A Warrior Who Can Travel Across the World

The poisonous wind blows and the soul is flying, Shennong tried the poison and it is difficult to live a long life The elixir is found to soothe the sorrowful intestines

I support the country's actions against the dynasty, regardless of the consequences, by secretly detaining his family members and forcing them to reveal all the secrets. I started traveling back in time when I was 37 years old. Two years after I came back, I traveled back in time for 5 years. I was both 44 years old. I experienced three worlds and was possessed by a living dog. It was a mental attack.

Females shouldn't practice the Nine Yang Divine Skill. It's said that if they practice it, they will turn into beardless women.

Later, he went to show off his martial arts skills to save people. Can't you swim across?

The protagonist just told his parents not to tell anyone else about his martial arts, otherwise he would be a guinea pig. He turned around and immediately started floating on the water to save people. He wrapped his face with a piece of cloth and couldn't recognize him. . . . I'm speechless. If I don't want to be exposed, why don't I swim to save people?

Oh...🥱

There are a lot of poisonous points. For example, when I was seen traveling through time for the first time, I couldn't help but make things right. I was afraid that others wouldn't know, so I took the initiative to tell people this and that. Anyone who came into contact with the name, except for the dead, knew that pig's feet were not people in this world, and their life and death depended on the nobility of others. Another example is when he asked his parents to keep his martial arts a secret, but he immediately used Qinggong to save people in the water. Another example is to know this world through time travel, and there will be a wave of revelations of the past and spoilers of the future. Abandoned

Are you sure you are thirty-seven? Even a seven-year-old knows that there are good things to hide.

I told my parents not to expose myself before, but in the blink of an eye I was exposed myself. Author, wouldn't you be embarrassed yourself?

Just looking at the catalog is not interesting, the copy is a mess. Wouldn't it be better to write about martial arts and then become a fairy?

What I admire the most is the author's perseverance. He is still writing more than two million words, but the key point is still so poorly written.

What rubbish novel? Toxic Mom sells it, all I want to see is trash, and I have to write about you as a hammer.

It lowered my IQ and disgusted me. The protagonist is already in his 30s, almost 40, and he is still a baby who has not grown up.

The protagonist's character is too diaosi, not defensive at all. He is soft-hearted, indecisive, and kind-hearted. I suggest the author change it.

If surveillance could be so powerful, there would be no room for crime.

Um, how should I put it? Some of the plots of the author are particularly confusing, such as starting from the fifth-grade princess, such as a Greek saint from Siberia in Binghe saying that you are your Excellency, such as spreading the Tao Te Ching in the orbit world, and the most poisonous one, letting the leader of the Destiny Cult, Shan Yuru, break through, and then Lang Fanyun is worried. The inner demon selectively takes action once (I go crazy every time I watch this. It is absolutely okay for Shan Yuru to die once. I really don't know what the point is in arranging such a personal breakthrough. It is purely disgusting?). The novel is definitely based on the author's ideas, but can you consider the general logical thinking a little bit? Using the logic of Wheel King, if you want to write martial arts, write martial arts, if you want to write light novels, write light novels, if you want to adapt them, then adapt them. As a result, martial arts and light novels are adulterated, adapted and randomly edited, and chaotically edited and weird...

I haven't broken any laws. Isn't it the right thing for the country to protect itself? Why should I hand over my things and then say that I can protect them even if they don't break the law? If I don't hand over my things and I don't break any laws, why don't you retaliate against us?

The country is fueling the fire and helping overseas organizations to test the male protagonist. Why can't the male protagonist take action The country obviously took action first, but you can take action against my family. Why can't I take action against the country? It's you who have failed yourselves, and the actor will be sorry for the country. If the country does not test the actor, the actor will only take action if he is mentally retarded. This old man himself said how righteous he is. If you don't test the hero, will the hero take action against the country?

Why are they criticizing the author, and it's normal to not like it, so why are they criticizing this book in the same way? Is it so magical? Did the author delete the good reviews?

Draw, draw a circle and curse you, the author!

If this book had been written before 2010, it would have done well.

The mechas in the track world cannot be used in the real world because of the end of law. Why can the male protagonist still use extraordinary powers?

The country is fueling the fire and helping overseas organizations to test the male protagonist. Why can't the male protagonist take action The country obviously took action first, but you can take action against my family. Why can't I take action against the country? It's you who have failed yourselves, and the actor will be sorry for the country. If the country does not test the actor, the actor will only take action if he is mentally retarded. This old man himself said how righteous he is. If you don't test the hero, will the hero take action against the country?

I can't stand it anymore. It's so long-winded.

I have just read about ten chapters, and the biggest drawback of this book is that you cannot bring items from the world you traveled through to the real world. . . Even if you get treasures from other worlds, you can't bring them back. . .

I personally like the first two worlds, but I don't like all the other worlds!

I feel like the author's writing is not good and he talks too much

Darling, I don't know much about the world. . .

My writing skills are not good! It's okay for a novice, but old bookworms like us think there are too many unreasonable things.

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