The Second Dimension Starting from Honkai Academy

With all due respect, the story is not rich enough, and many plots develop too quickly or even in one stroke, making them seem rather abrupt and awkward. Similarly, the characters have no characteristics due to insufficient description, and even the images in the original work are not shown very much. They are more like another person wearing various character names In short, in my opinion, this book is closer to a dry outline than a finished book.

It's okay if there are no chapter names, and it hasn't been divided into volumes yet, which is a bit discouraging.

Author, it's okay if the chapters don't have names. There are many volumes, so how can newcomers know what you wrote?

Most of them are indescribable things. I'm a little sick and can't stand it anymore.

The author's writing is really a bit poor

And the author doesn't seem to know how to write emotional dramas

Too dry, it's all about narration for the sake of narration.

Xi'er's name is Xi'er, not Xi'er. Isn't there someone named Xi'er in Zhanmei? You would have the same name.

It feels like having a harem throughout, which I personally find a bit disgusting.

After reading Chapter 30, the author's writing is a bit lacking, but the plot is okay. I hope it can be improved in the future. Come on, the author is great.

Please update the world of Elf Dream Ye Luoli

Well, how should I put it, well, I can't say it's not bad, it's just that the relationship developed a bit too fast, and I didn't read much of it, so I don't know if it's any better later on, but the first part was a bit too fast. This should be because I'm a newbie, well, come on, author, I also like Beng Beng Beng.

Why don't you start a harem and publish books in Chuangshi? You should be popular there.

There aren't as many updates as before.

I like Dada's works, and I hope everyone will update more and create better content. I also hope to collect a lot of my work "Spiritual Master Volume".