The All-Around Queen Is Hard to Woo

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Regarding this book, I rarely know how to write. Of course, the reason for not being able to write cannot be because I am short of words, but because I really want to say so much that I don't know where to start. Let's start with the plot. An introduction that describes the causes and consequences of Shangguan Wan'er's death in its original era is to give book lovers who don't understand that period of history a general impression and quickly understand: Oh, it turns out that this is how the protagonist died. It is considerate, and you won't feel confused even if you read the historical scum. After the introduction, the main text is about Shangguan Wan'er's series of mental journeys after she arrived in modern times, and then soon, she was followed by a little lolita. Of course, this little lolita was not a bad person, but the biological daughter of our heroine. Well, let me add, with the male protagonist. Seeing this, 1v1 is confirmed, say nice! It's just that the female protagonist doesn't remember the male protagonist, and the male protagonist appears to be prejudiced against the female protagonist. The emotional development of the two should still go a long way, but what is reassuring is that the cute baby will lead the way, and it will definitely be smooth~ After talking about the plot, let's talk about the writing? The writing is smooth and there are no embarrassing points. Generally speaking, the arrangement is good. There are sometimes unexpected twists and turns, surprises, and people can't help but guess-hey, what will happen next? At this point, I have to mention that the use of punctuation is probably because the author is trying to express the different meanings of different sentence segments, so he often uses periods. However, too many periods will cause incoherence for readers. To put it plainly, it means that the book suddenly ends halfway through, which makes people feel stuck. It will also have an impact on the accumulation of emotions and the role of the characters. And I think that if the inappropriate use of punctuation is corrected, the performance of this book will definitely increase a lot. In terms of writing, everyone has their own habits. There is nothing much to say here, but I think it is necessary to mention it. I don't know whether the author coded too fast or there was interference from time to time. The use of words gives people a feeling of ups and downs. One moment I feel like wow, the writing here is really good, and the next moment I feel that it seems unsatisfactory. It lacks a bit of polish. The heroine has a very beautiful name, Li Waner. After parting the clouds and mist, you can see a bright moon hanging in the sky. It is a sign of letting go and looking down on the past memories and feelings, and it is also the foreshadowing and expectation of new life in the future. I really like the name alone. The male protagonist's name is Yun Qifeng, and he has the impression of a domineering president. From the visual inspection, he is a guy who is cold on the surface but sullen on the inside. He is quite cute. At least, you don't have to worry about having second thoughts~ The description techniques and character interactions, including the control of rhythm, give people the impression that it is also Yun Qifeng. Perhaps, when the author has the intention one day, he can try Yun Qi's side, and I think the results will be good. Of course, this is just my suggestion. Just take a look. The following, I will only say something from a personal perspective: No matter whether the results are good or bad, whether we are satisfied with the creation or not, every book is a work of our heart. We hope that we will not forget our original intention and persist in the necessary persistence. Come on, happy sister~

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Come on, wait until big sister becomes a god and take me to fly.

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