My Way - Not Alone

After reading this book, I took a long breath, gently put down my phone, and caressed the smooth screen. The soft sunlight shone gently on the top of my head, forming a circle of light. Facing the bright sunshine, I closed my eyes and returned to the various plots in the book. It seemed like a misty mist, leading me to the front of time and space.

Hmm... When will the new book be released?

I think I can apply for physical publication, because the writing style of this novel has gone beyond the scope of fast food articles, and it would be a pity to publish it online.

I have read several chapters, and it should be written in a slow-burning style, similar to a mortal slowly cultivating immortality. Well, it seems that there are several wrong punctuation marks and the paragraphs are too long. The most important thing is whether the dialogue can be separated. The dialogue between the father and his son in the first chapter is in one long paragraph, and it seems that it is not clear who is following whom.

Reported by Lao Chuangjun, the author said I love you, it's so well written! Characterization is like being alive

Good ambition, looking forward to more exciting things

I felt good after reading it. The author's writing style is always online, and the whole book is full of essence without water content. The writing and rhythm are very well controlled, and the article is not tiring to read and is relatively easy to read. It satisfied most of my imagination about martial arts and traditional martial arts.

I once had the privilege of secretly reading such a wonderful book, but I didn't reward it at that time. Now that I think about it, I feel exhausted mentally and physically. I decided to change this life, and I want to reward this book! Congratulations, this book has finally come to fruition!

By the way, why is it not good to put "extra" in the ending speech or something "related to the work"? Ps. I will kill it when I finish watching the drama.

Upholding the unity of heaven and earth and all things is the way of heaven. Your way is the right way of humanity. It cannot be the great way of heaven and earth. In the end, it is the immortal ear of human beings!

Accepted, accepted from each other, encouraged together

The recommendation tickets for Diandianquan have arrived! A bit late though.

After reading two chapters, I felt that the writing was really good, so I collected it first. Although your data is similar to mine, you are definitely better than me, because you have already signed a contract, and I don't know if I can sign it yet!

The update is out of reach, it's over too quickly!

It's less than 50,000 words, but you've already finished it 🤫

There are two votes, vote for you 🤓

Congratulations on finishing this book, and I hope the new book will be released soon.

The mutual review is here. First of all, thank you to the author for your great evaluation of my book so that I can improve it! This book is okay overall, but some problems do exist in the author's closing remarks! 1. The previous plot is relatively dull and the main line of the article - the pursuit of martial arts - is not clearly highlighted in the first three chapters. 2. The protagonist of the article does not have very outstanding characteristics (that is, attractive characteristics). The characterization is not very obvious. The protagonist's personality is not clear. The psychological description should be added a little 3. The conflict is not strong, and the description of twists and turns and conflicts needs to be strengthened. But the author is great, and what he writes later is much better. The overall use is excellent, the language is fluent, the plot is fluent, and you can tell that an outline has been written. Overall rating 3.8ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

I've been updating very frequently these days!

I think it's great! 😜 The writing, rhythm, and plot are all excellent, and there are no typos. I just feel that the language in the opening part of Peach Blossom Spring could be more concise if possible. After all, many people have read Peach Blossom Spring 😜 Finally, I personally feel that the paragraphing can still be paid attention to, and the rest is great! Come on, the author, you can actually write more. The more you write, the more people will read it! Then, add it to your favorites! If you have a little money, come back and support us by giving rewards! Finally, I am a fan of my humble work "The Book of the Underworld". It would be great to give me a review with your extraordinary writing style!

How should I put it? This book is a traditional martial arts book. Speaking of traditional martial arts, I can't comment on it. I have only read Jin Yong and Gu Long, and a little further away are Li Liang's humorous novels and Ni Kuang and Huang Yi's fantasy. Thinking back carefully, Ni Kuang and Huang Yi are good-looking, Li Liang is funny, Gu Long is endlessly memorable, and Jin Yong has more TV series. I want to watch them, and the one I like is Tian Long Ba Bu, but this one is ghostwritten by Ni Kuang (if I remember correctly). The plot is compact, the plot twists and turns, and fascinating. Everyone has their own hobbies, and everyone has their own martial arts. I don't know whether the author is an amateur writer or a professional writer, but I admire his persistence in writing every day! I once had this dream, but life made me put it on hold and I never started writing it for so many years. I wish the author can persist all the way, adhere to his original intention, and go further!

Comments, suggestions, criticisms, and corrections are here. The author has good psychological quality and can withstand "bombardment".

The story itself is not bad and has some charm, but the author's punctuation is prone to spoilers. Just like the beggar in the first chapter, why do you use double quotation marks? The author, do you want to tell us in advance that he is not a beggar? Hehe! 😁 In addition, the division of paragraphs feels a bit..., Just study one sentence of Gu Long's paragraphs, as long as the meaning is achieved. Don't worry too much about paragraphs being too short. The paragraphs are concise, the words are concise, and the layout looks neat and concise. Makes it more enjoyable to watch.

Hello, this friend who reads QQ. May you be happy and happy in the new year. (I don't know why, I can't reply directly)

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On June 17, 2019, an earthquake occurred in Yibin, Sichuan. Some time, some place. I sat on the bed, feeling the subtle vibrations. Five seconds later, I realized with hindsight that it was an earthquake. Fortunately, what we feel here is only the shock wave in the distance. After this, I was still sitting on the bed. The author believes that his life must be hard enough, which will not cause my book to die halfway. Silently pray for those who are suffering...