The Elf Archer of Another World

Regarding this book, I didn't have much reaction when I first saw the title. It's the same as most of the game articles on the site. It's something like that, indicating the background of the story and the profession of the characters. Although the titles of such books are clear at a glance, they are often not eye-catching, so with this "seemingly ordinary" feeling, I clicked on the homepage. After reading the introduction, I found that it is quite interesting. Players who can't go offline? This is something I have never seen in other game articles. It is so novel that people can't help but click in and read one chapter after another. Of course, it's not just that you can't go offline, the protagonist also has some puzzles to solve, which is the main line of this book in addition to the game content. Needless to say, the author's writing style is excellent, and the development of the story is also interlocking - the above is not a rainbow fart. Although adding this sentence may be suspected of "there is no three hundred taels of silver here", but as an author and book owner who always upholds fairness... I really have no need to do this. When I first met someone, I thought that this young lady's writing style was very serious and meticulous. After reading the book, I realized that that idea was a bit one-sided. Part of the writing style was slightly similar to the e-sports article I wrote next door, and the seriousness was full of sand. Ahem, the author, I am not talking about you! ……………… Power generation for love is often regarded as a label of "incompetence". What's the use of writing so many words when you have no grades! But it's not. Persistence is victory. It is not advisable to be perfunctory and impetuous. I would also like to call out all the authors whose books are good but not popular. Encouragement~

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[Number of words read] 120,000+ [Fancy Testing Poison] Chapter 1-50: This is a magical game world. To be precise, it is the two holographic games "Miracles" and "Wentian" from the East and the West. The two sides are connected through world tasks. The game world and the real world have basically the same look and feel, except for the slight difference in the flow of time. The heroine was unable to go offline due to some strange encounter every year, so she went to Chang'an City in "Asking the Sky" and made a group of trustworthy friends. Enter the Tongtian Tower to learn about the Eastern world, and meet the NPC Saint Fasimir of Light who looks exactly like the player. Received the Qinling mission, encountered a sneak attack on the village, and saw the magic of the Nine-Colored Immortal Deer. Chapter 222-231: The Western Mercenary Group once again sent people to the Eastern World. Nian Nian was in jail in Chang'an City. The identity of the newly appointed National Advisor was suspicious, but the policies he could make showed a trend of overriding the Tongtian Tower. Did you finally accept Su Ze's request for a "secret play picture" every year? Experience 1. The magical world. "Miracles" is a game world full of magic or fantasy. Elves, dwarves, humans, earth dragons, etc. Are all settings of Western games. The dense primeval forest, high priests, mercenaries, magicians, holy mages, etc., Show the exotic style everywhere. "Wentian" is an authentic oriental fantasy game world. Traditional settings such as dynasties, chambers of commerce, gangs, and cottages, as well as oriental sects such as Yunji Sword Sect, Mingtang, Mohism, and Jade Emperor Academy, have clear characteristics. The most important thing about this article is that through the emergence of world tasks, two different game worlds are connected, so that all professions can appear together, for the sake of world hegemony, and for some ulterior purpose. Both games are holographic experiences. The game and reality are almost the same, except for real death. The only difference is that the heroine cannot go offline. 2. The magical author. In the first few chapters and subsequent chapters, as long as there are Western characters on the stage, there will be simultaneous interpretation or double translation of the dialogue in Chinese and English. Some people say that this is a blatantly low word count. In fact, this is not the case, because this book is not on the shelves and does not make any money. As for the reason, I dare not ask. But it's quite fun to watch, especially the large sections of English and Irish, which feel very advanced, even though I can't understand them. But this shows that the author is either bored on Baidu, or is engaged in language work. Anyway, real name envy is correct. 3. Magical setting. The low-level but nearly invincible elf archer Nian Nian, with an arrow that penetrates the clouds, thousands of troops came to meet each other, and the arrows were almost unmissable; This is the year, the president of the first guild in "Wentian", who is doing nothing in the world, is idle and does not do his job, concentrates on flirting with girls but can't find the right way, he is really ten years old; Su Ze, with The appearance of the pig head is actually a national player with a "secret play map". There is no way, because of the need for professional advancement; The Saint Fasimir of Light, sometimes indifferent and sometimes funny, looks like an NPC and a player. He is the embodiment of justice and the mastermind behind the trouble. His identity is so complicated, maybe the Nine-Colored Deer and the national master are both him. The professional advancement in "Wen Tian" is full of magic: the advanced task of swordsmanship is role-playing, and it is randomized four times; the advanced task of "Rites, Music, and Royal Books" in Jade Emperor Academy is even more bizarre; if you want to enter politics, you will take the imperial examination and taxation. 4. Magical routines. The heroine is of a low level, young and helpless and can eat grass, but is almost invincible; the mercenaries seem powerful but are fooled by Jing Zhaoyin; Tongtian Tower is the most well-informed but is easily deceived by the methods of the national adviser; the copycat is actually an officially recognized legal organization used to fight against the imperial court; the magical Nine-Colored Deer is different from the cartoons of childhood, and actually has a tendency to develop into a big devil. Everyone has their own destiny, but they are entangled with each other. Although most of them are players, everyone plays very seriously. Defects Not on the shelves. Full of irrationality. Maybe it's because only one chapter is updated every day, or maybe it's the author's stubbornness. No typos. Except for those in English, I haven't found a single typo in the Chinese part yet. I've worked hard. (Hey, why should I pay attention to typos?) Too few good points. The relaxed atmosphere of this article is still lacking. There is clearly a relaxed feeling in the first part, but it gradually becomes serious in the second part. The battle details are not enough. It is obviously a game novel about two worlds competing for hegemony, but the conflict is far from enough. When reading it, it actually feels like a farming novel. It seems to want a harem. One heroine, several men are fascinated by her. Could it be because the elves have long ears and are particularly attractive? The colors of East and West are gradually out of balance. The mercenaries arrived very early but did very little trouble. They were known as the first mercenary group in the West, but they seemed not as powerful as the bandits. [Summary] This article is very interesting, the author is very strong, has rich game knowledge, various settings are extremely reasonable, the characters' IQs are all online, and the plot is worthy of inference. In one word, great~

