Travel to the World of Martial Arts

I like this style of writing very much, and I think it will be popular, but I would like to give you some suggestions 1. There is a problem with the interval between time-traveling and time-traveling. The ending is inexplicable, and the entry is the same. There is no explanation or a few words about why. It always travels across time suddenly, and then goes back and time-traveling again (see the part about Chu Liuxiang's fight). You have to tell us, otherwise I will feel that I can't understand it and give up this book. 2 The character of the protagonist is a fool to the people in the book, but the readers know that the protagonist is normal. But you can't always write the protagonist as a fool. You didn't say whether the protagonist is a modern person or an ancient person. If the protagonist is a modern person, where does his martial arts come from? If the protagonist in ancient times didn't know the words Tongfu Inn, you had to give the protagonist a little wisdom, even if he knew the plot or what his plans were. If you keep writing about the protagonist as a fool, readers will really treat the protagonist as a fool. I am very optimistic about this book. Author, please don't be disappointed.

The eunuch is not good, the investment is in vain, even the eunuch can finish the book. The day before yesterday, I wrote 15 chapters of the book I invested in, and got two thousand starting coins.

A joyful and funny article, this book is so funny that I can't stand it, just like fennel.

What the hell, I can't understand, my brain is convinced

Alas, when will the new readers come? Just scream when they come. After all, the book is good, but it has an unknown author.

I know it's an interesting story, but it's a little confusing.

Has this book gotten any new readers recently?

Not bad! It's not bad. At this level, it might be too popular!

Maybe I'm not educated enough and don't understand. Goodbye.

Wrote several books, all about eunuchs

If you find an update, take a look. To be honest, it is much better than the book Fat Panda.

Alas, I no longer need to take a look every day.

It's sad that the author said that this book has an ending. ᕙ(☉⚇̭☉)ᕗI love you

Although it was a bit confusing at the beginning, it became smoother after reading it. I read it patiently and found that it is still good. By the way, why is there no cover or something?

Still like this book. Although there may be some problems, it cannot stand up to the author's imagination. The author is not famous. Otherwise this book wouldn't be like this.

Blind chicken, write it, everyone can read it. Being more serious can lead to death

That Qin Yuyun should be the protagonist himself, right?

I just started watching this. The protagonist is a time traveler, but I don't remember the previous TV series and novels, right?

Where did the protagonist get the Nine Yin Manual?

After looking at the table of contents, I have no desire to continue reading.

Am I too naive? The author wrote these chapters in "On Top of the Forbidden City" so deeply that I can't understand what is written. I can't understand it at all.

Poor author. Can't be put on shelves.

An author who completes a book before 1 million words will definitely hit the streets with his next one.

Three Golden Chapters... I can't stand it after reading the third chapter.

It's good to sign the contract. I'll get a share again.

The protagonist has been grinding dungeons? I want to see the story of the main world

Why doesn't the author put it on the shelves? If I don't put it on the shelves, there will be no return on my investment.

It's a bit unwatchable, and I don't explain the specific situation of the protagonist.