
Summoning Heroic Spirits from Another Time and Space
异时空英灵召唤
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- Completed
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- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
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- Qidian
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The protagonist is powerful, killing so many people on the battlefield in the early stage. He also said that Wan Shen was cruel. . I'm convinced, what were you doing when you killed someone?
Do you know why you jumped on the street? At the beginning, the protagonist has no chakra, but is interrogated like a ninja. Then the protagonist just has chakra, and he can kill a chuunin before he has mastered it, even if you have learned spear skills for a day... Then he falls in love with the daughter of a gangster scumbag boss with bad views - at first he said she ignored life, and then he was shocked by Hassan's death... The key is, why do you want to send this woman on a mission with Hassan? And isn't Hassan a hundred faces? Why did he die after being killed once? The most important thing is - the protagonist is led by the system like a dog! ! ! I won't go into details about the rest. The protagonist has become mentally distorted - he can even say "Killing a few people will save the majority, even if they are innocent people", and he also does it... He talks about justice, and then kills people indiscriminately... This is like a high school student driving a mecha shouting, "Don't hurt others anymore, and then kills all the enemies... They are all crazy, a holy mother bitch who is more terrifying than a hypocrite!"
I feel that the Heroic Spirits have been weakened too severely. Unless most of Naruto is very squishy in the later stage, he can't beat the Heroic Spirits. The King is still in such a mess at the beginning. The main thing is off topic. The title of the book is Summoning Heroic Spirits. In fact, the author thinks that the protagonist has been chased away. If he is weak in the early stage, he will not summon a bunch of Heroic Spirits to come out and build a position and then slowly run over them. He also strengthens himself while running. There are a few four- and five-star Heroic Spirits and Five Shadow Nagato.
One: Ninjas generally do not attack civilians, let alone Konoha's ninjas. Not meeting on the battlefield, not meeting during missions, but just showing up in the Land of Fire will lead to arrest? What logic~ After being judged to have no chakra and language barrier, there is no need to pursue it, because there is no element to become a spy at all. During the war, there are many people and they are idle. If there is suspicion, they will be killed, and they will be kidnapped back to the village? Second: When was the system activated? After being interrogated and humiliated by the prisoners, why did it meet the conditions at this time? Need the host's negative emotions? So why should we help the protagonist hide his memory when he is being interrogated when it is clearly not activated? No silver here? Third: Regarding the so-called uu thing, why is it that there is no novice guide when it comes out, and there is not even a reminder? He also claims that he has changed masters for 7 times, and the more he changes, the more he goes back? Don't you absorb any experience? Even if you want to use people as dogs, you still need to train and feed them~ Fourth: Because of the decision-making of a few people, you hate the entire village. From the beginning, you ask the heroic spirits to release the Noble Phantasm to kill people, and then you pretend to be a good person and don't open the Blood Temple to replenish magic? If you don't have this kind of consciousness, how about you escape on a flying horse at the beginning~Sudden time travel, inexplicable imprisonment, a system with unknown origins, when you encounter hope and there is a helper in front of you, just let it go just because of the momentary desire for refreshment and peace of mind? It seems that Medusa's barrier is not fatal Fifth: Energy system. ~What is the title of the book called Summoning Heroic Spirits in Different Space and Time, and what is the introduction? Travel. If the title of your book is called I Recruit Heroes in Naruto, I have no objection. From the looks of it, you seem to want to write about unlimited flow. So here comes the question~ Do you understand the essence of chakra~ Is it a simple matter of combining spiritual power and cellular energy~? The energy system of a world contains the unique characteristics of that world ~ very conspicuous ~ Chakra is the specialty of this world, or the specialty after the arrival of the sacred tree. The magic power of the moon-shaped world itself can be obtained by converting excess vitality. It is not an exaggeration to say that it is the easiest and most universal energy system to obtain. However, at the beginning, the system reward was not given to magic basics but to chakra refining technique? It's hard to believe that you, a person from