I haven't read many game articles. To be precise, except for "The Master", which I read because of the anime a few days ago, I haven't read anything else. So what I can say today are some extremely subjective things. (Subjective means inappropriate and incomplete, sorry.) Although I have only read thirty chapters, during the reading process of thirty chapters, I always have the idea that this is not a game world but a real world. Even when the scenes in the article change, there will be a stiff, unnatural, or even inexplicable feeling. Of course, on the other hand, this also illustrates the author's ability to set scenarios. The collision and combination of the Western magical world and the Eastern fairy world. From this point alone, you should admire the author's background setting that is not too bold but will undoubtedly be very troublesome. From this point of view, if you like both the gorgeous magic skills of the West and the chic and elegant flying swords of the East, this would be a good choice. Recommending it from this point alone is not enough to whet your appetite, so let's follow the rules and talk about the plot and characters. The main line of the plot is to establish a trade road connecting the East and the West. Simply put, without taking other special means of transportation, Eastern monks can go to the West, and Western elves and magicians can also go to the East on foot or by boat. It sounds very simple, but this long journey of millions of miles and what you can encounter and gain is not enough to arouse your interest? Moreover, have you ever seen a player who can never go offline? The protagonist of the novel, Nian Nian, is such an elf girl who, for some unknown reason, can never go offline. In most novels, because the protagonist is always responsible for various adventures and the ability to stand up in times of crisis, it is inevitable that some attractions will be lost in character setting. So although Nian Nian has two pointed ears, I prefer the "Secret Map Master" Su Ze in the article who has been very wretched since his appearance. For my personal reasons, I prefer characters with a sense of humor. And because I haven't read much, it seems a little too mysterious. Of course, as the plot of the novel progresses, everyone will appear in front of the readers in a more comprehensive and three-dimensional way, and by then, nothing similar will happen. PS: Please forgive me for any inappropriateness!

I don't feel throbbing anymore when reading online books, and I always feel that the writing doesn't quite impress me, but this book is really well written. My mood changes a little bit every year. I feel like crying when I get excited, and I unconsciously raise the corners of my mouth in front of the screen when I feel relieved. When I encounter this book, I really feel like I have met a treasure. I will read every chapter carefully, because it is worth reading word for word.

