My Personal Dream Game

I have been a bookworm for 13 years and have read basically all kinds of books, good and average. Now I'm basically not addicted to it because I can't find a good book, but this book gives me the feeling of a small bridge. There is no exaggerated and gorgeous language, but the story is just right. There is a touch of warmth in the plainness. The pull of love is well controlled. It should be said that it can be ranked in the upper middle of the books I have read. I like it very much. It is this kind of painless feeling. Although it has a bit of the flavor of Infinite Literature, it is not focused on it. What I see is feelings. Love is hidden in Infinite Literature, and ordinary life is buried in emotions. Hehehe, I like this book very much. I really hope that there will be no eunuchs and bad endings. The author must control the overall situation. This is very important. There are many books that are very exciting in the early stage. However, in the middle stage, the story line is not sorted out, and the whole novel ends up being nondescript. Maybe I have read too many novels and my vision is too picky. When I see a good book, I just want it to be good all the time.

A divine book was written to death by the author. Reality develops too slowly. Dreams carry too much weight. The development of reality is too Buddhist and does not conform to the cool points of most men. It has been a year since I got the plug-in and I am still opening a noodle shop in the real world. Speechless😒ah

The early stages of this book really felt like it was about to become a god. It was the first time that a novel could arouse my emotions in the first 29 chapters. But in the later stages, the more I watched it, the weirder it became, the more uncomfortable it became, and the development of the plot always had an inexplicable sense of estrangement. This feeling has gradually developed since the third dream when I met Bai, and now I am no longer unhappy. I've always wondered why novels with such good character development always seem to make me feel uncomfortable, and I just suddenly figured it out. The character of the male protagonist Chen Xu is really fucked up! He doesn't mean what he says, has excessive self-esteem, is selfish, has low self-esteem, and cannot recognize himself. In reality, he always lacks the courage to face problems, and even needs women to push him away. Judging from his words and deeds, he has not actually loved any girls. He is only moved by them, not in love! He is not a straight man! Not a true gentleman, let alone a villain. He is just a loser and hypocrite, and he always thinks that he is a different kind of firework! Such a man is sorry for being so moved! Such a man is not worthy of these three women who love him so much. Even if he has a dream device, even if one day he becomes the most powerful person in the world and is as rich as any country, I still say that! He is not worthy of the most sincere touch brought by this purest love!

Brothers, I can't stand it anymore. It's Chapter 53 and I can't hold it anymore. To be honest, the first dream, from beginning to end, really has the potential to be a divine book. In my opinion, as far as the first dream is concerned, it has the potential to become a god. The author is really too impatient. I am not disgusted with the harem, nor am I disgusted with single heroines or no heroines. In my opinion, no matter what type, just As long as you can write it well, that's your skill. Personally, I'm very surprised. The first dream was written so well and impeccably. If Luo Xiyun's emotional line could be dealt with first, it would really be a god. But the author didn't deal with it until the beginning of the second dream, as if it was unfinished. Maybe the subsequent scenes rounded it out, but as far as I'm concerned Generally speaking, I have reached the limit of my patience after reading Chapter 53. I really can't hold on any longer. What a great book. I am still immersed in the ending of the first dream. Luo Xiyun jumped on the cliff and was immersed in the touching feeling of taking Chen Xu home in the snow. This topic is about Chen Xu's masculinity towards her, and my sincere smile after deleting the study materials. There are just a few dozen pictures, but So far, what I remember most clearly and profoundly is that I was really immersed in the first dream. I really, really felt too much reluctance to say goodbye to the first dream. It is no exaggeration to say that it was like saying goodbye to an old friend whom I had not seen for many years, and after saying goodbye, I would never see each other again in this life. Phew~ There are so many things I want to say in my heart, forget it, let's stop here! Go smoke a cigarette. Alas, Luo Xiyun, so cute, respectable, and pathetic!

