There Is Indeed Something Wrong with My Summoning System

Let me tell you about the problem this time. I have been following this book since the early stages. The author gave me the feeling that he was seriously describing the emotions and thoughts of the characters in each story, so the characters in the story seemed fleshed out. But this time in the fate Zero line, I think the author needs to pay attention to some issues. This time the story is more of a group drama, which means everyone is the protagonist. That brings up the problem of role allocation. I personally feel that the author puts more emphasis on The plot of Mapo and Jin Shining has compressed too much of the protagonist's side of the story In particular, the author is used to describing each character carefully, which leads to The rhythm of the story is not very coherent. What the text can express in a certain length definitely cannot explain the whole story clearly. Too many explanations will cause the plot of the story to be delayed and even the key point to be difficult to focus on. Basically, I feel that most of the people who will read this book are people from the same circle, and some parts can actually be weighed and discarded. Also The frequent transitions of perspectives in chapters can easily lead to reader fatigue. Before I read a book called Legendary Heroes, and this problem is very serious. The main plot has only written 200 chapters, and the side plot has written more than 400 chapters and is still not finished. The protagonist learns special skills to advance the story, I found a person to learn from, but I accidentally transferred to a different world with this person. I wrote more than 400 chapters in the different world and finally came back to learn the skills. I returned to the main story after 20 chapters and started writing a branch line. I wrote more than 300 chapters. In the end, the rhythm of the whole story was chaotic and the author just didn't finish it.

Let's rename it an actor's self-cultivation. . .

The author should stop touching his nose. . . .

The author writes very well, the plot is interesting, and the most important thing is compared to other similar novels, there are almost no poisonous points. If you insist on saying that there is, it is almost forceful. Because this kind of article (temporarily transformed into a time travel article) does not suit the taste of some readers. I hope the author can continue writing. I hope to see the author finish the book. Come on.                                      ，

Women's clothing is fun for a while, and women's clothing is always fun!

My 731 Academy? Well, bye

It's really hard to find books to read in smaller fandom areas... Fortunately, I didn't miss this one 😁

It's a bit hard to imagine Joan of Arc growing gorilla arms But it still looks good.

Why do you need to subscribe to watch the closing remarks? Do you want money? (▼ Plate▼#)

After the protagonist becomes a woman, she falls in love with a man and offers herself to the man's harem.

If you change your marriage or have an affair with a man, it will be disgusting and you can only give up.

Good books, especially after reading Shokuki Scroll, I felt quite melancholy, as my life has ended like this. I feel that the first chapter after the Shokuki Volume describes the psychological activities of the protagonist is not perfect. After all, the protagonist is still a human being. If it were me, I would probably go with Erina for a hundred years, rather than continue to return to the original world to live another "life" of my own, because it is impossible for me to have the motivation to continue living after living a perfect life with my wife. After all, I am not an immortal species, I am a human being. If I were an author and I traveled back to the original world, I would definitely write a monologue about the lives of the system loli and the protagonist. When the protagonist enjoys his old age, only the system loli will always accompany the protagonist. For the protagonist, the real "salvation" is to have a "person" who can accompany him forever. Of course, maybe the "protagonist" himself didn't realize this. So, the author please don't ignore the "redemption" of the system lolita to the protagonist╯╰

The male partner touches the female protagonist's breasts (not through clothes), the male protagonist just puts his clothes on the female protagonist

This Sword Art Online game is written about Sword Art Online, but it is actually a third-rate web game in China.

Why does one chapter cost about 20 points, and even the final closing remarks have to be paid for? Is this too much?

Lily is still single, or may get married, please spoil it 😰😰😰😰

It's a political mistake to choose Taying too

What is the sexual orientation of the protagonist in this book?

It's quite good-looking, the writing is good, and the plot is quite interesting. I originally thought it was a transformation novel, but it turned out to be an infinite flow. I felt quite melancholy at the end of the Shoji story The ending point of Woying's plot felt a bit abrupt, maybe because I haven't watched this one before. This time I am Zhao Zilong. I remember that the fate series has not released it. I look forward to the author's thought of the Noble Phantasm ability

It looks good, but the updates are a bit slow. Come on, author!

Damn, I haven't read Qidian for a few days, but this book has been updated! Wocao, a miracle! Wocao, words cannot express my shock! Wood grass!

The Nth unfinished (eunuch) novel given to me by Qidian

Oh my god, you can change from male to female, you can change back again, I know why I stopped watching halfway through

Rare, rare, who is rare, rare, rare, you are rare😄😄😄

It took me a day to finish reading the book for free 🤭

Are you awesome? Are you noble? Starting a new genre, right? So why did you start with this subject? After spending money to subscribe to TM, you told me that you wanted to change back. What do you think you are doing?

To be honest, the Sword Art Online chapter in this book is the best one I have ever seen written by a Sword Art Online fan. The role-playing system is very good if it is written in an ordinary way. The main god at the end is a failure, and it is unfinished. I feel that the author has a bad mentality. It is obvious that ordinary articles can have the quality of a top-notch manga, but in order to promote the plot, he added very immature ideas and ended up unfinished.

My, summoning spirit? ! ? ! ? !

It's outrageous that this book is even recommended to me 😅

This author's writing is still very good, but the writing is unfinished. By the way, does this author stop writing novels?