a forward who has no personal breakthrough ability, no tactical fulcrum ability, and cannot score goals stably and efficiently?
It's well written, but there are too few updates.
The latest chapter, the end. . . .
Kapaqiu, Pigfoot and Chen Tao murmured, and fell into a deep sleep after a fierce battle. It seems that the author was right not to write about girls. Only when couples go into battle can they share the same hatred.
The first 2 draws were for 15 minutes, and the next 5 draws were all thank you for your patronage. . . . . I'm convinced, don't you write an outline before writing a novel? How about roughly determining these probabilities? It's all just to show off, my breasts don't even move.
I have already subscribed to support for the first time, but I have seen a little, how can I say, it is not going well. The whole Chinese football is now a sign of Wanchu, and it is the Olympic Games at home. Previously, the fans in various media in Ligue 1 were unrestrained. Now it is good. I just want to ask, at this moment, in this situation, who dares to suppress and not cooperate with the protagonist. , In the team, Wanchu is the only one with interests and benefits. Follow the protagonist to have meat and pass the ball to Wanchu. It is that simple. There are so many twists and turns. Secondly, this group of players is the most classic small group of the 2005 World Youth Championship in the Netherlands. I think fans who have watched those games will understand. That's all for now. I will say it when I think of it, haha.
Alas, Ligue 1 is the fifth largest league after all, and it has produced many superstars such as Zidane, Ronaldinho, and Henry. Although Ronaldinho's peak period was short, during his peak period, he was also recognized as the number one player in the world who swept across La Liga and Europe... The superstar who made the proud Mellingers win a standing ovation at the Bernabeu! And the other one is Maradona... And Riquelme, even the rich and powerful can't survive. He... Of course you can look down on anyone, but it feels too inconsistent if you write like this...
Can I get the gold medal today🙂