After seeing Chapter 110, give the author a thumbs up! Next, let me talk about my reading process: First of all, I started reading, thinking it was something like infinite streaming, the kind of book that upgrades to defeat monsters and dominate the world. Then, when I saw the end of the first story, holy shit (｀Δ´)! It's different from what I imagined. The author's writing style doesn't say much, but the protagonist's emotional line explodes! ! ! At that time, some people in the book review section were also saying that he was a scumbag and disgusting. Then~ Well, it smells so good! Now I am writing to the end of the second story. In the transition plot, the author said that it is a story that the protagonist and three women have to tell 😰. I hope it will not collapse later! The following is my personal opinion, don't criticize it if you don't like it: This is a book that sells "science fiction" as a sheep and sells "love" as dog meat. Among the bunch of fighting and killing novels at Qidian, it is a strange tree that is growing well. Nowadays, many men's novels do not write emotional lines in detail. Why? Because for novices, the threshold for writing love lines is high, difficult to deal with, and the easiest place to get poisonous. Moreover, the requirements of readers are also high now, and it is difficult to adjust according to everyone's opinions. The love line is a fighter that is difficult to adjust! The emotional line of this book is handled very well. How should I put it? The character of the protagonist and his attitude towards women are exactly what I want. Some of them are in line with the feelings of today's otakus. So far, the female characters have been handled well and have outstanding characteristics. In addition, the author's plot design is not bad, and it complements the emotional line, making people want to read it. Personal summary: This book is not suitable for those who are busy fighting and killing and want to keep their families together. Suitable for old bookworms and people who want a goddess but don't want to be a bitch! Ah ~ the author must not collapse! Finally, since I have written so many words, please add more details! ! ! 😡😡😡

Do you know why your works are not popular? None of your works has more than a million words. You used to write very well, but suddenly you announced that you would start a new book. This book was very good, but you did not stick to it. If you rely on writing books to make a living, I don't think this career is suitable for you. You'd better find a job honestly and treat writing books as a side job to make some extra money. If writing books is just a hobby for you, don't expect it to bring you a high income. If you really love writing books, please don't be half-hearted and concentrate on writing a book. Don't find out that the results are not good in the middle of writing and start a new book. This will distract you and make it impossible to write a good book. When you find that the results of the next book are not good, you will start a new book. It is impossible to succeed. There is a filter in the starting point category. When reading books, many people directly look for books with more than one million words. Because less than one million words gives people the feeling that the story has not been fully developed, so many people do not like to read books with few words. Of course, except for those who like short stories. However, the story you wrote is obviously a long one, the subject matter is well chosen, and the writing style is not bad. Judging from the foreshadowing in the book, there is still a lot to write later. However, if you can't insist on a million words, it is the biggest failure. I hope you can finish this book. Here are some comments and suggestions from a reader.

The author's writing style is very good. I couldn't stop reading the first 500,000 words of the novel, especially the description of emotions. It is amazing. However, after advancing the dream system beyond online games, the quality of the novel dropped off a cliff, and it can be said that it went from a masterpiece to mediocrity. I suggest the author abandon the book and reopen it. . . .

A work that can enshrine gods has been written to death. I know that the author wants to write back to the protagonist's feelings when he writes back to the past. Actually it's not necessary. As long as the protagonist keeps running forward, in the end the woman can only succumb to such a simple truth and play the role of literary youth and finally write herself to death.

First of all, the author is a eunuch. Secondly, here are my reflections. I define this book as urban emotional harem literature. Urban: Because the author's science fiction/superpower writing is mediocre, except for the knowledge learned, it does not have much promotion effect on the plot. The existence of dreams is to promote the relationship between the characters, nothing more, and I think it is only necessary. Therefore, there is no reason to give negative reviews to the alien part. It is not necessary at all. Writing a good emotional main line is better than anything else. Emotion: The characters are well created, the motivations are sufficient, the performance is reasonable, and there are some real feelings about ordinary life that add a lot of points to the work. Harem story: The three people are not too much and not too little. Although there is still a certain facial expression, due to the excellent emotional description and sufficient plot, each character is quite three-dimensional (except the singer, who is a bit of a tool, but I think it is completely possible to increase the difficulty of conquering her in the final game, making her the most difficult person to conquer without a system, thereby increasing the depth of the characters) The two heroines are business enemies and the relationship is handled very cleverly. In the end, it can also be written as Business Win-Win Realization 3. . . Ahem, realize the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation! In short, I think this book Eunuch is very wrong. The author is asked to think twice.