It has been added to the bookshelf. In order not to waste recommendation votes, I will give it to you almost every day. Oh hahaha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Ahhhh it's so beautiful, I support it!!! This subject matter is really novel, and I have always been wavering between Eastern and Western themed articles. The author has really made a good start!! This is the first time I have seen this kind of thing!!❤️

Pre-reading statement: The trial reading has reached Chapter 95. The incident of the Tree of Life and Death has come to an end, the Nine-Colored Immortal Deer has successfully escaped from prison, and the Giant Vine Spirit Yu Tao is temporarily offline. In addition, in view of the recent rampage of post-eating beasts, some of the suspected blocked words use combinations or fake characters. ———————————————— To be honest, I have played a lot of stand-alone games, but I have only had a brief taste of Zhu Xian San San in online games. I have also read a lot of Western literary masterpieces, but I have rarely dabbled in them after high school. Therefore, this online game soft science fiction work with a blend of Chinese and Western backgrounds may have limited connotations. This article may not be exaggerated, but the author may not listen to it. 1. Setting, reality and illusion. The basic setting or core technology of this book is called mind (consciousness) uploading. The author corresponds to the magician in Tarot cards. It is actually a super virtual reality technology, similar to the setting of The Matrix or Ready Player One. Players who are connected to the game can get an incomparable real experience, breaking away from the limitations of physical entities and using their minds to perceive and contact everything in the virtual world. The so-called "as big as the heart is, as big as the stage", this is not only a game method, but also a new way of life. Reality and illusion are an ancient topic. There is the story of Zhuang Zhou turning into a butterfly in "The South China Sutra", there is the story of Huang Liang Yi Meng in "The Story of the Pillow", and there is also the story of the shepherd in "The Book of Hundred Parables". Whether the illusory world is worthy of nostalgia or not is a matter of opinion. However, it is undeniable that with the continuous evolution of human history, the continuous improvement of people's material and cultural life needs has formed a huge contradiction with the gradually shortage of earth's resources. Many people are not satisfied in real life, but find satisfaction in the virtual world. This low-cost satisfaction can solve many social problems, and technological advancement can make the distinction between virtual and real increasingly blurred. The only thing to consider is how to find a balance between real and virtual. Going back to this book, in fact, in the current trend of Qidian, many serious-themed books are written like games. On the contrary, this game-themed book is very serious. Many times you will forget that this is a game competition book. The system characteristics of the game are embedded as seamlessly as possible into the background of the story here to make certain settings clearer and easier to understand. However, the sections that are most popularly described in game articles such as killing monsters, upgrading, earning experience and brushing the panel are almost absent here. I personally feel that this is the most appropriate way to open the "system" element. Of course, illusion is illusion after all. Although there are injuries, deaths, and all kinds of joy, anger, sorrow, and joy in the game world, and people can get an extremely real experience through mind uploading, players in the real world are standing outside after all, which makes the artistic appeal of the work incomplete. The simplest example is that the giant vine spirit Yu Tao's offline is indeed tear-jerking, but if you think that she is just an NPC and will appear in the same place after a period of time, all the emotions aroused will collapse. How to solve this problem may require the author to think deeply. 2. Characters, simplicity and complexity. Because it is a spiritual upload, the physical characteristics of the characters in the book are of little reference. The characters directly reflect the human heart (the player). The author has arranged corresponding Tarot cards for the main characters in the book, such as the female protagonist Nian Nian (The Fool), the male protagonist Simil (The Hanging Man), the sword fairy Jiang Jinse (the Queen), the music master Sui Sui (The Chariot), etc. They all seem to have obvious labels, but this is only the main aspect of the character. Human nature is actually very complex. For example, the heroine, Nian Nian, has lost her memory and cannot go offline. She is the character with the most mysteries. Many times the heroine appears to be rather wilted, not as domineering, energetic and charming as the average heroine. Here is a direct excerpt from the male protagonist's evaluation of the female protagonist: "Not only is she lucky, she is also very smart, a little sharp, a little straightforward, but sometimes she can be inexplicably ignorant and childish." But for such a person who seems to prefer to be wise and protective, when he is truly offended, the counterattack he gives to the other party is extremely fierce and ferocious, and it can be said that no matter the