A Commoner Ninja in Konoha
平民忍者在木叶
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 272k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
127Chapters
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1.3kRecs
4Fans
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Reader comments 11
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Naruto once said in the comics that everyone has chakra in their body, it's just a certain amount, so I don't dare to form seals because I'm afraid of turning into a shadow clone.
After reading seven or eight chapters, I feel that my IQ is on the line. No matter how awesome Danzo is, he doesn't dare to tease the third generation Tosuzu. The root is really awesome for doing things secretly, but it is impossible to dare to do things in the residential area of Konoha. The third generation's telescope skills and ANBU are not a joke, and he dares to kill ninjas in Konoha just to blame the protagonist, so he retreats.
Just this introduction? A lot of blood in your body? And you said you were a civilian ninja? Don't buy dog meat with sheep's head, it will ruin your goodwill.
To be honest, it doesn't look like Naruto. It feels like the style of a fantasy novel. Overall, it doesn't feel good.
A commoner, no system, no artifact, and no blood successor, I thought the protagonist would upgrade in a low-key way, but I didn't expect him to be so flamboyant at the beginning. He is a wealthy man in Konoha and a genius inventor at the age of ten. He looks like Long Aotian at the beginning, which immediately attracts the villain's roots. Those with system artifacts are not as high-profile as you, which is not my cup of tea.
Write less about the protagonist being threatened
Now the third generation is still young and will not easily listen to what others say, so it is not a big problem and will not let others touch their own people casually. . . But I feel that White Fang's death in the original comics was a failure because they dared to touch someone as young as Sandai. . . It's strange that the third generation hasn't gotten angry yet
If you have a sister, you should write it in your profile.
If you have a sister, you should write it in the introduction, it is a waste of time.
I just read the first four chapters, and it felt like a strong fantasy novel.
I have some questions I would like to ask
The protagonist is so rich and knows Tsunade, why hasn't his sister's eyes been treated yet? It is said that there is something wrong with Kakashi's eyes. Novice Lin can help Kakashi change his eyes. But with Tsunade here, are you afraid that you can't find anyone to help? Regarding the protagonist's enemies, the protagonist's qualifications are very low. He has time to improve his qualifications. YY has so many messy things to increase the protagonist's strength. Shouldn't the protagonist offer a reward? As long as you have enough money, you might be able to bring the protagonist's enemies to your doorstep. Wouldn't the author set up a scenario where the protagonist doesn't need money or help, so he has to do it himself?
Holding the grass, the start is so boring, no sense