Reading through the book reviews, I found that everyone had similar feelings to me. It's a pity that the first copy was so well written

I couldn't stand it when I read Chapter 50. The first part was so well written, but the second part is starting to get disgusting? Looking back, I feel uncomfortable and want to vomit.

I strongly suggest changing the title of the book to "How a Scumbag is Made" (ಡωಡ)

The first two women are well written, but the big star in the back is a bit perfunctory. The emotional scenes after that are also pretty good, and I can accept the aliens. I can feel that the author wants to build a story about the rise of urban technology, and then go out of the solar system to meet aliens. I think the Zerg is a foreshadowing. If the author can still write, he will explode the army in the city, and the technology will explode and then fight against the Zerg. However, the pace is too slow. The author can't control it at the end of the writing, or he may be vomiting. The last long copy Starting over,,,, this is definitely because of the author's eunuch. I don't understand why there is no copy to write. There is no reader who would like to read it again, so I just skipped it. When I got to the last one, I felt that the eunuch must die a good death.

Confirming look: Well, the most attractive aspect of this book is probably the cover. To be honest, the title is not a good one. The reason why the cover attracts me is the two words "good-looking" (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵)... Reader: Xiao Liangliang is irresponsible! Shallow! (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻ Story background: modern city. (Dream). Story style: emotional entanglement + reality... Before commenting, I want to say that dreams are still dreams after all... Regardless of prosperity and prosperity. , Rise to the top of the world... Easy or poor? When you wake up from the dream... This is just a "dream", then leave the good things in your memories, and forget the bad things in the dust. Finally, if the dream comes true, then please don't let it go. . Brief review: At the beginning of the story, the protagonist is an ordinary office worker. During a company dinner, the protagonist awakens to the system. The function of the system is to take the protagonist into a dream and experience things that cannot be experienced in reality. After experiencing the day after getting the system, the protagonist finally planned to enter the dream and break his boring original life. When you are the only one left in the world, how will you survive? Then, when I found her? , I still stick to my heart? What should I do when I hear her words? Maybe there is a trace of stubbornness in my heart. When the storm comes, it breaks our hearts. When it's balanced. Until the end, maybe, the answer is not perfect. When I close my eyes, I don't see the ending. But when I know the ending? The first story is over... Summary: Oh, Although there are some bugs in the story, I highly recommend this book because the emotions are overwhelming and the emotions are well written. Moreover, her memory should slowly awaken. Maybe, this is the Three Lives Three Worlds in the movie. When they meet again, they will. I won't let go. Well, this is a great story, I highly recommend it. I originally only wanted to read the previous article, but I accidentally finished reading the first story... Well, I need to calm down, after all, the emotional fluctuations are a bit big (/ω＼)...

It is better to forget each other in the rivers and lakes than to help each other. The relationship between the protagonist and Luo Xiyun in the apocalypse when there are only two of them is true in the apocalypse, but it would be so ridiculous if brought to reality. At that time, even if there was a slightly worse male Luo Xiyun, he would not like the male protagonist. The arrogant attitude waiting for a price is Luo Xiyun's ugly true face, but she has to hide it in the apocalypse. When she returns to reality, Luo Xiyun will reveal her ugly true face again.         ，， Of course, they will not separate in the end when they return to reality, but that is just because the protagonist has become better. In the end, the so-called sincere feelings are just the right match.

