Tang Dynasty Traveler

I feel there are a few things that are not appropriate: First, the author has to use some words too appropriately. If he can't think of a suitable one, just use vernacular. Second, pig's feet are a bit frivolous. You must know that most modern people are the kind of people who are thief-minded but not courageous, and ancient times should have been relatively conservative about such things. The two have not known each other for a long time, and they can even touch their waists with pig's feet, which makes me feel frivolous. Three: There are some places where the writing is a bit off, I can't put it into words. When the doctor died, I felt like it was a joke. There was also the medical school clerk, who was not even ten years old. This was a bit off. For the time being, I feel so much that makes me uncomfortable.

Generally speaking in modern times, if someone teases you when you buy something, you will get scolded a few times.

What can I say about the rhythm? I always feel that the main storyline is too slow.

The rooster is 5 yuan, the hen is 3 yuan, the chick is 1/3 yuan, and I bought 100 chickens for 100 yuan. There are three combinations in total rooster hen chick 4+18+78=100 8+11+81=100 12+4+84=100 You can tell at a glance that 100 chickens is correct. Let's prove that 100 chickens cost exactly 100 yuan 5*4+3*18+78/3=20+54+26=100 5*8+3*11+81/3=40+33+27=100 5*12+3*4+84/3=60+12+28=100 After the proof is completed, there are three possibilities in total. The author actually thinks there is only one possibility, so I conclude that the author failed mathematics.

It's very novel and gives people the urge to find out.

I haven't read it yet, but the introduction is very good, so I hope it won't disappoint.

Come on! "I Am the True Immortal" is here to visit

This book is very imaginative and the writing is excellent. The only awkward thing is that the author has stretched the layers too much. For example, Lingji Bodhisattva and Pig's Knuckle are basically people from two hugely different worlds, but Pig's Knuckle just twists together. It's just like an official from the ruling party who has graduated from college for many years discussing social issues with a second-year elementary school student. Isn't this nonsense? Although the world of Journey to the West is only an intermediate plane, its things and background are inferior to those of other planes. This is not unreasonable.

Post, you are very welcome to point out the poisonous points in the book 🤓

What a great book, I can only say one word, don't say it a second time!

Damn it, ahhhhhh, it's so exciting, please update it soon! 🤭

The book is okay, but not many people read it.

It's really good, I will update more in the future!

Since you are writing about a traveling businessman, you should write more about transactions. Now you will give people away, and sometimes you will save them. Who will read it?

I haven't read such thoughtful writing in a long time. It's a good and in-depth article. I recommend it.

The author forced it to be funny, so embarrassing

Chapter 33: After killing an outer disciple, why don't you quickly go back to find the thigh and go shopping in the market? Drunk

I want to give the protagonist's divine sword a name that is both powerful and zen-like. Please help me think of it 😃

The plot development is good, come on 🌹🌹🌹🌹

The author created each character in this book with unique characteristics and I like them very much.

The author said that the plot moves quickly and there is a lot of suspense, which is very suitable for me.

I like Dada's works, and I hope everyone will update more and create better content. I also hope to collect a lot of my work "Spiritual Master Volume".

I saw the update in one go and had some doubts. Of the three Bayun brothers, how come only Bayun is left in the end? Did they die in the Qiuliang disaster? Also, weren't the three Bayun brothers sent to take care of Miss Mu? Later, why did Bayun suddenly arrive at the scene of the fight? Then, there was no trace of the other two brothers.