Leisurely Aspire to Reach the Sky

After reading ten chapters, I will briefly describe my feelings. Basically, the tone is mainly vicious. Please bear with me, the author. First of all, the writing style is quite outstanding. The various descriptions are exquisite and delicate, and the vocabulary is particularly rich. He is worthy of being a bookworm for many years. He is in line with the sentence "I have read three hundred Tang poems by heart, and I can recite them even if I don't know how to compose them." Except for the occasional emojis that appear relatively unconventional, the writing is basically regular. This point has surpassed that of most Internet nerds whose writing skills are immature, and deserves praise. In addition, there are basically no typos and incomplete sentences within the visible range, and there are few misuses of punctuation (sometimes periods are missing, or periods are placed outside colons), which shows that the proofreading is very careful. Of course, there are some details that need to be paid attention to, such as the paragraph is too long, and the "back to the loess and face to the sky" is obviously misused. In addition, the male protagonist Tize may have been called Chongye (?) In the original version. There is a place that has not been changed, resulting in inconsistency. These problems need to be solved. As for the plot, I have only read ten chapters, so I can't comment too much on it, but whether it is the story or the characters, there is a lack of new ideas and highlights for the time being. The heroine Qiao Qiao is a flower in the greenhouse, a bourgeoisie who has not yet awakened her self-awareness, and cannot evoke much sense of identity. The male protagonist Tize seems to be just the almighty Prince Charming in his dreams. His image is not three-dimensional and realistic. As for the scumbag Wang Jian and the scumbag Xue Mei, their names alone convey a sense of vulgarity (no intention to allude to book friends of the same name, just for literary discussion), but they are consistent with their characters. But this kind of character design is too common, so common that it is numbing, and the image is also thin and dull, so it can hardly be called outstanding. In addition, scenes such as cheating in person and cheating inside the marriage may be intended to incite hatred, but the actual effect is a little too much, and I personally think it lowers the style of the article. The plot is not the main problem. The biggest problem of this book is that the style is not unified. Some people write it wherever they want. Within ten chapters alone, there are multiple styles such as urban, reality, cultivation, farming, apocalypse, romance, etc. Although each style is well written, when put together, it looks extremely messy, just like frying all the seasonings in one dish. You can imagine the taste. One chapter is still in apocalyptic zombie mode, the next chapter is about leisurely farming, the previous chapter is a realistic ethics drama about family affairs, and the next chapter is about romantic Paris and Turkey. This not only results in a loose plot, but also a chaotic rhythm, making people completely unable to grasp the main line and jumping from scene to scene every minute. The author may need to carefully consider what style he wants to highlight in this book. After determining the main style, he can decisively cut off other branches, or at least significantly weaken them. In "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", King Jinlun commented that Yang Guo's martial arts were "extensive but not refined, mixed but not pure". This is the current state of this book (at least the first ten chapters). If the author wants to reach a higher level, he must learn a comprehensive method and create his own "Sadly Ecstasy Palm", so that it is truly possible to "leisurely aspire to the sky".