another world wearing a suit, have farts qualifications for chakra refining. Rather than the system opening this trap for you, it would be more convenient to teach magic. Sixth: If the system does not intend to bind the host from the beginning, do not write the system. If you give a difficult task that even the main god space will not give out in the novice stage, it is equivalent to directly stating: you need to die! This kind of situation is not about trying to encourage growth, but directly preparing to eliminate the weeds. And as a system elf, being able to freely use the props of the system requires the host to do it! What: Rent props one-time without being able to obtain mission rewards in the future. Are you serious? I understand this is because I don't want the protagonist to become too strong all at once in the early stage. But don't block all the ways out at once~ It's like exchanging immediate benefits for the future, and what facilitates this transaction are system tasks and system elves. Does this imply that everything that happened was a systematic conspiracy? The change of mind mentioned by others later, I won't mention it until I see it, but with the twisted world view of the protagonist, I will laugh if I can recruit anti-heroic spirits in the future. There are a lot of problems in the early stage alone. It's all about the most fundamental settings and logical contradictions. This does not mean that you should expect the author to write like a master. Basically the narrative is relatively smooth. But it's not accepted at the fundamental level, so what's the use of branching out on top of it?
Did you remember a sentence when you saw the introduction: "Are you my masta?"
Just because he suddenly appeared and spoke a word of Chinese they didn't understand, he was arrested, and they couldn't even check whether he had chakra? Then Konoha will have to play sooner or later. The First Ninja Village couldn't even detect the presence or absence of chakra, so the sudden appearance would be strange at best. I must ask you how you appeared first instead of arresting you directly. Konoha is still relatively friendly. After all, you have written about the next three generations and still want to follow it.
What a wonderful imaginative setting, I was poisoned by the thunder after reading 30 chapters. When the protagonist escapes from prison at the beginning, he doesn't let King Daimao run on his back. He calls it carrying him on his back, which will affect the battle. This is also a logic genius. Before Konoha can react, who can catch you if you let King Daimao run on his back? You have to run slowly and wait for others to chase you, and then wait until you are almost cold before letting Daimao carry you. Originally, Daimao was still carrying you but was being chased by some chuunin. However, after you did so many things, you ended up being chased by the Hokage. It was simply ridiculous logic. Later, when Medusa only had one day left, she actually asked him to teach you how to use a gun. This is another piece of logic. What kind of magical talent do you have that makes you think that you can become stronger than a heroic spirit after learning a gun for just one day? Can't you let Medusa kill more ninjas to get 500 magic crystals to summon heroic spirits? Then if you force someone to learn how to shoot a gun in one day, you can kill a chuunin who has been training for many years. I collected more than two thousand magic crystals by relying on flash cards and did not summon heroic spirits to practice alone in the mountains. If you want to practice guns, you can summon Wang Jiang, if you want to practice swords, you can summon Kojiro, and if you want a beautiful woman, you can summon Medusa. In this way, you only need one thousand magic crystals for designated summons. As a result, the protagonist does not need magic crystals and has to practice blindly by himself. Later, the protagonist gathered 5,000 magic crystals to exchange for the Emiya Career Card. An Emiya Heroic Spirit is only four stars, and the designated summon only costs 2,000. As a result, the protagonist spent 5,000 to exchange for the Career Card and was convinced. Previously, he was thinking of switching to foreign objects on his own. In other words, the main character's halo prevented him from dying. In the early stage when the magic crystal was at its most dangerous, he did not try to save his life but used the lowest increase in combat power for some unknown NPC idea. The summary is that the author feels that the protagonist is too strong, and must first desensitize the protagonist so that he does not know how to use cheats.
Medusa's petrified magic eye is a gem-level magic eye that can forcibly turn objects into stone as long as they do not have B-level anti-magic power. Even if they have B-level anti-magic power, they will be suppressed and all attributes will be reduced by one level! In the world of Naruto without magic resistance, those below the sixth level are completely invincible! Do you need to run away to deal with a Hokage?
