This Arena Is a Bit Skinny

Thank you to Lonely Night Watchman i for the 1500 reward, thank you! Hey, you guys reward me like this, I feel so panicked!

Thank you to Dark Letter Sword for the reward of 100 starting coins, thank you! Next time, I won't post my thanks in the book review area, because a certain boss said that the book review area is for everyone to discuss, and will be posted at the end of each chapter like the recommendation votes.

Come on, it's a good book and very interesting. I hope the author can stick to it.

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Thank you for the rogue's reasonable reward of 1,000 starting coins! Thanks! I've been so confused recently that I almost dropped out of school!

I have read more than a hundred chapters, but not a single supporting character has been successfully developed.

It's a good-looking book. I hope the author can become a god in one book and slow down the pace appropriately 😰 I will definitely order all the books once it is released.

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Is this author a female? ? ?

When I read Chapter 119, I didn't want to read it anymore. I felt like you failed to write it. According to the previous thinking, it's better to be without a wife.

I'm very sorry to the author. Due to personal reasons, some people came here to comment on the book. I can't say that I am a student party member and I can't say that I will give a big reward, but if the author puts it on the shelf, I will definitely order it. I like this book very much, it is very interesting.

To be honest, I originally wanted to pursue the book, but when I saw a woman suddenly come out, and she thought she was very smart and could understand people's psychology, I suddenly thought of Cihang Jingzhai, and then I quit. The book is called Pi, and the content is about ascetics. It's okay. Ascetics is quite innovative, but suddenly there came another woman who looked like the saint of Cihang Jingzhai. I couldn't stand it anymore. I told the author why I quit. Goodbye.

The character of a person like Jun Luoxue can only be cultivated by someone behind the scenes, that is, the temper of the eldest lady, no matter the severity. Unless you are very happy with her fate in the end, it is better to write less about this kind of character. This kind of unruly eldest lady's temper has been scolded in other books, and the protagonist must be well positioned. There are only a few people in the world who are warriors, and they cannot be written in a way that can be criticized casually. There must be an overall view. , Speaking in terms of the Fengshen List is like a saint. Except for those at the same level, everyone else is an ant. I give you a good look because of me, but you can't push your limits. This should be highlighted. I feel that what you write now is too stingy. , Although it has been pointed out that the following is about using the world as a chessboard and all living beings as chess pieces, but these pictures are still too personal. For example, the son in charge, even if it is removed, it does not hurt. Maybe you want to make the character fuller, but it is better not to use two or three pictures to depict such an unpleasant character, otherwise readers will be very disgusted. Can you Let's write some positive energy. For example, the son in charge is really not very talented, but he doesn't give up and wants to find opportunities to climb up, so he goes to join Jun Luoxue's line. Then he learns that the protagonist is a heavenly warrior and comes to ask for an opportunity. Then the protagonist sets up a test to show the character of the two. Anyway, it is better to write some positive energy. , When writing negative energy, try to write it in a big way. Don't limit the negative energy to one person, otherwise if you let him appear once or twice, it will cause discomfort to the readers. The above are all personal suggestions

Let me tell you what I didn't write well here. I'm so tired of writing... I want to hear your opinions! I don't know if any book friends will read it, 😢, just sign in and let me know how many book friends there are!

Haha →_→ Although I jumped to read it, I even subscribed to only one chapter. Jiang Hao takes the people of nature and nurture to fight a family with heavenly beings. And the protagonist is given a gourd, not a trump card. Jiang Hao is also a perfect Tiangang. Author, are you drifting away?

... This plot of going out to get married out of nowhere is very speechless😓 I can't stand this kind of plot

Could the protagonist be more affectionate? That would be better

The writing is very good, there is no family competition, sect competition, pretentiousness or slap in the face.

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Thank you to the gangster for the 100 starting coins for the reasonable reward, thank you!

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Thank you to the gangster for the 400 starting coins that he justly rewarded!

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Stop writing about emotional dramas, I'm trying to persuade you to quit

I stayed up late to read it, the story is wonderful. Thank you, the author, for letting me experience this bizarre world!

Don't forget to write a book. Just write one thousand eight hundred and it's not too demanding.

Two chapters persuade him to quit. Any guard is the pinnacle of the future. The protagonist is not interested in fame and fortune, but is selfless.