First of all, for the purpose of this book, although it is not popular, it is still a good subject. In recent years, apocalyptic literature can be compared with categories such as the destruction of the earth or the invasion of aliens. So as far as the purpose of this book is concerned, there is no problem at all. Apocalyptic literature + zombies + immortality + romance + urban CEO. As for the opening chapter, although it is not as brilliant as the master's Golden Three Chapters, it is better than the average person's Golden Three Chapters. Although I personally don't agree with the Golden Three Chapters, because it's always good to have a good meal and never be afraid of being late. The development of the plot needs to be paved, and the plot is a step-by-step process. There is a cause and there is an effect, but now the pace is very fast in every aspect, including reading. If the first three chapters have no highlights, then your article will basically be abandoned. In this way, the beginning of this book is particularly successful. Because at the beginning, there is a big easter egg. (Maybe it's poisonous.) When Wang Jian's shamelessness and viciousness came to light, I could only curse angrily, is there such a scumbag in the world? Wouldn't it be a disgrace to the faces of my male compatriots? However, after I took a closer look, I felt that this place is both refreshing (because of driving?) And also a poisonous point that some people complain about. After all, picky people will be very decisive in some things. However, I still agree. I only read books, plots, and descriptions. Don't ask what's reasonable. Because existence is reasonable. Even if someone criticizes cuckolds or pigtails, I will stick to my attitude. Art comes from life, but is higher than life. If you want to be entangled here, then when Xue Mei entered Wang Jian's house, it was no longer reasonable. If it is unreasonable here, then the beginning of the entire plot is unreasonable, which also leads to the unreasonable introduction. So, it can be seen from this that the author's writing power is very strong. What others call poisonous points is only controlled within a certain range. And a more desperate process slowly unfolded. Just when everyone thought what kind of plot was needed after the heroine was thrown out of the window, the author came up with a new idea, and his soul met Goldfinger by chance and reincarnated for a month. This immediately formed the real beginning of the whole story. But here, when I saw Dize, I knew that this was a love that spanned thousands of years. Then the plot suddenly unfolded. It can also be regarded as the preliminary preparation and transition. From it I found another thing that I have to mention again, that is the description of the environment and the rendering of the atmosphere. From the pavilions and pavilions in Dize Space to the descriptions of various places around the world while traveling. It actually made me feel worried. Very comfortable and relaxing! Very happy at the same time. When I read this book, I will always smile knowingly because of the occasional witty words or an unintentional sentence in the book. This may be the thing that retains readers and establishes your own writing style. After reading this book, I have always thought that if this book is slightly modified, there will definitely be a place for fantasy or science fiction in male videos. However, writing a thousand times is not perfect. After the beginning of the article, the transitions in some articles after the trip are too bland and fluid. The plot conflict is not obvious, and the writing always makes people feel that they cannot enter the world of the book. Unconsciously it can lead to some boredom. Also, while reading, the occasional emoji may feel novel at first, but it will affect the reading experience every time you reach the later stages. (Is it because men and women are different?) In addition, there are many long articles, which are quite laborious to read. And, the most important thing is, I can't read the taste of the opening chapter from the following articles 😥. (Is this because I was hurt by Qiao Qiao and Di Ze?) Final summary: The purpose of this book is clear and in line with the special design of sweet and pampering articles. The writing is smooth and does not feel jerky. The writing skills are profound and the descriptions are unique. The language is vivid and humorous, making people laugh out loud occasionally. You can tell at a glance that she is the female author. No typos have been found in the text. The author is hardworking and serious. Still have doubts: the writing style is a bit bland after the beginning, the straightforward narrative is a bit boring, and the plot conflict is not obvious, but it can be used to connect the plot. Ps: This book is worth reading. There are basically no poisonous points. The disadvantages vary from person to person. Come and join the trap of cultivating immortals and domineering CEOs in the last days. The above articles are for personal use only. If there are any similarities, they are quite coincidental.

