Real Oniwu

The protagonist thinks he is funny, but in the eyes of us readers, he is actually a fool.

Is the protagonist written as a middle-aged mentally retarded person?

Choosing to write a stupid protagonist is the biggest failure. This is also the reason why no one will read it. You may find it interesting, but the audience does not think so.

You can write about six or seven chapters when you get so self-motivated that you can easily get away with people.

Brother, your book is very nice👍

I feel it's best to read this book without bringing it in. Lower IQ throughout the process

It has a weird and confusing feeling. Let's see what the author writes next.

There are so few clicks, why don't the author finish it and start a new one?

The style is too confusing. At first I thought the first few chapters were dark, rational and decisive in killing, but the later chapters were all funny and funny. It was too confusing.

The narration is really messy, and it's so hard to jump between details.

Congratulations on finishing this book, may it become a hit soon! 🤓