cost. This contrast makes the characters fuller, giving people an unexpected surprise and making them more interested in the heroine's life experience. Another example is the male protagonist Simil, a character who is similar to an NPC but not a pure NPC. He seems to be immovable and cynical, and all his actions are elegant and calm. In fact, in order to verify the theory of mind uploading, he voluntarily became a test subject, giving up his body in real life and existing in the game in the form of pure data. It is impossible to imagine what kind of determination led to this choice of giving up reality and embracing virtuality, but in this virtual world, he may indeed have become an eternal existence. The author positions the male protagonist as a great sacrifice and pioneer, but in the eyes of some readers, he may be just a madman. The other two senior players with Eastern backgrounds, Jiang Jinse from Yunji Sword Sect and Shi Sui from Jade Emperor Academy, respectively represent Taoism and Confucianism, the two peaks of traditional Chinese culture. Taoism emphasizes being out of the world, while Confucianism emphasizes joining the world. However, these two qualities actually overlap in the two characters, and there is no strict distinction. Jiang Jinse pays attention to balance in his own practice and is in line with the natural way. In terms of dealing with others, he embodies the brilliance of motherhood. He cares about his friends, including the heroine, and several apprentices. At this age, he is more like a father (an elder brother is like a father), silently guarding his companions with his strong strength. Although he does not like to show off his talents, he will definitely stand up when encountering difficulties. Whether it is called the Eastern chivalrous spirit or the Western spirit of chivalry, this kind of hidden edge, sword, courage and heart are very attractive. There are also other characters, such as Jiang Jinse's apprentice Chu Bawang, the Blue and White Poria sisters, secret play master Su Ze, and Jingzhao Yin Songqing, swordsman master San Chi Shui, knife master Zi Mo, etc. The simple side is outstanding, and the complex side is also emerging. It just depends on whether the author is willing to spend pen and ink to continue shaping. 3. Plot, common sense and reversal. The author is a setting maniac. In order to gradually unfold the background of the entire story in the early stage, the plot development is also very slow. Although the look and feel has been greatly improved compared to the first edition of Science and Technology Weekly, it is still not exciting enough on the whole, and even has the meaning of a daily farming article. However, as the Qinling dungeon enters the main line, the storyline has been greatly improved, reaching its first peak in the Tree of Life and Death incident. The incident involved multiple reversals, but in order to avoid spoilers, the specific process will not be described here. In the story, we can see the entanglement of interests, the change of positions, trust and betrayal, the so-called goodness and evil, and many things worth pondering. On the surface, the incident seems calm, but underneath there is a turbulent undercurrent. The careful logic makes every reversal more reasonable, and the emotional breaking point is also well arranged. It is to hear the thunder in the silent place, which is very shocking. The fighting descriptions are gradually becoming more intensive here, and they are multi-party wrestling. Generally speaking, they are biased toward the Western magical style, with magical contests of natural elements such as earth, water, fire, and wind. The large scenes are arranged in an orderly manner, and the details of the battles are also quite outstanding. However, since it is a blend of Eastern and Western backgrounds, in the future I still hope to see more Eastern players' combat capabilities reflected, as well as Eastern-style battle scenes, which may make it more colorful. 4. Digression, construction and philosophical thinking. The author is telling a story and at the same time building a world. This is a virtual world built purely from thoughts, and the form of the book is an online game. But this game requires an extremely high degree of participation. The female protagonist cannot go offline, and the male protagonist actively confines himself in the game. Therefore, this is no longer a simple game, but a journey of thoughts. The carrier of online games is indeed just a skin as the introduction says. What I personally think of is actually the creation of online novels. It is also about using ideas to build a world, so that the operation of this world will continue to be more reasonable, and the characters created are like those highly intelligent NPCs in the game. Even if you let it go, even if there is no player intervention, you can still deduce extremely exciting stories according to the established and reasonable rules of this world. As the author himself, he is both a developer and a participant in the game. Perhaps corresponding to the male protagonist Simil, he must have a spirit of self-sacrifice and integration, and dedicate himself wholeheartedly to his own works in order to create an immortal classic. Unfortunately, not everyone has the courage and conditions to sacrifice their lives. As for whether this book will become a classic, let us wait and see. ———————————————— The end