It was okay at first, but the quality of the plot plummeted later on. Also, the protagonist clearly said that he would not find people in reality to enter the dream, but later he still attracted people in reality. Also, I don't like harems. The protagonist's IQ was forcibly lowered, and it was only after the third dream that he realized that the heroine in the dream was real, not the system AI. I always feel like the protagonist is such a scumbag, even though he is in love with Yang, he still messes with Bai. In short, this book is generally good and the subject matter is novel. Slipping away. 🙂🙂

The protagonist of this book has the characteristics of a scumbag. When he doesn't see clearly that dreams can reflect reality, he just scans a beautiful woman into the dream. It doesn't matter, it has nothing to do with reality anyway. But the protagonist gradually discovers that dreams can reflect reality, and women who enter the dream can recall the stories in the dream, which is very profound, but the protagonist still attracts new people into the dream. Scan once, low-end computers have backup and storage, and you need to access it directly next time. The protagonist's dream golden finger doesn't even have such low-end functions. How can it shape the entire dream world? The entire dream world can be shaped, and even weird abilities in reality can be realized, such as precise throwing, endurance, and other innate abilities. The story is very good, but it is not the same. The protagonist is naturally the king in the dream and the waste in reality. This kind of protagonist also thinks about three wives and four concubines in reality, constantly provoking the charming Bai Fumei. Whether the protagonist is an active scumbag or a passive scumbag, it cannot change the characteristics of the scumbag described by the author. In the real world, what good results can be achieved by having a high-quality, high-capacity, and super-charming girlfriend who is powerless? ? ? Various challenges come one after another, and then troubles continue, and the protagonist's little wallet is drowned at the beginning! If the protagonist in this book, Goldfinger, has unlimited abilities, can shoot quickly in real life, and is not afraid of hot weapons, who cares how many beauties you provoke? Anyway, it can be pocketed, but it is not a very realistic style. But after writing this book, was it destined to be a realistic style? There is no super power, no energy release, no martial arts cultivation, and no quick attack. The protagonist still has an awkward personality, and his family owes hundreds of thousands in debt that has not been paid off for more than ten years. Then? He slept with two group heirs, fell in love with a popular actress, and provoked middle school students on the street. In the story, the starting salary was 4,000 yuan and there was no overtime pay. After three dreams, I opened a small noodle shop, which was progress. However, who provides the financial support for this so-called progress? Your boss gave you a promotion, a salary increase, overtime pay, and a backdoor year-end bonus of NT$50,000. Have you forgotten all about it? In reality, without the opportunity provided by the first dream girlfriend, the protagonist is still a scumbag who can live for half a month on 500 yuan...

The author comes back and writes! The new book is meaningless

I kept reading until I saw 252. I just couldn't stand it anymore. If you have multiple boats, you just write it down clearly and arrange it. It's annoying, this Luo was at odds with her at first and now she wants to break up. There is also a relative who obeyed and left without saying a word. The protagonist is like an orphan, thinking blindly, and now he comes back to make trouble. I really don't understand what tragic things the author went through to make his ink like this? If you love, you can love vigorously, and if you divide, you can divide them easily. In the harem, all the heroines should be brainless. If you only have a single heroine, you should choose another one and find an excuse to arrange it.

I don't know why there are more "psychotic" protagonists now. If you don't break out in silence, you will perish in silence. Jiujiang Chen Dachui broke out in silence. And Chen Jiuri perished in silence. Yes, the protagonist is a mentally ill person who combines extreme low self-esteem, social phobia, and depression. He compresses and closes stress and self-madness, waiting for self-destruction. The protagonist is more terrifying than Chen Dachui. Chen Dachui is obviously bad but doesn't hold it back. This one is holding in a time bomb with all his strength. After all, there was a golden finger issued by the "educational platform", which circled him to a place where no one could see him to vent his stress. However, after returning to reality, this weakling found a shell and shrank up again. It was really hopeless.

