Luo Changsheng

There are conflicts in each chapter, and they are connected to the beginning of the story in the next chapter. The ideas are clear, and the big cause and effect is still very logical. Short stories are difficult to write, but it is my first time to write them so that each chapter is controlled. With these elements, it is still very boring to expand and contract! Men's thinking is still more rational. It would be better if there is a plot and at the same time focus on the rendering of the characters! For example, the second uncle, a businessman who has cooperated with the Japanese for many years, after meeting his nephew, in addition to the past love and care, he also has a probing and defensive attitude towards him. The language or behavioral profiling can be strengthened, which can also be seen in the fact that Luo Changsheng went behind Luo Changsheng's back and instigated Baoyue to go to Shanghai. Finally, if we deepen the interaction with the old chief of staff, the ending will be fuller. Overall, it's great, keep up the good work💪Looking forward to the next work 😁

Support the author! Very thoughtful!

The storyline is compact, looking forward to the next chapter 😁

Very good and fascinating. Looking forward to the next chapters.

The story is exciting and the plot is gripping. Don't be a eunuch and update soon.

Baoyue will not be given to the Japanese, right?

Just update one chapter and that's it. Update it quickly.

Let's do another extra chapter. I don't want to imagine, I just want to know the result. Baoyue? Is Changsheng dead? Keep going.