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Brother, I'm here for the ghosts and monsters, and I'm not interested in the protagonist pretending to be realistic.

Let's talk about the advantages of this book: First point, the early plot, creativity and IQ are all online. The second point is that the author is very good at writing, but it is written that the author's IQ has dropped. (At least the protagonist's IQ is not off) The third point is that the country's power is extremely weak and all cities are extremely unsafe, giving the protagonist many opportunities to show off his skills. It is awkward but also a bit coercive. It's really rare. The fourth point is that the author should have special arrangements. The early opportunities and rewards obtained have nothing to do with the major chosen by the university. This should be to enable the protagonist to better show off. The fifth point is that it is either not poisonous, or one poison will kill one piece. The smaller one is not poisonous, and the larger one is as poisonous as Crane's Red. Instantly select a group of readers with extremely high resistance to toxicity. The sixth point is that the author has a very strong control over the rhythm. The rhythm of the future is the same, just like the wooden fish being knocked, dong dong dong dong…

After reading more than forty chapters, I turned into a monster twice in total, and the total of the two times was less than 10 chapters. The narrative content is more daily, and although it is not pretentious, it is too bland. It's just not that exciting anyway. It is recommended to focus on the monsters rather than the protagonist's days in the academy.

I finished reading this book in two days. I feel that the ghost part is very good, but the reality is not satisfactory. I suggest you use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, write more about the world of ghosts and less about reality.

The writing about monsters is what attracted me the most in the whole article. There is room for improvement in other areas, so keep working hard.

How do you feel that the writing is anticlimactic?

However, it is not a fairy grass, but a grain of grass. There are problems with the plot, and they are all old-fashioned, making it a common mistake for novice authors! The plot and foreshadowing always revolve around the protagonist, and the world seems to disappear without the protagonist.

The writing style of this book Hehe If it weren't for the shortage of books, I really wouldn't be able to read it Gao Wu's remake of the plot The routine writing routine is not used well

This novel is good, the author has excellent literary talent, the narrative is clear, and the idea of ​​advancing both worlds is creative. In the later period, there will be more and more pets, I hope it will not be chaotic! ! ! The protagonist reminds me of the Banner of Ten Thousand Monsters in The Ancestor of Ten Thousand Monsters. It's good, good, good, support. Come on＾0＾~

Brother, I finally got into V, let's explode! Two chapters a day is not enough. Oh, I want to read it to gain weight, but after reading it, I want to read the next chapter. It's heart-breaking!

What the hell is this negative 1 click? ? ? ?

If the author mainly wrote about the transformation adventure of the protagonist in another world, instead of letting the protagonist indulge in reality and pretending to be the first in various competitions and barely write about the other world, more readers would probably like it, after all. . . Author, do you still remember the name of your book? This is called the Spirit Lander. Anyone who clicks on the name will come to see the interesting adventures of the protagonist after he transforms into a spirit! I'm not here to watch you write about how the protagonist competes with classmates and teachers in high school, gets first place in the written examination, and competes for the top spot in the college entrance examination. To be honest, author, if you continue to write according to the current routine, you might as well change the title of the book to "World's Highest Martial Arts", maybe more book friends will stay. Lest the readers who want to see a transformation into a monster come in and find out that they have been deceived and feel unhappy, and the readers who want to read a cool article about pretending to be a slap in the face will not click on the title of your book at all.

After I read it, the investment group in the new book couldn't invest because it didn't last 10 minutes. 😐😐😐Helpless¬_¬｀

It looks great. The author thinks he has a lot to do with this subject.

4 Recommended tickets for 2 months, please add more details

Rubbish novel. The whole world is waiting for the protagonist to explode and save the world, and the official background is all the same. The routines are old and cliched, the protagonist doesn't develop and take action, but the villain can make the official fool around. All kinds of force, all kinds of perfunctory. When it comes to cool writing, it's not as good as Long Ao's writing. When it comes to mysterious writing, it's all Long Ao's routine. It can be said that without the protagonist, the world constructed in this book is just a little brother. Evil will prevail and good will fail.

4 Recommended Tickets, One Month Ticket, Please Improve

Three recommended votes, February votes please add more!

The martial arts circle in this book is really Shabi. A person who has learned martial arts for 2 months can defeat the strongest thug of the villain organization. After escaping, the National Security Agency headquarters was so short of manpower that no one could be sent to track him down. I'm afraid the map is only as big as a city.

The writing in this book is a little bit idiotic. It's okay for the three-colored auspicious beast to be hunted down because of its special bloodline. I don't say anything about the nine-tailed fox being hunted down by low-level spirits. But the sixth-level Yanghu (that should be the name) dared to chase and kill the little fox even though he knew it was a descendant of the nine-tailed fox. Isn't it afraid that after eating the little fox, he would be killed by the boss of the nine-tailed fox clan? If you say it doesn't know, then why do the nine-tailed fox clan know that the outside world is so dangerous, but they still let the little fox run away from the clan frequently? If the little fox was deliberately released, why is there no one to protect it? Your loophole is too big. Are all the Nine-tailed Fox Clan fools? Someone came out to look for it before, which means that the little fox is not dispensable to the Nine-tailed Fox Clan, but this can always let the little fox escape? Can't you stand so many big guys? Author, do you always lose your children when you are raising them? Your other writings are all very good, but why do you end up like a **?

There is a bit of a character conflict in these chapters. . . The protagonist should be the kind of person who values ​​his family. Tongtian Road will be opened again in ten years, and the protagonist's golden finger doesn't have much need for external things. It doesn't matter whether he goes there or not. The author made him a "powerful person who can wear it back on his own". When will this power be achieved? Isn't he afraid that it will take decades to achieve it? If the child wants to support him, he will not be loved by her? After all, Tongtian Road is a one-way ticket. Especially when I wrote that it was really against my will to go back and ask my parents about this. After all, my parents are usually supportive, so I felt like I was making excuses. Of course, he is the protagonist after all, so maybe he can arrange to travel back and forth freely within a few months. But our normal thinking logic cannot hold up, and it seems unsatisfactory if the novel cannot be substituted.

It's tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to throw it away. It's all supported by the fun of being able to travel and transform into a spirit. The rest is as plain as water.

Me, 4 recommended tickets and 1 monthly ticket, plus fine points

As soon as the golden finger opened, the women came closer to him as if they smelled Tang Monk's flesh. The halo of wisdom is activated, and women all over the street automatically follow him home.

When fighting ghosts in the same way, the woman will go directly from the first to the middle level after playing ten times. You will go from the first level to the middle level after playing twelve times. And no matter how you level up, the woman will always be able to keep up or even surpass you. Which one is the protagonist? Are you cheating?

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it has no passion at all. Writing a novel about this kind of high-level martial arts world would seem boring without passion, but the idea is actually quite good, but it feels like it is tasteless and a pity to abandon.

The first four chapters were okay and unconventional, but the fifth chapter kicked the IQ into the ground. Chapter 10 finally removed the foot, and Chapter 14 used a 100,000-ton hydraulic press to press it into the soil.

I just want to see monsters, not the main characters pretending to be realistic. As if I didn't say it. Poison, reality is a bit too poisonous.

Another novel that can't be read without thinking...

The author made the realm too vague. It felt to me that the protagonist was strengthened, strengthened again, broke through, and broke through again. In the end, he was still inferior to a dog. He didn't even get the most basic introduction, and the experience was extremely poor.