Take the Toast, or Face the Consequences

I have a very fascinating point. The heroine is doing a fantasy mission (that is, meeting the supreme sect leader in her childhood in Peach Blossom Spring, and there is also an artifact dagger). It is obviously the opportunity for the heroine to trigger, but in the end, a colorless character that has not been mentioned much before appears out of nowhere. Even if the plot requires this, I don't care, but after looking at the back, the heroine with the artifact gave Wu Zi Sex, and then he was verbally criticized by Wu Color. The heroine was just angry, and then Wu Color was in distress and the heroine wanted to save his life. Moreover, this setting is that they are enemies. As mentioned many times before, the heroine scolded Wu Color when mentioning Wu Color, and she was often hunted by others. The result is now better. She sent artifacts and information, swallowed her anger, and was treated with a bad attitude. That's fine, but after beating the boss in the end, all the rewards go to the colorless one who made the last blow. Even if it has to be set like this, the dungeon should at least have ownership rights. From the whole story, it is equivalent to the heroine finishing the previous tasks exhaustingly and then meeting the enemy in the last step. After being threatened, she gave him artifacts and rewards, and worked tirelessly to assist him. No matter what the author originally wanted to express, this is what it means anyway. The heroine is like a colorless treasure-delivery boy, a golden-fingered tool man. There are two other things that are very confusing. One is that the article repeatedly explains that Wu Se is always chasing the heroine. So the heroine is still afraid of being killed and the whole server is notified. Then isn't she afraid that the assassin will take the artifact and offer a bounty for her to kill her?? Secondly, the heroine's previous online love relationship was very hurtful. As mentioned before, her friend was afraid of making her sad and did not mention the scumbag. Then after this Wushe appeared, he kept talking about the heroine's previous relationship and poking her heart out. Even if it fits the setting of a bad relationship, the heroine rubs salt in the wound but does not have a strong fight back at all. I was confused when I read it at noon. My meal was cold and it felt pointless to write so many words.

The writing style and concept are both excellent, and it can be seen that this is a delicate article written by a delicate girl. There are actually a lot of detailed descriptions. It may not be suitable for fast-food reading of online articles, but it is not impossible to read it in your spare time, but the readers will be smaller. But writing a book? For most of them, writing a book is just to have fun and use your free time. It is generally regarded as a hobby or side job, and it is rarely a full-time job. So you just need to be patient and write it down, and the editor will recommend it, and eventually you will gather a group of readers who love you. Even if there are few, there are still some... Also, I would like to ask, do you have a large readership?

Does the author have a book club? I like your books very much. Come on 😳

Happy New Year to all the author fun and sand sculpture book friends~

Okay, I originally wanted to send a recommendation ticket, but then I realized that I didn't seem to have a recommendation ticket😅😂, but I still wish the girl a great success in her book! . How about I recommend books to you 😂, my copywriting is still barely 😂😂

Every time I see Feng Bujue's ID, I feel like I'm in trouble 😂 It feels like my male idol has infiltrated him randomly, and he's also playing a role that's not too high-profile 😂 I came to Thriller Paradise a few years ago.

I really like the stories you wrote, Miss Momo