I Have a Time and Space Gate

The writing is good, don't write it again...

That alien is dead. After all, being loyal to others counts as a person. Even if it is a dog, it is still a loyal dog. You won't swallow your anger, right? If you don't kill that girl from the Chu family, this book will be extremely poisonous.

What a bullshit concept, you kill the female escort and wet nurse and still want to coexist peacefully

To be honest, it's very toxic. The heroine came out of nowhere. People wanted to let you go, but then they accepted you out of nowhere? Then there is no main plot, the protagonist does whatever he thinks of.

What I wrote before was barely enough, but then the emperor's aunt was too poisonous, and her love was inexplicable. The pig's trotters changed repeatedly from domineering to grandson. Especially after a year of seclusion, he came out clueless and disliked pig's trotters. Moreover, their children have been poisonous since birth. It can be said that this aunt can poison most of the readers after she comes out. The most important thing is that there is no main line in the whole article, and the strength level is completely confused.

The title of the novel should be changed to, Modern Brother Wang's daily life behind the space door,

There are so many heroines at first glance, haha, you know

I revised the third chapter so that I don't write about the anchor. I'm convinced, there are so many anchor articles these days, they're quite popular. Point to this transitional chapter and don't let it go. You won't be able to get rich overnight, right? Okay, okay, I'll change it!

Don't abuse the master, don't let others lead you by the nose

No more, chapter 6, please come on, author

The pace is too fast. You will almost finish the book before it is released. If you need to add water, add water.

The pace is too fast. It may be easy to write at the beginning, but you won't have anything to write about at the end. The pace is indeed too fast.

Very pornographic and violent 😏

The introduction says there is no system, but the label says system flow. Author, are you contradictory?

First, add intelligence to the protagonist. Otherwise, if he is not cheating, he will be useless. If he cheats, he will lose air every second. If he increases intelligence, whether he is cheating or not, he will lose air every second.

Haha

People near Beijing can't understand Mandarin, people in Wuchang you're talking about can't understand Hankou, and people near the West Lake can't understand Hangzhou dialect. You don't even know how to judge by common sense when writing novels

I've read a few chapters, and it's actually quite good. Although there are some small problems of this kind and that, it doesn't affect reading. Good luck, author.