A Commoner in Republican-Era China

Erbao's writing is so good, he is like a senior student in the starting section of the broken chapter unit. It is so broken that it makes you want to send a razor blade (two yuan a piece)

The writing in the front is really good, but the character design in the back is completely ruined! There is a young boy in Mantun who has not fully read the thousand-character Chinese text. He speaks like an old scholar, quoting all kinds of scriptures and speaking in perfect order! The most exaggerated thing is that in less than half a year in business, he was able to cross the border to provide guidance to the casino boss, and pointed out that his vision was not enough and he was restricted by geography! This kind of thinking and vision can only be reborn! The characterization is too fake and spacey!

It's so well written, this writing style! This is a broken sentence! This description! This technique! This close-up... (That 😰). . Looking at the snowy scenery, it makes me, a southerner, feel as cold as a freezer in the hot winter! The sentences "swipe and pull" and "swipe and pull" are only two times, but they can depict the beauty of inertia! Forgive my illiteracy, this book is really difficult to express my inner thoughts with my poor vocabulary 🤐

I was forced to give up after seeing Chapter 288. . . To be honest, the author's writing is very good and the story is quite interesting, but what you wrote is a novel!!! This whole chapter of nonsense is just to talk about how Shao Jun had no money at first and then wanted to have money? I could explain it in just a few sentences, but I ended up writing a whole chapter! Another book, Time Travel, was halfway through and I gave it up for similar reasons after reading it a lot. Now and in the past, I always write the plot that has been released twice. A little explanation can be used to describe the whole story with all kinds of gorgeous rhetoric! I thought the Republic of China would last longer, but now I really can't help it! Well, let me emphasize again, the writing style is very good, and the food descriptions are also very tempting, but the length is too big, and after reading too much, it feels boring and indifferent! I really came to read the novel, not to watch the trend! I hope the more you write, the better!

Why do the friends of the poor have to be poor? Are they really unable to fit into the life circle of rich people? Is it so difficult to be friends with a rich, handsome, rich man? Should poor people remain poor all their lives? Is this society really so unfair? Thinking of this, I couldn't control my emotions and started crying while sitting on the private plane. After a while, the supermarket cashier came out and said: "Why are you crying? You can only move after inserting coins, don't you know?"

It was obviously the finale, but it actually reminded me that there was no update for 7 days and my investment failed. . .

Can the dialogue between the characters be more concise? It's too long to write in one paragraph.

As soon as Erbao arrived at the store, all the drinkers looked at her and laughed, and some even shouted: "Erbao, you broke the story again." She did not answer, but said to the shopkeeper: "One collection, five recommendation votes," and then issued two updates. They deliberately shouted loudly: "You must have been in trouble again." Erbao opened his eyes and said, "How can you accuse someone of innocence with empty talk..." "What innocence? I saw you in the water group without inspiration a few days ago." Erbao's face turned red, and the marks on his arms were Veins popped out, and he argued: "There is no inspiration in the water group... How can you blame me? How can the lack of inspiration be counted?" Then he said a bunch of difficult words, "The water group is good for the concurrent development of inspiration" and "A certain amount of fishing is good for writing." It caused everyone to burst into laughter, and the atmosphere inside and outside the store was filled with joy. This one costs 5 yuan, delete the parentheses.

When I saw the introduction of the book, I was reminded of an old TV series called "Da Ranfang"

Do you know? Erbao, how hard you work! I have a high fever of 37.1°C and am still coding and breaking chapters and trying to update. I didn't go to the hospital even if I was bitten by a mosquito. I was still trying to update my code even after I was bitten and swollen. Erbao is so hardworking. Bring us updates so remember to vote and favorite! One line costs five yuan, and the brackets are deleted.