Lightning Knife

Writing about traditional martial arts requires some skill. No one will see you if you are a little bit close, have the courage!

Um, why can thirty-eight clicks become the first level? Why, I have already written 400,000, shady shady.

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I feel like your traditional martial arts writing still lacks some writing. As you read on, it doesn't feel like traditional martial arts. For example, in Chapter 4, the words "knight, justice, glory," appear. These words are Western vocabulary, and they will stand out when placed in traditional martial arts. Chapter 5, Taoist Priest Qingxu of Emei. The Emei sect does not talk about Taoism. The professional title of Emei is "Master Tai" or "Master". Only Wudang talks about Taoism. These are common sense mistakes. Read more books by great masters.

The author, the wording used in your work is a bit modernized, and the punctuation marks are not used well enough. It is a complete sentence, and then it is truncated with punctuation points, which affects the perception. Furthermore, the plot description is too exaggerated in some places, not like a martial arts novel. I have read part of it so far and it is good. I have the desire to continue reading. I hope the author can revise and polish the work.