Great Anchor

You're not bad at all. You should pay attention to the punctuation. In this kind of article, the chapter names can be 2 points correct. If you keep going at this pace, you should be able to do it.

Such an old routine, mercenaries return to the city, I don't understand why so many people are bragging about it

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The author's writing is okay, and there is no feeling of dissuasion... (At first I thought it was Korean pig's feet 😁) A few things that are not clear, one is the golden finger (sixth sense?) What is it, I don't understand it very well, and the length is not enough... The other is what is the background, it feels like it is not explained, is it a university study abroad in China? (This is just to see where the story will go in the future, whether I will play professionally or play games all my life)

It feels like the viewers of the anchor are all smart people who only know how to complain.

Huaian's wet dream, you go to the big room and talk hahahaha