Xuanqin Love

Overall, the writing is very good and it reads smoothly. It is recommended to divide the paragraphs into more paragraphs, especially the dialogues between characters, which look messy together. It is best to add some descriptions of expressions and tone, so that the characters will be more fleshed out. I still have a question, is this book a romance novel? It's probably not appropriate to post it on a men's channel. After all, few boys like to read this type of article. If it is a romance novel, you can choose to publish a female novel-Xianxia Romance. Of course, this is just a suggestion. One more thing, I hope the author can keep writing, don't forget the original intention of writing, and don't give up because of poor data. Gold will always shine, and becoming a god must be accumulated. The first book is a training, come on! I suggest the author to read some good novels when he has time to increase inspiration, compare them with his own novels, and learn from them. Hehe, as a person who can't even reach the edge of the street, I can only share my experience. I hope that you who have dreams in your heart can spread your wings and fly, come on!

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Come on, it doesn't matter if you update every week, please try your best to update.

I feel like it was well written. Looking forward to your new works.

I like Dada's novels very much. There are many places in them that I can learn from. You are also welcome to pay attention to my work "The Spiritual Master Volume". Let's work hard together.