Reborn Devil System

Overall, there is no big problem, but this punctuation mark is really uncomfortable. I hope it can be improved. The rest needs to be filled in.

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Collect decisively, come on, remember to collect from each other

Save 60W? You are also a talent! How could it be worse than me?

The punctuation problem in Chapter 1 is serious and it is recommended to revise it. There are slight missing words. Ma Wanzi recommends that the author check it himself.

Try poison🤓

"Double Star Day" return visit, collected

"Heshuanglu" is here to visit! Come on, author!

What a eunuch, I wasted a few days waiting

The plot can be more coherent, the character description can be more detailed, and if you are too pretentious, you can try some new tricks. To be filled in...

It is recommended that the overall pace in the early stage should be faster, and the details can be slower. It does not matter. In the later stage, the general rhythm can be slowly spread out, so that the details can be handled more carefully in the later stage to prevent the writing from getting boring as the writing becomes later.

Although it has been improved a lot than before,... This punctuation mark is still poisonous 😅 but the overall effect is much better than before.

6 Ah, I suddenly finished the book and gained more than 200 starting points.

Well, regarding this issue of punctuation marks... I feel like the latest chapter should have been improved, but it still looks awkward😅 This affects the reading experience... I suggest you read the correct use of punctuation marks 🙂