Weird Flight

See Chapter 32 If you like refreshing articles, you can take a look, the traditional unlimited streaming protagonist A bit of a sidekick who has some brains pretends to be in front of the protagonist, his sanity is -100, and is dead The rich second generation who has no brains pretends to be in front of the protagonist. It seems that the hat is green, and he should be dead. There is a beautiful girl whose father is missing and is friendly to the protagonist. She is currently alive The key is that the protagonist has a god-sister who is terminally ill and as beautiful as a flower The drug test is over, over

The plot is a bit uncomfortable and feels a bit stiff.

I got tired of writing about the main god, so I changed it to a plane with zombies.

The alternative main god is infinitely terrifying? ? ? ? ?

If you want to write a sister line, just write it. It doesn't feel good to intersperse other girls. When writing, the author can also make up a random strong woman. She can't always say "Ah, what should we do next for the protagonist?" "Ah, I can't run anymore. Let's go quickly, the protagonist." And other weak women. Not everyone has low IQ and low psychological endurance. It's really not possible to pass on a few sentences with low IQs, just keep the ones with high IQs. You can write about several people with high IQs arguing with each other and reasoning. Also, people's hearts are evil, everyone knows this and there is no need to emphasize it repeatedly. For emotional scenes, please note that writing about emotions is the most taboo in novels. What's good? A few words and the preceding text can touch the heartstrings, but no matter how you write it badly, it will be embarrassing. And this book defines supernatural suspense. So it should focus on reasoning and supernatural. It is better to watch a few high-IQ and powerful reasoning than to watch a few low-IQ and listen to the protagonist. Nowadays, this kind of forced prominence of the protagonist is not very popular. Don't troll me, thank you! 🤫

Horror ghost flow, consistent routine.

I only watched the beginning, and the atmosphere was okay.

After reading so many mission supernatural books, this book is indeed very good.

It's great that horror and suspense novels can have the protagonist be a teddy stallion with a low IQ.

Admire this book, a horror novel brought to life as a pile driver. This is no longer a harem, this is called seeing one after another.

I persisted in reading the current fifty-two chapters. I personally feel that I will not read any more. As a horror novel, it is not very scary. The main reason is that many plots in the novel are not logically logical. When I read it, I often feel that something is wrong. If you think about it carefully, you will find that there are many contradictions in the plots of the previous and later articles. Then It is a character, and the main reason is that the contradiction is prominent. The former temperament changes suddenly in the later part, and it is very abrupt. Many times it makes me feel that the character is forced to have certain lines and settings for the sake of plot development. Personally, I think it is best for the character to have distinctive characteristics when setting it, with both advantages and disadvantages. Don't say a sentence. After making a sentence, even if the character changes, there should be a process. It is not done overnight, or even in one sentence. There are also some common sense issues. I hope the author can understand them well. After reading Chapter 52, there are already many things that make me complain. A civil aircraft with more than 20 seats, with hair and exquisite hair. Leukemia patients with fair faces, nurses' uniforms with sexy black stockings, etc. These things are not state secrets. It is better to check the information on the Internet than to write it down so that people cannot bear to look at it. Regardless of whether you are a full-time writer or not, taking the characters and stories you create seriously is the greatest reward for your readers. In the end, I hope that the novel will get better and better.

Come on, author! I hope it can become popular... There are so many new books in the supernatural area recently... This is just like the game area now likes to watch live broadcasts of horror games...

What I wrote before was okay, but when I got to the academy, I felt like it had changed.

Forget it, the IQ of the supporting characters is really not online.

After reading the first story, I wanted to ask, the food was frozen, and I lay in the bathtub all night, but the water didn't freeze.

The author's backing is so tough, the supernatural things in my bookshelf are basically dead.

It smells scary at first, but most of the time it doesn't feel scary at all.

It's quite interesting, but can the protagonist not be too arrogant... Every time I see a scene like this, I'm speechless, and it drags the protagonist's character down more than one point. Furthermore, the slap-in-the-face plot of "a pretty girl falls in love with an awesome ordinary guy" is too cliche, as if the soul has traveled 2000 years, which greatly weakens the plot and affects all the new ideas that appear later.

The last few chapters seem a bit awkward. I suspect that the king is his girlfriend, and the reasons are a bit deliberate. If it was the first two times I participated, it could be like this, which is more like ordinary people's thinking. But the protagonist is already relatively experienced. The king has participated in several games in this chapter, and it is time for him to grow. He also said that the protagonist is an ordinary person and cannot see progress.

Looking at it now, I feel that this current heroine will definitely bitch the protagonist hard.

This is a good new book. The author should not be influenced by book reviews and write according to his own ideas.

After reading the first chapter, Ai Zhixue suddenly lost his IQ and his personality suddenly changed, leaving him speechless.

Didn't anyone complain about the university instructor Wang Hua? Moreover, the protagonist received two million in the first mission, and he had to raise six to seven million in one month for his sister, and went through two ghost missions. In this case, why should he be slapped by an instructor? Still bowing to him? Let's modify it.

I feel that this pig's foot is so strange. It was so realistic at first, but then my sense of justice exploded.

I went there, only to find that I couldn't find this book in a direct search. Has the Great River Crab passed by?

A bunch of trolls. Authors can write whatever books they want. It doesn't concern you. It's not your book. It doesn't matter this or that. If you want to read, read it. If you don't, just leave.

Are flights also based on flight schedules now?

Isn't it just half of the writing? The rest of it was compressed and finished in two days. . .

God damn ban, it's funny

What is going on in the first mission? How did the protagonist come back to life? I haven't understood it after watching it a few times. Can anyone explain it to me?