Lu Bu Batu

I have found a job now, so I have to adjust my status. If there is anything I didn't do well, book friends, please understand, thank you.

I saw the shadow of "Song Jiang" in Lu Bu. Heroes from all walks of life bowed to him

Ode to Lu Bu Lü Bu has been famous for his bravery for thousands of years. Crossing rivers and ridges, water is ruthless, Winning or losing depends on your own plans. 2019.03.10Si Xing 000

Title: Mid-Autumn Festival The land of Kyushu celebrates the Mid-Autumn Festival, and thousands of households look at the Jade Rabbit. A few boxes of mooncakes convey warmth, soothe the mind and make the whole family happy. Friends greet each other more often, and the love is so strong that they are not afraid of getting wet. The moon in the sweet-scented osmanthus wine has its own whiteness that enters the heart.

I saw Chapter 5 and felt like something was missing. It was completely different from the Lu Bu I had in mind.

I really admire your writers who write about history. You can easily write about geographical environment and so on. I can only read it. When you write it, I can't tell the difference between east, west and north.🤭

I've read so much that I forgot to tell you. Pay attention to punctuation. There are no periods in many dialogues, or periods should be inside double quotes. Pay attention to the details, come on! The plot and characters are described in detail and vividly, I like it.

Lu Bu among men, red rabbit among men

Come on, I've been devouring posts recently. I don't know if you can see it. Anyway, I saw what others replied to me but couldn't reply. I'm trying my best to write the story in my heart. We are all good friends 😁

Chapters 117 and 118 focus on the inner description, which makes the characters more layered and well-represented. However, when it comes to Lu Bu's emotional line 🤭, it's all about the big guys 😁. It is recommended to intersperse the painting style of Lu Bu's love 😁 Waiting to witness Lu Bu's change of destiny. It is a wonderful and brain-burning plot, so write slowly.

The writing is not good. It's a bit like watching a novel from a God's perspective. It feels very empty and boring, with no emotional fluctuations! Although the writing style is much better than that of ancient literature, in this era, there are more authors with good writing style, so they can only be lost to the public!

Come on 😜🤭

I have signed four chapters of my new book and am in the process of getting the contract. Please check out my new stories when you have time. Although I sometimes cannot guarantee updates when I am tired from get off work, I still want to share stories with you. I write down stories that I can think of, write them for fun, and record the passage of my youthful time. Otherwise, in the future, I will not know what meaningful things I have done besides commuting 😁

Dear author, the title of your book does not match this cover at all. Let me make a cover for you.

Vomited the legendary Xiaobaiwen

I like this book so much that I gave it to the author as a souvenir 😁

If you collect strong generals in the early stage so hard, others will have no chance to play.

Haven't been here for a long time, come to see you

I hope there can be more interesting things. It's a little monotonous, but overall I like it. Come on!

It feels less enjoyable. It would look better if the protagonist made some inventions or something.

Okay (✪▽✪), I decided to read this book...

It's strange that the Yellow Turban Uprising started in 184. Zhang Yi was killed by the Hu people in 188, and Ding Yuan took over.