Rebellion in the Heavens

The protagonist is a righteous partner who punishes evil and promotes good. I feel that the depth of this novel is a bit low.

I feel like the author is so miserable and there are no comments? Touch your head, I'll be the first!

Maybe I'm too impatient. I couldn't understand the beginning of the first world. I don't know what kind of world it is. Maybe it's a movie, maybe it's the author's original creation, but it felt very confusing to me. I read the second and third chapters twice, but I couldn't figure out the relationship between the characters and the plot. I hesitated for a while, and then gave up... The plot can be complicated, but I don't want it to be at the beginning 😅

The scum should not be saved. According to Buddhism, if you put down your butcher knife and become a Buddha immediately, you have to bear so much karma and resentment. The scum should be physically eliminated.

Remember to divide the next book into volumes. Your book is not divided into chapters. It's too confusing.

I can't stand it anymore, I feel like the protagonist is a bit of an idiot

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Can you turn Aozora back into Shota? Why did she suddenly become a lolita? And she also transformed! I really want to vomit blood!

This book is still very well written, but I found that the content of the article has nothing to do with the title of the book. This is also the main reason for the author's rejection. I first clicked in because I wanted to read Zhutianliu, but at the beginning I was trying to abuse the main character, which was very frustrating. Later I got used to the rhythm. On the contrary, I think it is very good. The theme of this book is to punish evil. It is different from the traditional Zhutianliu. I clicked in after seeing the title and introduction, but abandoned it as soon as I saw the content. I really like to read this kind of books, but I was blocked by the title and introduction. This is not good. I suggest the author change the title and introduction.

Well. . As a bookworm for over ten years. . . The plot of this book is okay, but the writing is okay but not too great. The portrayal of the protagonist needs to be strengthened. It feels like the author used to write romance novels for female videos. In the works, the corners of the protagonist's mouth are slightly raised and the dimples are shallow. 😅😅😅 But the protagonist's character is still okay. To be honest, I came to read the book because it didn't have a female protagonist. I couldn't help it. The longer I read the book, I started to pick not only the writing but also the plot. Now I am really disgusted to death by those ambiguous stories about stallion harem. Although the author said that there is no heroine in this book, there is a heavy heart in it. . . Enmmmm. . . It's quite shocking. . . Looking at the comments, some people were very rude and started talking about it. Come on, author, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Shen Xin couldn't stand the bad news, so she gave up the book. Goodbye

Absolutely only female authors can write this, and a real male god can face this copy of adjustment exercise, Yun Dan Feng Qing

So what kind of plot character is Shen Xin? No heroine but ambiguous?

I always feel that the copies of this type of novels are better looking, but the realistic ones are not.

You and I have known each other since we were in Shura. Although Shura is a scam, you still write this male video very well.

I just want to ask if there is any ambiguity in this article QAQ or any female character that is poisonous. I just want to read a story that has no heroine, no ambiguity and no xo.

I want to watch Shitou's educated youth go to the countryside. I like to travel through that world and have fun all the way to the end.

I'm sorry, I've written more than 700,000 words before commenting like this. No one reads it?

Dear author, although I am very happy to see an original character with me as the character appearing in your novel, I want to say that I am a male. Now that I'm done with it, here's a salute for me dressed as a woman. I'm giving you a reward. It's a small amount of money for a poor guy, but it's a heartfelt gift. I hope you won't find it objectionable. *▽*

Here I go again! O(∩_∩)O~

I just want to ask, what happened to the author when he wrote the first world? 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨💀💀💀💀💀💀💀