Gotham Scoffer

During the trilogy, it felt a bit cheap and it felt very consistent with the theme Being captured felt a bit like a second master Personally, I felt that the magic stick style was not bad after I came out Then I found Zha Kang to learn magic, which was okay Mainly because you, a pig's foot, had a reason for your first personality change. What did you do after you arrived in Japan? Are the demon sword and the lurking demon soul the hook? In addition to the fact that your Demon Sword had just gotten the first cut with a big dog, it was a dog-licking posture. The Demon Sword fell and was eliminated. Later, the demon was also eliminated, and then Pig's Feet kept licking Platycodon crazily. Anyway, I was deceived Pig's Feet's character has changed too much. There is no intermittent process or turning point. It feels like it was written by several people separately.

This is a fantastic novel, and the smooth writing did not make me, an old bookworm, get stuck for a moment. It is very well written, and I recommend it to everyone. I hope to recommend it to everyone. I really hope that the protagonist can master Vergil's Dimension Slash in "Devil May Cry 5". The author of this template can consider it.

The writing style looks very comfortable, but there are still a few poisonous points The main reason is that the master trusts the protagonist a little quickly. Logically speaking, the master should be a very cautious person. Then there are suggestions, the dialogue should be added, xxx said, this, once the dialogue has more than three sentences, it will be a bit unclear who is talking. Adding the name does not affect the reading, and it can also make up the word count (funny)

The writing in the first volume felt a bit immature, but the story was really great, especially where Harley Quinn was imprisoned. The second volume is acceptable, and the image of Constantine is better portrayed. Killing Dumbledore is also more enjoyable to watch. But recently, when I came to Japanese plots, I felt that the image of the protagonist collapsed instantly. Tomie was written so well by the author. And do we need to add Inuyasha's world view? Originally, DC mixed with HP was messy enough, but the origin of Shazam was not explained clearly, and it also felt awkward to mix it with American comics and Japanese comics. Due to cultural differences, it is really awkward for American comics and Japanese comics to be forcibly merged together.

In Chapter 4, the protagonist solves the problem by shooting the Scarecrow to death. Batman knocks down the protagonist and saves the Scarecrow. He entangles the protagonist and causes the protagonist to inhale poisonous gas. Then he puts a gas mask on the protagonist. The protagonist says: I owe you one? ? ? ? ? ? ? The author was also poisoned?

Dear readers, I am a new scumbag author. If you think it is okay, please give me a recommendation and favorite for this scumbag. If you really can't, you can just leave a comment. Please leave a comment to let me know if someone is watching. Thank you all.

Huge blockage, I'm sorry, I really feel like it's a big blockage. Although the author's description of the protagonist's image is normal, I still find it distasteful. When I saw the introduction to this article, I thought the protagonist was a Feng Bujue-like character. . . . Or a similar clown. It's just that the protagonist is tortured. . . . He actually had a psychological hallucination and a god was born. It was really poisonous. . . After all, in my opinion, the protagonist himself has super recovery ability. It only takes one night for the skin of the limbs that was removed to grow back. The same is true for having broken bones. You can recover in one night. So is it necessary for the protagonist to have a psychological shadow? After all, the clown gave the order that the protagonist cannot die. The protagonist will not die anyway, and the wounds can be recovered. I don't want to think about how to get out of there. It's really not normal. And since the protagonist includes the factors that he will not die and will recover after being injured, he has not awakened the two major instincts of human beings. Crazy desire to kill Desire to reproduce I think it is really incredible.

I have read Chapter 16 now and I feel it is quite good. I have collected it and I hope the author can keep it up.

Although the protagonist said that he was awake, when he said that he was the messenger of God, I knew that he must be really crazy. Anyway, I personally think that he is crazy.

I can't stand it anymore after reading chapter 160. Pig's Foot's character changes from moment to moment. In the previous chapter, he was ruthless and ruthless. He killed countless people, including beautiful women. In the last chapter, a woman kissed him and immediately became shy, becoming like an innocent little boy. What the hell did I write?

Um. . . It's too messy. Gotham Volume. Batman. Afu OOC is so powerful. Then he was seduced by Harley Quinn and inexplicably gained the identity of a servant of God. The plot started to become very absurd To be honest, he was either born and raised or traveled with DC memory and wrote the Robin line normally. Let the second bucket become three buckets. Then he left for various reasons and I guess the results will not be that bad The master will let someone dress up as him, give him a job as his personal assistant, and let him live in his ancestral house. Give him the Bat Armor and drive the Bat Motorcycle? ? ? The old man himself knows that he has mental problems. If he finds another Batman, he is afraid that he will be sent directly to Arkham. At the worst, he will order the imitator to never dress up as Batman again.

The previous Gotham characters were portrayed very well, until the male protagonist suddenly sensed some kind of god...

In response to some questions in the comments, the author Zhazha responded. The protagonist is a time traveler, but he was a baby when he traveled back. He has lived in DC for 16 years, so it is normal for him not to remember some things. And whether the God he sees now really exists is a matter of opinion between benevolent people and wise people. It may be true or it may be that the protagonist is crazy and has delusions. This line still depends on the development of the story. When a book starts to get on the right track, even the author has difficulty controlling some things. As for some people saying that Batman and the Joker speak Chinese and idioms, believe me, Batman will have more problems than you think. Moreover, the Internet is so developed now that if I want, I can use Youdao to translate the book into English. The last thing is the mental state of the protagonist. The clown said: A bad day can drive a person crazy, and the protagonist's experience this year is by no means a happy one.

The protagonist is now a bug who kills innocent people...

When you see God, you lose interest, just like when you tell me halfway through drinking water, the cup used to hold dung. . . . . .

It's directed at Batman. It starts out normally. What the hell is it starting from hell? The protagonist is skinned? I can't stand it.

Not easy, not easy. . . If you can sustain such a vote for so long, please support it.

Come on! The author writes very well!

The trailer for Joaquin's version of the Joker movie has already been released. I hope that the author can learn from some of the movie's stories and continue to expand.

I'm sure many people gave up after seeing Chapter 5 of Volume 2, Hell (5).

I want to see Superman being pushed to the ground and rubbed

After Gotham came out, it became poisonous Before, it could be rated as 7.5 After Gotham, it was only rated as 4.5 I feel that the writing style and plot have suddenly changed.

Congratulations to the author for finishing the book, although I just read it

The protagonist's character feels broken. Although he was tortured and became a pervert, what is it like to kill innocent people indiscriminately (゜ロ゜)

I came here from Shuhuang and unexpectedly found this magical book. Just started watching it, but looking forward to it!

The first time I read it, it was average, I% read a few chapters, the second time I read it, it was pretty good, 90 chapters, the third time I read it I was the scoffer! I&%de4&#&%，$%&

I just want to ask what the protagonist's character is like? Ruthless, crazy and extreme like The joker? Or the so-called justice?

Unlike most of the current American comic novels with amusing and idiotic protagonists, the story feels very good, and the unique technique is eye-catching.