The Boss Is so Handsome

The leader-style style with a bit of humor feels okay. The language and characters, and the plot can be more humorous and relaxed, but the setting itself is better to be stricter and crueler. I hope it can be achieved.

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Except for the two spies who are a big poisonous spot, everything else is good. Do you know why it's so poisonous there? Because a department manager must know the reason why suspects should not be used. Instead, you ask the protagonist to recruit them into his gang when he discovers there's something wrong with them. In fact, it doesn't matter whether you join the gang or not. It doesn't matter if the characters and settings are a bit conflicting. The most important thing is to have fun. You let the protagonist take such a big blame from the beginning, and it will be difficult for readers to accept it. In addition, in such an important battle as Gushan, you only summoned the old man in the end, which made the whole story vulgar and dimmed its early glory. Here are three options for the author: 1. Modify the plot so that the protagonist discovers their abnormal behavior and exposes them in advance, and then the monster takes the opportunity to hurt people and run away. Although the protagonist has meritorious service, he is still sent to fight Gushan. 2. Modify the Lonely Mountain Offensive Campaign to allow the protagonist to struggle a little more and then explode at the last moment. It's better not to explode for a while. Even if it is to explode, it should be when the readers are not expecting it. 3. Continue to write like this, and then hurry up and slowly finish 4,000 words every day, and continue on the road to success.

It's my sister again. There are so many sisters in Qidian.

At this point in writing this book, it is comparable to the book about The Eunuch, My Sister is the Demon God. The more I write, the more I get off track.

The numerical values ​​are a bit loose. For example, little Loli sometimes says she is in her teens, and sometimes says she is ten years old; sometimes she says she has reached the intermediate level of Qi training at the age of ten, and sometimes says she is already at the peak of Qi training at the age of ten, reaching the point where she is about to reach the foundation building level. So what exactly?

This is well said. Is there still a pendant missing on your thigh?

I am here, wishing that the new book will become a god.

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It's well written, the writing is witty and humorous, and the plot is reasonable. Come on, author! A few suggestions Keep your IQ online and don't kill everyone with pig's feet. The enemies are weak and the writing is boring. I hope that the only golden finger is pig's feet. As modern people's advanced thinking, system tasks will not suddenly pop up. The historical background is a bit like the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period in the late Zhou Dynasty. The sects are like vassal states. Each country has trade, economy, diplomacy, warfare, and the art of vertical and horizontal alliances. You can refer to it below. The writing is very good. Keep it updated. I will give out two recommendation votes every day. I will vote for the monthly vote when I get it.

If it's a system document, don't read it! ! ! System files generally do not work

Where is Lily coming from? Come on, author

Mr. Ren's new book has been a hit, with orders exceeding ten thousand, and he has become a god in one fell swoop.

In the Qidian novel, are all the diseases that Loli will die from? Everything costs Loli, so Loli still likes the protagonist no matter what.

I must support Ren Da's new book. I've read it. It's good, but only one chapter is missing 😁😁😁

Take a chance and prove that I have been here 🙂

Why can a book about eunuchs still be recommended?

If I go, I'm going to raise him and watch him again. Is this a eunuch?

How could the previous boss repay the debt if he had mortgaged something? Even if he forms an elixir, there is no way he will not repay his debts! And he saw from the fact that the Chamber of Commerce came to collect the debt not long after his death that the loan period was particularly short. In this case, even if the former leader formed a pill, he still wouldn't be able to earn enough to pay off his debts! Under normal circumstances, the former leader should borrow money if he gives himself time to earn money and repay the debt after forming a pill!

It's not entirely because the book is not good. In my opinion, this book is quite good. Moreover, it was the first time I read your book and I discovered that you have written history, which is equally wonderful. However, I think part of the reason why Xianxia failed to get up was that the water was too deep. It is normal for him to jump. If the author likes it, he can open another book in the future. (Coming from a Xianxia author with two years of experience)

I just watched it and saw the little loli saying that the leader brother is so handsome! I don't want to watch anymore.

There are only nine recommended tickets for monthly tickets 🙏

Apart from my advantages, I have no shortcomings...

I wish the new book a big hit. It hasn't been refined yet. Can it be refined? 😁

I will first send out a wave of recommendation ticket red envelopes to test the water. I hope the author will give it a try.

I can't write anymore. Unless the audience of great masters is limited, humor is better to be more serious~

It's all the poison lily's fault🤭

Little lolita haha, why are there so-called lolita everywhere in Qidian's books?