Reading Chapters One Hundred and Forty-Three Opening: When I read it this time, I went back and read it again. Compared with the last time, the opening was a bit like getting the "Instructions for Use of this Article". The revised version is more in line with readers' reading habits of novels. The language system has also been optimized, and the frame background of the two games is more clearly drawn from the plot. Last time I talked about details, let's talk about it in a big way this time Subjective impressionOut of focus 1.Freedom & Out of Focus In the plot, the author explained that "the official does not intervene in any changes in the game, allowing players to freely determine the development of the world. There is only one ultimate goal or a time limit to complete that goal." One of the disadvantages of a high degree of freedom is that it is easy to lose focus When readers read it, they will easily find that this book is all-inclusive and has everything. It not only runs through things, but also involves sword cultivation, political cultivation, religion, culture and art, and so on. The priority of this novel creation, um, or... The importance perceived by readers should be: ①. Build a world, improve the world view, and background structure system ②. Create characters, identities, occupations, skills, and personalities inside and outside the game ③. The interaction between the character and the world is the plot. But most people's outline may be like this: ①. Story main line ②. Story branches ③. Arrange the protagonist's main tasks from the main line, and arrange the interactions between the supporting characters and the protagonist in the branches. From some perspectives, the author's logic should be more reasonable, a bit like modeling. However, because the world view is too grand and covers too many areas, when mapped to text, the perception of 3D graphics is not as strong. It is easy for readers to lose focus and cannot guess what the heroine is going to do every year. Is it a journey to find identity, a road to level advancement, or some other key purpose, and a highly relevant plot is arranged for this purpose. (Don't be obscure, don't be obscure, don't be obscure! If the people around the heroine have anything to do with the heroine's identity, just feel free to say it.) The main line is very important. Generally speaking, the driving force for readers to read a book and the resonance they generate starts from the protagonist. When readers assume the identity of "Nian Nian", they focus on "What do I want to do" > "What is the world like?" For example, if "Sword Art Online" cannot be released as a game, there is a layer, and you can come out after breaking through 100 levels. There is also the path of "Full-time Master", which starts from forming a team, to mentor competition, and to the first place in the league. The sense of purpose and main line during the period are relatively clear, so that readers & viewers seem to have a psychological expectation. 2. Positioning in the center & out of focus (1).East & West From my personal feeling, there is nothing wrong with the game combination of East and West. There is a feeling of cultural collision and skill conflict. (Again, I lament the setting madness. I have to watch it while scrolling back to read the related work) The heroine feels like a new star among the various professional players in the Eastern world. This difference is a good way to convey to readers what is special about the character. (2).Game & Alien World It is explained in the introduction that this is a "game skin, soft science fiction." There is a feeling between games and alien worlds. Those who watch science fiction feel that it lacks the hard-core elements of science fiction, while those who watch games feel that this is less gamified. Since the game classification has been added, let's talk about it from the perspective of gamification. As I said the first time, this is more like an adventure in another world than watching a game. It lacks the unique tricks of the game. Of course, this is also related to the high degree of freedom in setting. In the real world, some businesses will turn the user level system of non-game products into a gamification model in order for users to be more active in their products for a longer period of time. The most common one is the PBL system: experience points (points), badges, leaderboards To apply this kind of thing to this book, for example: I completed the task of escorting Simil every year, gained N experience points, and was awarded N badges by the system. The level was increased by N, and the level was improved by N. The spirit archer ranks N places and gets N rewards This is also a routine commonly used in many game books, especially rewards, which can easily evolve into the protagonist's trump card. The rankings use a data-based model to give readers a clear perception of the protagonist's abilities (there are also tasks such as rating ratings, which should not be complicated, just easy to perceive). This also appears in this book. The reward is probably in Chapter 135. This time interval is quite long (people reading in the front row may be confused). When it appears, the reward for the heroine is also vague. Is it probably related to Simir? (3). Female Channel & Male Channel This book is also relatively vague in terms of its positioning as a male and female channel. It is not a mainstream game text for female channels, nor a mainstream game text for male channels. Female channel: If placed in a female channel, the painting style of this book may be otome-oriented, including Sui, Zimo, Sanchishui, Ximir, Qi Youfeng, and Nick. Regardless of whether they have emotional relationships with the heroine or not, and regardless of their identity with the heroine, they are all a group of people who surround the heroine and think "my heroine is the most special". The core of the story also revolves around the entanglement between the heroine and them, and the others are weakened. (Most of them are like this) Male channel: For male channels, this seems too delicate. Even for them, the plot of the book and the emotional ups and downs of the characters are all calm. Even the heroine is somewhat Buddhist. There is no golden finger, no progress and ambition, no passion, and no sense of honor for the mission (of course, this is compared to those male channel books with excessive emotional expressions). What I talked about before was the plot being out of focus, but what I'm talking about here is the positioning being out of focus. You don't have to follow the crowd, but when writing, you can think about what the target audience is. For example, "Warcraft" and "Miracle Miracle" are games with completely opposite styles, and the participating groups must be different. Just like the sweet pet articles of female channels and the passionate articles of male channels, the positioning is very clear. When you lose focus, it is easy to lose the group of people you should retain. Plot This book is quite good in terms of various settings, writing style, and characters. The obvious shortcoming is probably the plot rhythm. After the airship enters the country, there are missions to search for the altar and missions for the caravan to go to sea. When readers thought that the next plot would unfold with this, these two were temporarily stranded, and the mission to find the Nine-Colored Immortal Deer was interspersed to unfold the subsequent series of plots, such as the tree of life and death incident, the peach incident, the demon wolf incident, etc. Of course, the heroine has just arrived in the Eastern world and cannot return to the West so quickly. However, there are too many mysteries in the book, but they are revealed too slowly, so the pace feels slow. For example, the identity of the heroine, the age-old sister Mianmian, Simil's transformation from the suspected GM to the suspected NPC to the maker of the immortal deer to the existence of the data storage form, and the one who cannot be offline and the altar. If the rhythm is prolonged, it will easily wear away the reader's patience. Especially since this article has many perspectives and a huge system, and Hidden Flower Valley and Luxi adopt multi-perspective dual-line advancement, some short-term plot lines or small tasks should be advanced quickly. Or as mentioned before, the event is triggered as a system task. There is a system prompt to take the task, a prompt reward when completed, and a mark to mark the completion of the event, which can give people the feeling that one thing will not last long. Finally The protagonists entering the game is a kind of spiritual uploading. In some sense, the readers entering this book can also be regarded as a kind of spiritual uploading, or their thoughts participate in this journey. Putting down the book is equivalent to being offline, which means that the author is the game developer and the heroine is the person who is replaced by the character. When players enter the plot game "Elf Archer", they must give participants a sense of accomplishment. In this regard, the system-flow books have a much stronger sense of accomplishment, because they are short tasks, timely and efficient, and can be used as appropriate references.

