The Pastoral Vinegar-Flavored Concubine Is Busy Farming

The time-traveling girl makes a fortune selling food in ancient times, which is an old cliché in time-traveling farming novels. The subject matter itself is impeccable, it just depends on the plot! The writing style of this article is relatively plain, but the plot is a bit boring, and the plot progression is even a bit far-fetched! What do you say? First, the heroine does not fit the character! The heroine was engaged in agricultural research in modern times. After time traveling, it seemed that she didn't even have time to "examine" the surrounding environment and products, and she started to set up a stall and start a business in a hurry! Although she is forced to see a doctor and support her family, her specialty is human-based agriculture, and it should be used in the fields and mountains. Moreover, this is also the content of many farming articles that lead readers to discover "surprises" and harvests! ——However, the heroine dug for shepherd's purse every day and found nothing! You were so focused on digging. It wasn't until the shepherd's purse had grown old that you realized you were looking for other wild vegetables around! It can be seen that the author had a very limited idea when writing the article, or started writing without clear planning! This also brings about the second problem: the food sold in the heroine's town is lackluster in terms of variety and novelty! Does selling sesame seed cakes, shepherd's purse soup, and shepherd's purse dumplings involve any technical content? How long can something with little technical content remain popular? In ancient times, people could say they were poor, but they couldn't be fools. If they saw you making money by selling things in the market, wouldn't they follow suit? Can you really make a fortune by selling simple and uncharacteristic food without constantly innovating? ——However, just by selling sesame cakes, the heroine can make the whole family buy noodles and eat meat every now and then, and even hire a doctor to come to their house! All I can say is that she truly deserves to be a heroine! The third is the role of the heroine's eldest brother. If he doesn't appear in the early stage and he is treated as transparent, it is really a big mistake! Affected by the copywriting, I really thought he was a scholar at first. Because he was never at home, he was bullied by the best next door. I can barely explain it! It turned out later that he was "Jie Yuan"! I would like to ask: In ancient northern rural areas (not Jiangnan, where literary style flourished), if a person who "resolved the Yuan Dynasty" was elected, wouldn't it be valuable? Even though the widowed mother was ill, in a family with two children, some unrelated top-notch people often came to bully her. The villagers watched the excitement and no one stood up to defend her! It can be seen that this "Jie Yuan" brother is really transparent. He has no influence at all when he is not on the stage! Should we say that the people's customs are strong, or that the plot is unreasonable? Fourthly, the aura of the heroine is so powerful that many dignitaries rush to serve as cheats for the heroine! For example, Yun Zizong, there is nothing wrong with arranging such a role, but the screenwriter is too unnatural. To put it bluntly, it feels like "rushing" to treat the heroine as a noble! The noble young master, who was clearly superior, rushed to help the heroine carry firewood without seeing any special behavior from the heroine, went to the house to drink water for face, and rushed to buy sesame seed cakes and drink wild vegetable soup! If this is his daily life, helping the old man push the cart, helping the old lady cross the street, etc., Then it makes sense, but this "noble young man" is not "noble" at all! How friendly it is to the people! Later, the heroine sold food and even caused trouble in court. The market lady was not afraid of trouble and even rushed to the Yamen to testify! The heroine was surprised when she met the county magistrate - there was no collusion between officials and businessmen! This brain circuit is so strange that I am speechless! There is no suspense about the result. The county magistrate is rushing to make egg pancakes to support the heroine! (Laughing and crying) It can be seen that what drives the plot is not the heroine's own intelligence, but the protagonist's aura! Quite disappointed! Seeing this, I suddenly realized that the focus of this article is not on farming, but more on interpersonal relationships, such as family feuds, house fights, power schemes, etc.! Sure enough, I scrolled down the table of contents and as soon as the text was put on the shelf, princes, emperors, concubines and queens... All came out! The full text is less than one-fifth of the way through, but I thought at least the first half was about An Ansheng's farming fortune! Okay, I ran into the wrong place

I don't like to be found out right away, so I gave up the article. I finally wanted to read it, ugh.

Why did you write about being discovered by your sister? I'm so speechless. It's meaningless to be fake anyway.