Picked up an Apocalypse

I'm used to listening to books, so I rarely want to write reviews, but I have to say that I have listened to almost twenty chapters. The content is too flat, and the character description and positioning are not clear. The subject matter is quite good, but there is still a lot of room for improvement in writing skills, and it is difficult to grasp people's hearts. I'm leaving first, I hope the follow-up author can support me💪

What are you thinking about if you are not engaged in technology? You know there are aliens but you still don't use technology? What are you thinking about? Do you know that you can make the country progress for at least 50 years? Or overall progress?

Words don't convey the meaning, what about the black technology of traveling through the apocalypse? Are you going to work on the Internet or Meituan?

The situation is too small. Aliens will come to earth to enslave humans a hundred years later, and the protagonist is still in the mood to copy books and make movies. Is this the so-called flood after my death? How do you know that you will not live to be 200 years old if you have technology for the next hundred years? Besides, even if you insist on money and ask the country to explain everything in the future, are you afraid that the country will not give you enough? If you confess, the state can even give you power. Those who have money and power are the winners in life. At this time, you are afraid that there will not be a lot of beauties to help you. The stars and the sea are so majestic, but the protagonist only wants to pretend to be cool and wait for death on the earth. Oh my god, this is such a stupid person!

With high technology in hand, why don't we engage in industry instead of engaging in the Internet? High-tech industries are the father of the Internet. They don't really regard the Internet as high-tech, right?

There is nothing formal about shooting here and there. As for starting a business, you can only say that you are in YY. If you really understand those companies carefully, you won't write so lightly. You should make the scene bigger and you can read it as an outline 😥

The first chapter shocked me when I wrote about pushing the moon. Putting aside whether the moon will be pushed apart, you actually want to push the moon without even achieving controllable nuclear fusion. Do you want to use chemical fuel rockets to propel the moon? Do you know how much energy it takes to propel the moon? Do you know the total mass of the moon? Do you know why the moon is tidally locked to the earth? Do you know the consequences of pushing the moon?

Under the guise of black technology, the content is entertainment, and the author is a bit unkind.

As expected, it is hard science fiction, not fantasy, but in fact it is about begging for food with a golden rice bowl, which really ruins a good subject matter.

What can I say about this book? The end of the world a hundred years from now is really not far away from the protagonist. If you don't live long enough for yourself, neither will your children. However. Returning to reality turned out to be an urban novel routine. Internet novel. Network APP. Shouldn't you be in mechanical manufacturing? Real economy?

I can still understand it if I work on WeChat, but I can't understand it if I work on Meituan. What's so good about Meituan?

This protagonist is like an idiot, hammering here and there, accomplishing nothing yet wanting to do everything.

After reading Chapter 10, I gave up decisively. There was no pattern. With such good resources, I actually engaged in copying books and the Internet.

What about black technology? Is this an article about Internet entrepreneurship? In this case, I might as well read the urban rebirth novel

After reading the comments, is this another fake science and technology article begging for money with a golden rice bowl?

There is a saying that there is a reason why WeChat has survived so many software at the same time. Knowing who developed it and whether it was ultimately successful are two different things.

Just a comment, you now write a person who can travel through time as a reborn person.

It feels like pig's feet are guarding a golden mountain to beg for food.

This vision is too low. It really feels like shooting mosquitoes with a cannon.

Unless it is completely high-tech, almost any Internet-related startup cannot bypass Tencent. That is, many industries are now limited to the Internet. If the protagonist wants to become bigger and stronger, he must fight against Tencent. This is destined to be too aggressive.

There are too many poisonous points, including plagiarizing the third part of the article from the Internet, treating someone else's daughter and asking him to work for me. Obviously it can be logical to write slowly, but the protagonist is blunt, the progress is too fast, and there is no connection in the middle. Or some don't need to be written at all, including writing online articles. The author said that the protagonist should grow step by step, but I only saw the protagonist spinning in circles or even going backwards. The protagonist is like a fool, with insufficient structure and illogical logic.

I came here from a reborn Internet boss, but I didn't expect this one to be so retarded.

I will never read this kind of book. There are too many loopholes. You are an ordinary person and you are not a high-tech talent. Where can you get the scientific and technological information? Normal people would be suspicious of where high-end technology comes from, let alone officials of the Republic.

Is your update speed a turtle? Now you can't do it even once a day? Also write an egg 🤫

Big brother, communication providers dare not control the address book! If you do this, America Mobile will definitely face a lawsuit.

The Internet is a high technology. Without physical support, it is worse than a stone on the ground.

Are you writing a romance novel? The pace was slow and I was persuaded to quit after watching the beginning.

Search "Beggar Li" A different apocalyptic novel You deserve it

This is the most poisonous and fatal daily poison I have ever seen. You might as well copy it. I have a suite at the end of the world.

Chapter 2: Persuasion to retreat. A 23-year-old female professor from Peking University won the Turing Award. It's the end of the world and he's still calm.