Winning Strategy

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Check it out, read three chapters, and share your personal opinions. Firstly, I feel that there are some problems with your entry point. It is more appropriate to do the first chapter in the second chapter. After winning a fierce battle, it is more appropriate to discuss the settings in the second chapter. The background and family situation of the protagonist are more suitable. Secondly, the transformation of the protagonist is indeed a bit fast. You can omit the part about her sister. When introducing the background, directly mention that she failed in the college entrance examination and accidentally started to play games because of her sister. Then she had a little talent in the game. The joy and sense of accomplishment in the game made up for the depression and loss of her failure in the college entrance examination and her mother blaming her, and then she gradually went further and further on the road of gaming. Thirdly, I feel that the game text should not be mixed with too much dialogue, otherwise it will easily make people feel like they are making friends and chatting in reality, or it is mainly narration, supplemented by other dialogues. I have never played Honor of Kings, I have only played League of Legends, so I can't give you much advice. Don't mind my humble opinion, I always like to complain, haha!

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It feels like you have one chapter a day and I have five chapters, which is very uncomfortable.

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