See Chapter 12. This article does not include palace fights, CEOs, etc. That are common in female videos. Although at first you may think it is a layered world like swords and swords, but it actually shows a more delicate online game world. The heroine is quite attractive, as an archer, just use the double swords to activate the infinite sword control and go up to do it. . . I digress, but she is actually a soft elf girl who is a bit cute. As a result, I didn't pay attention to the male supporting characters at all and just looked at her. The above structure is very attractive and the rhythm is very comfortable, but it lacks real writing. It would be great if the game's introduction and settings were toned down and there were a lot of real-life situations and worlds. In the first chapter, I tried to change the image of a stone gate. Similar to this, there are many details that can be added in the article. For example, when the girl goes down the mountain, she can write a more delicate arc of the downhill slope, the distribution of the forest layers, the condition of the vegetation, and the shape of the mountain in the distance. If there is an overnight stay, there can be animals, weather, homesickness and a campfire. After that, the Blue Whale sails through the sky, and you can see wind, different clouds, passing migratory birds, regional plants and overlooking villages. Taking your time is actually more suitable for such a soft and beautiful character.

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Read to the latest 247 This is a female online game article that can also be read by boys. There are not many books in the Qidian female video game category. There are about 30 books that are still being updated, but they are updated every day, no more than 20. By chance, I have read some of each of these books, but this is the only one that made me stay. Other books are either too violent, too lazy, or too sweet, which is simply the most ruthless torture for a straight man. It is undeniable and objectively speaking, what they did is right. This is the routine operation of female channels, and this is how they are written. However, it is precisely because of this that this book is so precious. After a few chapters, it is obvious that the author really wanted to write what she wanted to write. He did not follow the trend or join in the trend, so there is no sweet emotional drama or dialogue in his book, and there is no yy. Everything is so reasonable, leaving endless imagination. The protagonists all have their own personalities and their own shortcomings. It feels like they are already there, and the author just wrote them out, which is amazing. To put it in layman's terms, this is called good writing. Speaking of writing style, the overall writing skills of female videos are better than those of male videos. After all, the authors are mostly girls who are more emotional and delicate, and their writing can move people. This book not only inherits this excellent feature, but is also at the level of first-class writing. And this is only his first book, with only 630,000 words written. I can only say that the author is very knowledgeable. It is revealed that this book will be written to 3 million words, which is rare and courageous in the female video game category. Overall, the writing style is relatively comfortable and the brushstrokes are delicate, but these are just routine operations. The author inadvertently uses the words of the characters to display the world view, outlook on life and values ​​in the article, which is really shocking and makes people applaud. I won't spoil the details, so friends can watch it carefully. The plot is sorted out without spoiling it for easy viewing. It can also be seen that the author is indeed a novice (funny to save his life) Part One: The first 30 chapters (the world unfolds and the characters take the stage) Part Two: Around Chapters 30 to 130 (Nine-Colored Immortal Deer Incident] Part Three: Around Chapters 130 to 230 (Mingcheng Escape Series] Part Four: Around 230 to the latest chapter 247.