When I first read it, I felt that I had put the cart before the horse This book is about summoning heroic spirits, and it is about fgo. As a result, there are not many heroic spirits. The protagonist is learning ninjutsu and picking up Naruto girls. The protagonist is just watching super gods, samurai fights, and heroic spirits. The protagonist is trying his best What is the essence of the summoning text? It's a summoned character, not the protagonist. . . As a summons article, without those familiar characters, what else is there to watch?
I suggest
I suggest that the next stop is God Killer, Bloodthirsty Attack, A Certain Scientific Railgun, Date A Live, Magic Forbidden, Academy Apocalypse, and Academy City 😄
I really like the subject matter of this book, but the emotional scene is really toxic...
Motherly tendencies
If killing people can make you stronger, what's wrong with killing everyone in the Naruto world? The protagonist's enemy is not Konoha, but the entire ninja world. The difference in the power system destined the protagonist to be peeped by others. This is a war between the two systems. The reason why the protagonist was caught and locked up is because the entire ninja world has such twisted customs. It is the same no matter which ninja village the protagonist is near. The people here have nothing to do with the protagonist. They all live a useless and aggrieved life. What qualifications do they have to show mercy? Kindness and compassion are the things that only the strong have the power to give alms. It is a funny joke to say that you should not kill ordinary people. No matter you are truly kind or just a hypocrite to show readers, you will be despised by others. Our flower-growing army fights abroad and kills the elderly and children. If you let ordinary people go, they will stab you with their backhand.
Contrary to the title, the Heroic Spirit is of no use at all. The protagonist learns ninjutsu. Pick up the Hokage girl. Heroic Spirit Cheerleaders. Very weak.
If you knew that my king was so weakly written by him, you would definitely cancel this book.
I want to say that Da Mao can use hard steel to deal with magical power. Hiruzen Sarutobi knows a few S ninjutsu.
The only person who can control many servants with different personalities is Fujimaru Ritsuka. The protagonist's method of doing things is not much different from that of Group A. Since you, the author, have introduced the element of fate, you must make good use of it. I personally think there are only two good directions for Fate fandoms, one is funny and takes the comedian route, and the other is more ideological. The protagonist's current state corresponds to the saying that when you stare into the abyss, the abyss is also staring into you. Fujimaru Ritsuka or Hyena would never choose the way the protagonist behaves in the beginning. So I hope that the protagonist will not win in the end and get the happiest ending.
It's not without reason that the author slams every book on the street
I still don't know who the heroine is? ? ? ?
Don't you think the ability system has completely collapsed?
It feels poisonous. He was inexplicably captured and had his memory read. King Da Mao couldn't defeat the third generation. He trained with Medusa for one day and was able to kill ninjas. A novice who had no chakra and only practiced spears for one day was able to kill ninjas... Later, he actually said that he would not strengthen himself and only wanted to train himself. Because the mission character ran into the village, he directly destroyed the village with fire. Later, he found reasons to say that this was the right thing to do. The author You succeeded in disgusting me. The character's target is in the village. Can't he wait for someone to come out or sneak in to assassinate him?
The subject matter is good, but the content is not. My early life is almost gone, so what dignity do I need?
Is there a female protagonist? Who is the heroine? Single heroine or harem?
I thought I could still watch it, but it turned out that I really couldn't watch it when I gave it to my daughter. .
I just wanted to ask, author, when will you update?
What would happen if La Er met Louis XIV?
Well, I came in because of the theme of summoning, but the book reviews said it was a self-pleasure story disguised as a summons. Well, I'm going to take a look. If it's really what the book reviews say, I'll withdraw it.
Does it make sense that the Otsutsuki clan in Naruto are more god-level servants? For example, Scathach Skadi and Ivan the Terrible, the kings of the Lostbelt?