In the dead of night, the song "Cunlv" of Hetu is playing on the computer, and the white smoke and faint fragrance of mosquito repellent incense floats leisurely on the coffee table. Although there are no mosquitoes, I think reading Canghai's books should require some burning fragrance. If there is no sandalwood, I use mosquito coils instead. I have read many people's comments about this book, but I have never read it seriously because I am always busy and I don't know why I am so busy. Tonight is the penultimate night before the Mid-Autumn Festival, and I am having trouble sleeping. I feel uncomfortable because the Mid-Autumn Festival is a festival for reunions, but I always spend it alone, and my parents don't want to cause trouble for them. Listening to music and reading a book is a perfect match when you feel uncomfortable, because there is a good reason to cry: the author's writing is so touching. Well, let's get down to business and tell stories. Chapter 1 is missing! So I started from the second chapter. After reading the testimonials, it turned out that this book has such a troubled past, so I agreed with the saying that good things come hard! How many words are there in the first chapter of Canghai You? I saw that the second chapter is nearly 5,000 words, the third chapter is more than 3,000 words, the fourth chapter is more than 3,000 words, and the fifth chapter is more than 3,000 words... Boss, please bear with me. If you look at the content, you will know that it is a coherent article, because I can't stop. The beginning is a bit sad, a bit tragic and a bit atmospheric. Qiao Qiao makes people feel distressed and comforted. Without reading the main text, I only knew that Canghai was very beautiful and worked hard during the show, but the post about the show did not show her strength. Only then did I realize that if God favors someone, he will always secretly give her a lot. For example, the sea is obviously so beautiful, why do you still need such a cute and cute magical power to control words? The article was written so smoothly and touchingly that I felt for a while that she was telling her own story. The previous plot made me cry and I was so sentimental. This bitch Wang Jian is really hateful, and that Xue Mei is also a complete green tea! Such people really do exist in real life, and there are many of them! So when I saw Qiao Qiao quickly severing ties with him after being resurrected, it was really a relief! Qiao Qiao is a woman who looks weak but is actually strong and unyielding. She is beautiful and kind, but she is only kind to her relatives and those who are kind to her. She is diligent, hard-working, and cares about all living beings. She is a perfect girl. That's why such a woman will be favored by God. She will have the support and companionship of a great god to practice, so that she can gradually become stronger and help those innocent people. Canghai's writing style really amazes me. The seemingly simple words contain a lot of emotions, whether they are humorous, playful, or simple and express strong emotions. She is like a cheerful flowing stream, showing us everything in the water. Sometimes it is crystal clear, sometimes it reflects the blue sky and white clouds, and sometimes the dark clouds cover the clarity. In this way, the story, characters, and background are expressed in various ways. Let us feel the author's joy, anger, sorrow and joy in different emotions, and feel sad for the characters in the book. People of different ages see different meanings in a book, and people with different experiences have different tastes. Therefore, everyone should taste it in their own way. Just be yourself in Canghai, and Qiao Qiao will naturally take care of you. Good night! Sweet dreams!

Introduction: Accompanied by a mysterious god and supported by space, he leads everyone to live a leisurely farming life in the apocalypse, only to discover that the earth is just a drop in the ocean, and it turns out that cultivation is the right way. Look at the sky with a smile, and turn your hands into clouds in the world of cultivation; look down upon the heroes, turn your hands into rain in the fairyland; and ask for the throne in the sky, who is the final winner! Book Review: A romantic relationship between a fairy couple in the apocalypse. The heroine was dismembered because of an unkind encounter. It was precisely because of this that the heroine met the hero, a powerful figure in the world of cultivation. The heroine is reborn. First, she kills the scumbag in her previous life with three strikes, five strikes, five divisions and two strikes. Then, she and the cold and handsome hero practice together to learn skills and fight zombies. They rush out of the earth and spend nine leisurely days together. The book starts in an apocalyptic environment with zombies everywhere, which sets the tone for the thrilling plot of salvation in the future. You can imagine what kind of fun it will be when a cultivator uses various spells to walk through the zombies. In addition, the author's writing style is good and the description of the scenes is delicate and perceptible, so he should be able to create various battle scenes well. This can be somewhat anticipated. Of course, if you want to read sweet love stories, this novel can also satisfy your interests. No matter how you look at it, the daily relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is a fatal blow to singles. The plot of the novel also progresses very quickly. Although there are many descriptions of trivial family matters, they only exist in the beginning. When the heroine truly steps into the ranks of cultivation and realizes a certain responsibility and sees many unknowns, such trivial matters should turn into exciting family and country events and life aspirations. As for the characterization, leaving aside everything else, just talking about the scumbag at the beginning and the cousin Bailianhua who is the heroine's friend, already shows the author's skill. Just a few simple descriptions make people want to get into the book and kick them hard. As for the shortcomings, I always feel that the male protagonist changes too quickly. He is a powerful person from ancient times. He should actually maintain his aloofness for a while and do it step by step, otherwise it will be easy for people to skip the scene. In addition, what I want to talk about is the author's segmentation. The paragraphs in the article are quite long, and I am a little tired from reading them. Ps: The above are all spoken by one family, please forgive me for inappropriateness!