Young lady~ I think, after reading your article, I instantly understood why it is always said that returning to nature is the highest state 😭😭😭

There are too few posts🤔I declare that from now on this place will be occupied by a big guy like me 🤓

I have never read a single word of this book, but that doesn't stop me from giving recommendation votes every day. I can't give monthly votes because I haven't subscribed. Why do I do this? Because she will make me smile.

[Number of words read] 100,000+ I am Chi Chi, a first-time reader of gaming and competitive online articles. I found that since I started hanging out in the circle, I have dedicated countless first times like this. This is my first time writing a book review, my first time reading a martial arts novel, and my first time reading a game article. This is my first time reading game articles. As a reader with a single taste, many types of online articles are given to me by popular science from weird people in the circle. Therefore, for game articles, my concept is online competition and offline romance? But the book Miss Sister has completely changed my prejudice against game writing, because the protagonist of Miss Sister cannot be offline. Okay, I admit that the above is just a small number of words, and I'm going to get serious next time. There is a huge and detailed world structure here. The classifications we often see are either Eastern themes or Western themes. Few people dare to be so bold as to take the two together and merge them into a brand new world. This kind of world structure is too big. Anyone who has written online articles will understand that such a huge world setting will easily fall apart and fall apart if there is not enough basic support. However, I met the young lady and did it. She integrates the two worlds of the East and the West very well, and depicts both worlds in great detail, as if she has drawn a complete world map in the reader's mind, without making people feel confused at all. Regarding this, I must sincerely praise you, the young lady is really amazing. Moyu said that the young lady is a setting madman. I think it's okay. After all, writing a book is building a new world. How to make this world function normally? Naturally, a series of rules must be used to restrict it. However, people like me with limited skills cannot support such a huge setting, so I just adopted the rules of the world we know well. When we meet No, she recreates a world, a brand new world that we don't understand at all. Therefore, she needs to instill all the rules in this new world into every reader, so that these readers can completely forget the rules we are familiar with, so that they can devote themselves wholeheartedly to the world she created. This is very, very difficult. Just like when we watch those Western fantasy movies, we can easily understand the new rules instilled in us in "The Lord of the Rings" and "Harry Potter" because the movie images have a more direct and powerful impact on us. However, how many people have actually read the above two masterpieces? This is a very bold attempt, so I admire Miss Meeting very much. Most of the current Internet articles are for the purpose of pleasure. The most important thing is that they are easy to read and enjoyable. The book about meeting the young lady is like an anomaly among them (I dare not say Qingliu to avoid misunderstanding). In this fast-paced era of online writing, she spoke eloquently and unhurriedly unfolded a large, detailed and exquisite picture to us. From the first chapter, we can see this picture through the pen we met. Following her brush strokes, you seem to be able to clearly see the scene she described, and every detail is in place. I like this kind of picture very much. I am a very strange person. I like to visualize the words I see in my mind. This book I came across completely satisfied my somewhat strange request. I know that not everyone likes this kind of visuals, especially in the male video category. I am afraid not many people are willing to watch these meticulous depictions slowly. Since I didn't read many words, I looked at the titles of subsequent chapters and felt that the 100,000 words I had just read the setting of the world when I met the young lady. Therefore, this is a very slow-paced book, and people who are impatient may not be able to read it. Next, there is the very important character setting. Now that the world structure is in place, the next step should be to create vivid characters. Su Ze, who has extraordinary painting skills but a bit off-kilter mind; Tang Qingli, who is verbally upright and has the appearance of an old father; the must-have humorous figure in every story and whose physique is three feet water; the gossip sister Hua Qinghua Fuling and the central character of the gossip, the domineering president-like existence is Sui. (Don't ask me why I didn't mention the male protagonist. This character is so mysterious that I, the illiterate, can't see through it at all.) It feels like each supporting character has his or her own unique personality, and it is vividly reflected in their respective dialogue behaviors, just like different bright colors in this world, making the whole story come alive instantly. Compared to these supporting characters, the character of the heroine Nian Nian is much more complex. Just like the author's own official evaluation, this girl is smart, occasionally a little naive, and is a very three-dimensional existence. Therefore, I think Nian Nian's image is more colorful than the images of other supporting characters. With such a world setting and such a character setting, the only thing left is a wonderful storyline. Again, I haven't seen much, so I feel like the whole story hasn't started yet. What I've seen is like the background of the story. The heroine got off the ship, traveled from the Western world to the Eastern world, and then made many new friends. Then through various conversations between the heroine and these friends, the setting of this world was slowly unfolded. Such a gentle advancement will indeed dissuade a large number of readers. So far, I have only seen the part where they entered the Qinling Mountains, so I have not seen more subsequent plots and cannot comment. However, this multi-angle description technique makes me feel quite familiar and cordial. Yes, Pu Jie Chi is also written in this way. I think this way of writing is somewhat similar to my idea, which is to describe the story more objectively and comprehensively. Although this way of writing may not be very popular, I personally still prefer this feeling of being able to control the entire domain. In fact, before I started writing, I struggled for a long time because I couldn't objectively evaluate the book "Meet the Little Sister". The first is because my personal level is really very limited. In the past, I just read the plot and passed the time without thinking deeply, so I was unable to dig out the deeper meaning behind the text. The second thing is that the book I came across really suits my taste. Whether it is the setting of the entire world or the almost hypocritical logical setting, I really appreciate it, so I can't find any shortcomings in this book at all. Third, I would say shamelessly that my description method is more or less similar to that of Encounter. Of course, my level is far inferior to that of the young lady, and there is no deeper meaning behind the words. In this regard, I am completely inferior to the young lady. But it was these slight similarities that made me have a natural affinity for this book, and I even felt that I wanted to write it like this. In view of the above three points, I feel that my review basically has no reference value. However, little sister, as a reader of yours who will keep reading, I want to say something sincerely. Writing is a very lonely road. To walk on this road, you need to be able to endure loneliness. And your choice also determines your path forward. Once you choose, just move forward bravely. I believe that the accumulation of these bits and pieces will always become your upward ladder. I don't know if I am being bitter when I say this, but this is my sincere thought, and I encourage you all. In the end, I am Chi Chi, who has talked nonsense for more than two thousand words. Although it is nonsense, each of these two thousand words is my truest feeling. Finally, I want to say that this book review may not be of any practical use, but I hope it can make you feel less lonely on the way to continue. Come on, the kindest snail lady~