I stayed up late and read two copies. After watching the first copy, I immediately handed in three recommendation votes. The various emotional scenes between the protagonist and Luo made me say it was wonderful. After reading the second one, I wanted to get my recommendation ticket back, so I quit and looked at the table of contents. I almost understood what it was about in the third copy. The protagonist is indeed very real, but can't you give him a dedicated character? Isn't it possible that no man in the world can be dedicated? Author, do you want to force this kind of plot? This is the wonderful opening match, the feeling of ** in the later stage, it is really funny.

This should be written as another genre of harem style, but it's a pity that the author has entered the harem

It's so disappointing. I thought that after writing the star dream of "Rebirth", the three heroines would have this memory to rejuvenate the plot. Or skim off the alien line and cut off the tail quickly! As a result, you asked them to go back to grandma's house again and become eunuchs! There is no room for imagination! Isn't this deliberately disgusting? Bye-Bye! Never seen again!

Only the first dream can be written. What kind of knowledge will be instilled later to poison the artificial intelligence chip? Strong artificial intelligence is not achievable, so if you like to let the system be built, it will be over. If you have to let colleges and universities create every detail, it is crazy.

The author just starts high and goes low, which is equivalent to quitting as soon as he entered the state and unable to write anymore. The same is true for several other books.

The content is very exciting, but I don't recommend you to read it because it's about eunuchs! Why the hell are so many eunuchs in the finished book? Can you use some snacks?

I've been waiting for six months, but still no update?

When I saw this book today, I felt that the name seemed a bit familiar. After opening it, the content became more familiar. When I thought about it carefully, I remembered that I read it on QQ Reading in 2019 and wrote my first book review in my life. It was really my first book review and it was a contribution to this book. I remember reading the previous paragraph at the beginning. , It was really one of the few books that I could read at that time, and it was also a book that I wanted to read. However, I didn't finish reading this book. It was probably about one or two hundred chapters in, and something poisonous appeared. It may be really poisonous, or it may just be poisonous to me. I clicked on what I disliked the most, so I gave up the book, but I have one thing to say and after that, I have now read the previous chapters. The writing is really good, at least it is in line with my taste. Now I will try to read the next chapter and see if I can still read it. For me, I gave up the book in 2019 because it was too toxic. Let's see if I have a different feeling after reading this book two years later. I will try to finish reading it, but if it is really too toxic, I still won't be able to persevere 🤭

Is there something wrong with some people? This is just a dream, okay? Is there something wrong with promoting dream writing? Moreover, there are so many quick and refreshing articles on the market. This kind of rhythm, descriptions from multiple perspectives, and even stories like going back and falling into dreams again are really eye-catching. Can you remember the kind of garbage articles that only know how to be happy and refreshing after reading them? This book was not written to death, it was killed by you idiots who have no sense of aesthetics and only know how to vent {"NickName":"Blue World","UserId":124481711}

Now I am talking about reading it for the second time. When I reached Chapter 50, I found a very uncomfortable point. It was very difficult for me because at the end of the first dream, the author's description of Luo Xiyun was really great! It really makes people sigh from the bottom of their hearts: it is so well written. I was really surprised at the end. Even after reading it for the second time, I was moved. But then the problem was exposed. The time went too long. By chapter 50, I was already feeling irritable. Maybe the author had his own ideas, but hey CP's heart has begun to get irritated, and the time has stretched too long. Personally, I really want them to get together, but the most annoying thing is this. Both of them know that the author has not arranged to pierce this layer of window paper, but it is getting thicker and thicker. Maybe the author had other plans, but at this time it really annoyed me as a reader. I thought this was a poisonous point, and I really wanted to abandon the book, but the author's description of Luo Xiyun made me really reluctant to leave. Let's go ahead and take a look! If you really don't want to arrange for them to be a couple, just give up. The above are some of my thoughts after reading Chapter 50. They are just what these 50 pictures describe. They do not represent what is described in the book later, but only represent my personal thoughts.