First of all, I am happy to finally overcome my laziness and take action. Before this, I may have to explain that under normal circumstances, the cover, title and introduction of this book are not the type that I would read, nor is it the kind that would make me surprised and curious at first glance. _(: D)∠)_ So, I chose to go directly to the text. Status: Serializing Type: Fantasy Romance Number of words: 530,000 The opening story tells the story of when the doomsday comes, the scumbag man betrays the heroine, the heroine dies, and encounters a painting that was originally an artifact. The person living in it is not an old grandfather, but a murdered... Immortal? His name is Dize, his identity is unknown! _(´_`‖ ∠)_But it can help her be reborn! Going back to before everything happened, she was even able to start practicing. Hmm... After watching it for a long time, it turned out to be rebirth! _(: D)∠)_ After the rebirth, the heroine chose to tell her parents what happened because of the end of the world. She took her parents to practice together and kicked the scumbag in preparation for the end of the world. _(´_`‖ ∠)_ Although I don't really like to complain, I still want to say a few points. 1. The paragraphs are too long, and it is easy for people, such as myself, to lose the feeling of reading. 2. Symbols, I really want to talk about the dots "···" that appear frequently (in the previous chapters). I personally think it would be better to replace the ellipsis "...". Another thing is that the missing symbols after occasionally speaking make me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder. _(: D)∠)_ 3. The occasional emoticons always make me feel like I'm in a drama. Advantages: The author writes very well and describes some details very well. Although it starts off as a scumbag, the story is pretty good. In modern cultivation, this type is rarely seen. Generally, the fantasy I come into contact with is from another world. ╭(￣▽￣)╮ Because I only read ten chapters, it is not easy to evaluate, but later on, it seems to be a bit routine, which makes it hard for me to figure out where to focus? I haven't read enough, so I can't help but complain a little bit. The author, please forgive me! _(´_`‖ ∠)_

