Unofficial History of Swallowed Star

This is a personal adaptation of Swallowed Star, a rough draft for entertainment only, with no writing skill and no plot. It rearranges lines from the original and includes a little of my own material.

A disclaimer: I'm not a writer, so of course my writing is bad. I'm posting this just to claim a spot, since putting it in the review section is a hassle. So the adapted story structure is nothing special. I can't be bothered to polish it, and I wouldn't know how anyway.

If you have any opinions, feel free to tear into it, assuming anyone even sees it, haha. Insults won't be accepted.