Yun Chu Must Listen to His Husband Obediently.

What rubbish?😆😆😆

By the way, is the title of your book a female broadcast routine? I feel very mentally retarded and poisonous.

Cut? Or make a big change! I feel like the setting is not very good, newbies should make it simpler! The title and introduction of the book are not very good... There can be space, and there can be ancient martial arts. Why is the heroine chased by men? Just write it out! The power of writing is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. If you write a short paragraph, my first impression will not be very good! Let's write a mature and simple routine first, and spend more time setting up the narrative structure in the first three chapters! It is recommended that you code out dozens of chapters in private and read through them yourself. You can also ask other people with writing skills to ask! Read more similar books on the list, see the narrative quality of your peers, and self-reflect on what your own writing lacks... I feel like your narrative writing is not very mature yet, and the logic of the main line is not clear! The lack of sense of immersion... That's all, come on!