🐟: After reading it, I feel that this is a typical Eastern fantasy book for women (immortal cultivation series), with apocalyptic crisis and human corpse transformation. I thought it was a thrilling style of writing, but the author wrote it with a warm and everyday feeling. [Book title]: "Leisurely Aspiring to the Sky" [Author]: Walking across the sea [Type of work]: Fantasy romance [Number of words to read]: 5w [Rating]: 70 [Reviewer]: Wild Fish [Work Introduction]: Accompanied by a mysterious god and supported by space, he led everyone to live a leisurely farming life of fighting monsters in the apocalypse, only to discover that the earth is just a drop in the ocean. It turns out that cultivation is the right way. ; Look at the sky with a smile, and turn your hands into clouds in the world of cultivation; look down upon the heroes, go to the fairy world and turn your hands into rain; ask for the throne in the sky, who is the final winner! [Comment] [Impression of the work] "The world is facing the crisis of doomsday zombies, and the heroine is leisurely farming and fighting monsters to upgrade." The current background is mainly in modern cities. The end of the world did not come in 2012, but a few years later, the earth faced a zombie crisis. The female protagonist Qiao Qiao got a space by chance. With the help of the great male protagonist in ancient times, she fought monsters and upgraded her farming. She took her friends and family to cleanse their muscles and marrow, and embarked on the road of collective cultivation of immortality. The grade system of the work is based on the traditional realm of cultivating immortals. It is not too complicated to accept the foundation building and other things. Overall, this can be regarded as a refreshing article, a refreshing article for female videos. But there are still some problems. 👇 1. Being too caught up in the daily routine makes the writing style not grand enough. 2. The description is detailed, but too detailed will be cumbersome (explained in detail later) [Starting] "The beginning is very poisonous, and it is easy to persuade readers." The beginning is a very common scumbag man and scumbag girl, and then the heroine is betrayed and reborn, and she lives a golden finger story. There are so many such openings that it makes it less pleasant to read. In particular, the author is probably the type of person with rich life experience, and the description is very similar to the bloody scenes of modern cities. This is the biggest poisonous point of this article, and starting with this would discourage readers. 👇 This kind of start will inevitably lead to betrayal, the scumbag man loves the scumbag girl, the heroine is killed and reborn, and there are too many plots where she turns around and abuses the scumbag after rebirth. Those who have read a lot of novels and are used to the routines will run away as soon as they see something like this. Therefore, there is no need to be ruthless and innovation is very important. [Writing Style & Writing] "Delicate writing style and exquisite writing style" This is an advantage and disadvantage of this article. Whether it is the description of the scene, the description of psychological activities, or the description of the characters, the author has drawn them very delicately, and it can be seen that the writing skills are still good. However, most of the time, if the writing is too detailed, it will weaken the atmosphere of the plot. The description should be the finishing touch, rather than focusing on the things depicted. The most important thing for readers is the [plot setting]. Now, let's give a few examples to give the author a feel. 👇 1.The first paragraph at the beginning of Chapter 12: Description of psychological activities, this is about the heroine's feelings about life. It's best not to spend a whole screen writing words about insights and descriptions of psychological activities like this. Most of the time, readers will not resonate with long and insightful words, but concise and powerful words will please them more. It is recommended to compress it within three sentences, preferably into a one-sentence classic quotation. It will be easy for readers to read and easy to remember. You can refer to "The Master" for this, such as "If you like it, treat it all as glory, not show off" and "Glory is never a game for one person." 2. Chapter 13: Hair Cleansing, Page 9: There is a long introduction about Julie: from where she lives to what her children have done... It is strongly recommended that this kind of short introduction paragraph for parents should not appear. From a reader's perspective, what I want to see is how the female protagonist upgrades, how the plot develops, what might happen between her and the male protagonist, whether she will refresh the map, etc. I don't care about Julie, a necessary character, how many children he has in his family, and what happened to them. The author should clarify the "priority" when creating, predict what plot readers want to see most, and write more. Don't spend too much writing on plots that readers don't pay much attention to. 3.Chapter 15, Page 6: In the section about making wontons, the author writes very specifically how to make this wonton. When the author reads this paragraph, he can predict whether how to make wontons is something your readers care about. Readers reading novels will definitely not be interested in how you make wontons, so this kind of description can be simplified and simplified in the future. [Character] "All kinds of classic characters can be found in this article" As a fairy tale, the female protagonist must be a genius, and the male protagonist must be strong, paired with a scumbag who assists in slaps in the face and a white lotus who drives the rhythm. The characters of the male and female protagonists are actually pretty good. The heroine is not so powerful that she is perverted. She is a growth-oriented person who values ​​love and justice in her journey to immortality. The male protagonist is a gentle type who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. The ancient god has a contrasting cuteness, and he is naturally kind to the female protagonist and has nothing to say. A classic part in the article is that the heroine is in a bad mood and the hero has to coax her. The heroine accidentally mentioned that she wanted to "catch the moon in the sky, and catch turtles in the five oceans." The hero really took her to the clouds and mist, and to the sea turtles. But the author expressed this plot in just a few sentences, but this kind of plot is what readers want to see, and the author needs to focus on describing it, rather than specifically describing how to cook wontons and the like|･ω･｀) How did I abandon the author's book? It was because of Tang Bailianhua... The baby was scared. This character was too poisonous and scared me away. Finally, I would like to make a suggestion for revision. This book is full of super long paragraphs. It is strongly recommended to revise and re-split the paragraphs. Except for dialogue, a paragraph should not exceed 5 lines. When reading a book, the reading fluency and experience presented to the reader are very important. A long paragraph can easily cause visual fatigue and even skip reading. Especially for language such as worldview explanation and setting explanation, if it is not divided into paragraphs, it is easy for readers to receive information overload and create reading pressure. In this regard, the author can find a book with 1-3 sentences in a paragraph and a book with more than 10 sentences in a paragraph to experience it. You will find that books by authors with careful paragraphing will read more smoothly.

