Empress Tianyan

Is this how the outline was written from the beginning? This is such a poisonous point? Or did you write it with an idea due to an explosion of mentality? If you suddenly want to write like this, it is deliberately poisonous. It is obvious that the protagonist is single at the beginning, how can there be a single protagonist who is raped?

The protagonist is finally growing up, I'm so happy

The sentence is a little smoother, but the typos are a flaw 😭

A bit nb, invincible literary abuser

Now I can tell you responsibly that the main character in this book is single and his mentality is male, and his mentality will always be male. If he says important things three times, his mentality is male. Of course there is another small reason. The protagonist is the naughtiest, and it is normal to look down on other men. Also, I'm short of words, can you help me with the name? You can write the background of the name, etc. (I am the author, this is just a trumpet account, please vote and collect)

What's the point of poison? My resistance to poison is very low. Can the author say in a subtle way that the protagonist has been completely exposed? Being pushed? Forced to date someone? Or has the protagonist been betrayed again?

I hope the protagonist survives this disaster, and I also hope that the protagonist will not turn into a ruthless murderer because of this disaster. The story is getting more and more interesting. Although there are still typos, I am looking forward to the next chapter. Come on

Whether the protagonist's student is the son of destiny, from beginning to end, he fights monsters and levels up. Various help from the protagonist. Any kind of help?

The combat power and realm are not described clearly, what realm is what, how much destructive power, and what is the difference from other realms. The combat power is very confusing. The protagonist himself fights across one realm, and the violent mode plus the emperor armor, the combat power across two realms, is a bit too invincible. Invincible text is actually easy to get tired of aesthetics. The protagonist has killed people who are higher than himself. Several times, he was charmed by the protagonist and distracted, and was dominated by the protagonist. It's a bit too far-fetched to behead Kaku. I don't believe that people who kill like hemp have no resistance to beauty. My opinion is that if you kill too much, the people you kill will be like pigs in the eyes of the killer, just a pile of flesh with no resistance. The description of combat power is too vague. I feel that if I go to level 10 and reach level 50, I can still do a thousand and eight hundred moves. In the end, I fight back in a desperate situation. This is a bit unbelievable. Could it be that the protagonist is Captain America? Special attributes are 50/50? I hope it can be balanced so that the protagonist's cross-realm battles are less abrupt and the performance of which realm can be made clearer, so that we readers can tell at a glance what realm he is a master or what realm a novice. Let those high-level masters look like masters. A noob also looks like a novice. There aren't that many people who cross realms and criticize others. They're all practicing cultivation. You're the only one who works hard and you're the only one who has the brains? Except for the protagonist and the protagonist's friends, they are all the kind of self-propelled humanoid experience pack with low IQ, whose limbs appear to be sound but are actually not sound, who can't walk when they see beautiful women, and who jump when they see traps?

Wow, the author's 180-degree turn caught me off guard. I couldn't predict the author's next operation at all, 666

When the poison resistance is high, come back and take a look, 😭

Starting from the explosion of mentality, I feel that the story is progressing very fast, and I feel that I will soon run out of things to watch. Is it due to the arrangement of the outline?

It looks good, cheers for the author🌹

The more I read the book, the better it looks. There are far fewer typos than before, and the sentences are fluent. I am slowly getting better.

Originally, it seemed that the protagonist's upgrade was very solid. I thought that the golden elixir, a great master in the Nascent Soul realm, would have the feeling of moving mountains and reclaiming seas, and breaking rocks. But it turns out that it is just an enhanced version of the humanoid self-propelled experience pack. It dies casually. After decades of training, it can't keep up with the protagonist's dozens of days of training. Did he practice it on a pig, without any life-saving skills, and fight back before death? If you are experienced in combat, will you still get distracted on the battlefield? Are you distracted because of the beauty of the enemy? Are they all flowers in the greenhouse? Relying on resources to defeat the young master? It obviously feels like a hired killer, who should look like a tiger, but it feels like a cat wearing tiger skin, which seems very inconsistent. I hope the author can write it a little closer to reality.

Is this the same number for the author's new book? ?

Come, come, I'm here again, I'm still Bing Lingzi, everyone is welcome to watch. In addition, the update may be a bit slow, please don't mind!

What about comments? Lost

Well, I don't know what to say. Anyway, a new book has been released, The name is Bing Lingzi It belongs to the kind of fantasy novel about transformation, or the kind of body time travel, not soul travel Ye Wushang, this is the author's name,

It's so uncomfortable, there's one less book to read 😭

Are the characters of those students reckless, brainless, idiots, and anxious about their IQ? , It feels like watching them do things and fight. It feels like my IQ is being rubbed against the ground. The enemy is stupid, right? The enemy of kindergarten IQ?