Mudslide Among Singers

I would like to make some suggestions. The main character is a singer, but I feel that there is a little bit of content related to the song. A lot of it is just daily routine. I hope it can be improved.

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

Hahahaha, it's a very funny light novel-oriented book. Come on, the author.

A song collection hall is opened here, mainly some fresh folk songs, as well as youthful, inspirational, and popular songs about classmates and friendship. At the same time, fresh love songs can also be posted. ❤️❤️❤️🌹🌹🌹

， Books have genres, and readers also have genre preferences. I believe that many readers who clicked in at the beginning came because of the title of the book. There are two points that everyone wants to see. One is the story of the singer's reputation as a talented person, and the other is the story of the singer's mudslide in the entertainment industry. However, the author has written stories about singers who are good at pretending to be pens, but most of them are stories about crazy people in the circle of classmates around them, that is, daily life. This book is actually very well written, but it has the wrong audience. Those who like to watch entertainment cities may not necessarily like daily life. In other words, daily life is necessary, but the length cannot be so large. This book is too big in terms of daily life and too small in terms of singers. It can attract readers in an entertainment city, but it cannot retain them. Only a few of us who liked watching daily life stayed. The author should have reflected daily life in the title of the book from the beginning to attract readers who like to read about daily life. Rather than attracting readers who like to watch entertainment.

As mentioned in the first chapter of the book (added on April 2), I will open a separate floor to discuss what everyone likes or dislikes about each character. This character can be the protagonist, a supporting role, or even a passerby without a name. It can be considered a kind of interaction. But I also hope that everyone will not post content that has nothing to do with the characters. Thank you in advance. First of all, I personally like Lu Xiaoran the most. She is a self-reliant and self-reliant girl. Her shortcoming is that she has some grudges. Her character will slowly be revealed as the plot develops. As for the protagonist Yu Yue, he is a seemingly absurd but essentially kind-hearted boy. Not much description here. If you have a favorite character, you might as well tell us about it. 🤭

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It's too self-indulgent, the plot is fragmented, and it's not enjoyable to read. This is not how the story is told, and not every joker can write a good novel. Less jokes, more plot. When I saw the charge before it was put on the shelves, I couldn't help but feel unhappy.

Everything the author writes is good, but it's just too dull, and the daily routine is endless. The passion in the early stage is worn away bit by bit later, and in the end I can't pick it up, so I have to abandon the book 😭

I persisted for more than twenty chapters and had no idea what to write. .

It's too wordy. I'm not afraid of the word count, but I'm afraid of the boring nature of Shui.

The subject matter is good, but the pace is too slow. There are only 800,000 words in total. I have read almost a hundred chapters and have not yet gotten to the point. It is just a few brats playing around.

Occasionally skinning is okay, but every picture is skinned, and it takes up too much space, making it boring.

It's so childish. The first chapter can be summed up in one sentence: the protagonist inexplicably sang "Courage" by Liang Jingru in front of the whole class. If the channel is good in the second dimension, at least the style is relaxed and simple, and the audience will be much larger, but if it is in the city, it is not promising.

What is the style of this book? Is it funny? But I didn't laugh at all after watching it. The dialogue was too jumpy and completely incomprehensible, which made me feel like it was all nonsense and the plot couldn't be substituted.

Oh my god, this is too long. This first program has been written since more than 30 chapters. After more than ten chapters, I still haven't read anything. It's really uncomfortable, and my curiosity is being wiped out bit by bit!

Isn't the protagonist's father a fool? Don't use the family surname when naming your son, because he might not be Shi Lezhi. . . .

After reading too much, it feels so cumbersome. Skip to read later, there are too many daily routines, it's long and watery, and there's no useful information.

I was so trembling that I didn't finish the first chapter. It seems that this book is not suitable for me.

I read a section and it was too much nonsense. Is it as much nonsense as ants walking from Hainan to the Great Wall? I was anxious for a long time and I didn't see anything attractive.

Although the author's writing style is good and interesting, the writing is very out of tune. Unless you particularly like this style, you will soon become impatient and lose the patience to read it.

Apprenticeship is too much trouble, so why bother to arrange a life experience for Miss Xia? It was normal for Mr. Zhang to break up, but he dropped out of school and was not sad at all. Those who call their birthdays with compound surnames instead of "Little Fatty", then what do you mean by writing the first 200,000-300,000 words?

90% Of one chapter is the inner activities of the protagonist, and it's still a sand sculpture. After reading Chapter 8, I really can't stand it anymore.

Too little music, too much water. I can't stand it anymore, you are using water as the theme.

It looks okay. I haven't finished 166 yet, I'll save it for later. The rest is pretty good. The funny parts make me happy. Don't be ambiguous if you don't have a harem. It's very disgusting.

It's a mess and doesn't look smooth at all.