Everyone is welcome to discuss and give me your opinions! Accept it humbly🤭

The fragrance in Yugu Tower disappears, and the Tize picture in front of it teaches immortality. If you ask where the remaining soul's ambition is, leisurely aspire to reach the sky. This is a book that was born in the wrong child. A book that combines elements of the end of the world, cultivation, and farming is actually published on a female channel? However, the author has good skills, rigorous writing, and a decent reading experience. There is basically nothing that poisoned me. This book is a novel written by a female protagonist, with a hint of warmth amidst the plainness. There are several passages with profound writing, and it can be seen that the author has some background, which is worthy of praise. If the psychological activities of the supporting characters in the early stage can be streamlined, this work should be able to reach a higher level. Actually, I'm looking forward to the author's next work. After a million words, please go straight to Jiutian!

Strike while the iron is hot, Wenji's post was swallowed, I hope Sister Canghai's won't be swallowed again. After reading Xiao Mo's post next door, I especially want to say that the title of this book by Sister Canghai would have dissuaded me because I felt that I didn't understand what it was saying and I had no idea of ​​reading it. However, Sister Canghai is really too rich. She wants me to wait for the book review to get me some prizes, but I am wrong! Writing a review ~ Looking at the title of the book, I really thought it was an ancient book about cultivating immortals, but in the first chapter, what? Modern? There is also the end of the world, what, there are actually zombies? Chi Chi, who didn't read much, looked confused. The beginning of this book is a bit jarring, probably because the conflicting points are a bit blunt. Although it also makes people feel that the scumbag is hateful, the mistress is hateful, and the heroine is pitiful, the routine is really a bit old, so it makes people a little uninterested. Forgive me, I really don't like this kind of family ethics drama. Then the heroine was reborn. Yes, you read that right, reborn. The setting of rebirth is something I have never seen before. A stunning immortal is awakened by the blood of the heroine, and then casually saves the heroine. I have to say that Sister Canghai's writing style is really good. The scenes in the paintings are very detailed and have a strong visual sense. The following story is what we can all imagine. The heroine was reborn, started over, got rid of the scumbag, and began to embark on the broad road of cultivating immortality. Yes, we started cultivating immortality again! Surprised or not, unexpected or not, I really didn't expect it anyway. I haven't read many words at the moment, and it's hard to comment on the subsequent story development. I'll just briefly comment on the first ten chapters. Please forgive me if I'm right or wrong. After all, I'm just a bad book reviewer. First of all, when I was reading a book, I saw many readers mentioned this problem. The paragraphs were too long, which made people feel a little tired, but I believe that my sister must have improved in the later period ~ Secondly, the chapters are not short either. I once had a chapter with 3,000+ words. Later, a well-meaning friend reminded me that if the chapter is too long, it will burden the reader, make it tiring, and make it difficult to read. A chapter of 2000 words will also reduce the burden on the author, and the readers will not feel too tired, and the effect will be better. Sister can also make appropriate adjustments~ Of course, the advantages of this article are also very obvious, the unique setting, excellent writing style, and detailed description of the scenery, many places are very worthy of praise~ Finally, Amway, this is a very different urban immortality article, you can try it if you like it~~

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The author's writing is really good👍👍 At first I thought it was a post-apocalyptic novel, but as I continued reading I thought it was about cultivating immortals. After a few chapters, I returned to reality and began to change my past regrets. Could it be the city? Several elements are not contradictory at all under the author's arrangement, which is admirable! I haven't finished reading the rest yet, so I'll save it and chew on it slowly! Come on! 🪖🪖

Update quickly! I'm so lazy that I even updated it 😌

Learn from me and stop updating? Not good🔨

The happy weekend is coming to an end again, tomorrow is Monday again, full of classes 😭

Update soon, 3000 fans are worth it 😁

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I just don't understand why this book has a female video 😤😤😤

I just got the only monthly pass this month. I subscribed for a lot of starting coins to get a monthly pass. It's so difficult! Seeing that you are destined to me and are so cute, I will give you this precious monthly ticket. I am not happy, I am not happy 🤭

A fool like the heroine, who didn't know how to hide and hit the wall when her own man hit her, is really a bitch. There is nothing to write about such a person, she is just a loser.