Isn't this book popular? Is there a male protagonist?

The portrayal of the characters, the confrontation between the rivals, etc. Are so beautiful and the pitfalls are so suspenseful.

If you find any typos or punctuation errors, please mark them in this chapter and I will correct them in time! If you find that the logic is wrong, or the wording is wrong, which makes it difficult to understand, you are welcome to correct me in this chapter! Bow! Thanks!

Happy New Year😁

See Chapter 12. This article does not include palace fights, CEOs, etc. That are common in female videos. Although at first you may think it is a layered world like swords and swords, but it actually shows a more delicate online game world. The heroine is quite attractive, as an archer, just use the double swords to activate the infinite sword control and go up to do it. . . I digress, but she is actually a soft elf girl who is a bit cute. As a result, I didn't pay attention to the male supporting characters at all and just looked at her. The above structure is very attractive and the rhythm is very comfortable, but it lacks real writing. It would be great if the game's introduction and settings were toned down and there were a lot of real-life situations and worlds. In the first chapter, I tried to change the image of a stone gate. Similar to this, there are many details that can be added in the article. For example, when the girl goes down the mountain, she can write a more delicate arc of the downhill slope, the distribution of the forest layers, the condition of the vegetation, and the shape of the mountain in the distance. If there is an overnight stay, there can be animals, weather, homesickness and a campfire. After that, the Blue Whale sails through the sky, and you can see wind, different clouds, passing migratory birds, regional plants and overlooking villages. Taking your time is actually more suitable for such a soft and beautiful character.

Dear author, you can apply to open a book club welfare activity in the book club circle. I want to help you apply for your book. Do you agree?

I have a cat called Nian Nian, and my birthday is also February 17th. What a coincidence.

Oh, you can take a good look at it

After reading the last chapter, I personally think it is very appropriate to use the music of Ori and the Will of Wisps to accompany this article. Do you agree?

What topics do you plan to write about after finishing "Meet the Lady"?

Strong woman😎

It's too tiring to generate electricity for love. There are rewards, but if there is no profit from writing a book, even if it is spiritual sustenance, it is not good. I think the most important thing is to live a good life first! ! Come on

It's rare, I haven't seen a good book about games in a long time. You must persist!

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