Alliance's Happy System

"League's Happy System" Author: Kuo Short Eagle Flying Type: E-Sports Rating: 8.2 Book Review: Da Da's writing style is very smooth. Whether it is the characterization of the characters or the description of the game scenes, it is very lively and interesting, with a strong sense of substitution. Especially for gamers, the entire article is very attractive. The writing style is light and humorous, making it very relaxing to read, which is great for readers. Moving on to the plot, as mentioned before, the setting of the game system is a very interesting point. So far, there are no problems with the structure and rhythm of the story, and you will not feel rushed when reading the story. If I have a small suggestion, when describing the game, you can write it in more detail and add more game details and descriptions of interactions between teammates. The effect may be better. Overall, there is nothing wrong with the writing style and plot setting. It is a great article. I have subscribed to it and collected it. Please continue to work hard! From：chushiji

I would like to wish you all a happy new year. I was a little nervous about writing a book. There must be many things wrong with the book, but we don't know about it, and we don't dare to ask. There's no one in the book club, so I can only post a post to collect everyone's opinions. Iron guys, everyone who passes by leaves their poisonous spots and mistakes behind. Or if you think there is a problem with any chapter, I hope you can point it out. Feiying must change! Յ(¯ㅂ¯Յ) If you think the writing is good, you can praise the flying eagle~ Bow!

Otto! Kill me!

This Manager Hu Tianhu...................................... Eight said, respect others. But, author, your unclear writing is quite disappointing. At least for me it is. You are by no means a newcomer, right? Have you ever written about cities before? To change the bad habits in urban areas, the game area needs a fun system, fun protagonists, and rigorous competitions. With these, you can achieve good results.

Bad review! A few simple complaints: First of all, it does not reflect the refreshing feeling brought by the system! Either you can show that the system can indeed turn the tide, or you can go one step further by adding embellishments to the system! However, I didn't see any of the above, so the system flooded me with negative reviews! Let's talk about the protagonist's rubbish rank before rebirth. After rebirth, he didn't explain anything because the system can directly enter the profession? Is it possible that the author has some misunderstanding about professional players? Is he a fan of the All-Pro League? Can you join any team? Anyway, three to zero, five to zero? Haha~ And the happiness system is not worthy of its name! No happy impression! It was somewhat interesting during the trial training, but now that I've seen the first two chapters, I can't stand it anymore! In fact, the idea is a good idea, but,,, it has gone too far! Sorry, I have been persuaded to leave. You are busy, so I won't bother you!

The book is okay, but the game descriptions are too good. . Dull? . . . ? , Generally speaking, most of the text (see 55) tells that the author is letting himself go. .

Isn't it true that there are sticks who think he is very strong?

Take Marco to the World Championships🌹

The name of the supporting player, the game ID, the location, and the hero he is good at are all arranged by Feiying as much as possible.

Why isn't it updated? Very pretty

This is the fourth autistic author I've met 😁

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The world's number one mid laner - faker

Write more about Brother Stick! Want to see

Come on, I'm here to support you 😁

Generally speaking, alliance novels whose supporting characters are not original characters will not be popular, and those whose supporting characters are Feike will not be popular even more. I'm not a fan of anyone, but when I saw that Feike was the protagonist's opponent, I didn't want to read it. It's like an alliance novel wouldn't be an alliance novel without torturing Feike once. What I want to say is, can't you directly attach Feike to the protagonist?

I was persuaded to quit by a girl at the beginning! ! !

I couldn't sleep tonight and read your book. Generally speaking, the title of your book is wrong. You are so happy. After reading the first chapter, my overall feeling is that it is depressing! It should be called a suppression system. Since you want to use a system, don't make a lot of restrictions.