Interstellar Technology Supplier

After watching it for so long, I still can't understand anything about the main plot.

Brother die! Just because I looked at you one more time in the sea of ​​books, I never forgot your words again! ! !

The idea of ​​this book is pretty good, but I really can't understand the plot. One moment it's virtual reality, the next it's radar invisibility, it's chips, and it's smart driving. The plot line is so open. How do you want to write it? If you hit here and there and kick in the west, the book will be ruined.

It's poisonous! Every time I see the protagonist come up with black technology that shocks the world, I am very passionate and excited, but when I look back, I am immediately turned off by the interaction between the heroine and the protagonist. It's so embarrassing! I feel like I have nowhere to vent my anger. I hope the author can downplay the harem. .

It's been five chapters and I haven't gotten to the topic yet, so the author has wasted three golden chapters.

The subject matter is very good, but the preparation seems a bit complicated. I read several chapters and I don't have a clear idea of ​​the characters at all. The whole person is vague and the characters have no characteristics.

In the beginning, the apprentice was completely redundant.

The female apprentice is so annoying, I want to persuade her to quit!

I've read Chapter 13, and it's a bit verbose.

This book is very good. Author, you can write slowly, but don't write crookedly. Just follow this idea, and it will be a Platinum Master.

The world's most advanced technology, but only an outsourcing service provider? This setting is inconsistent with common sense

Don't always end up with a chapter at the beginning of a chapter. I've seen some authors enter v and still have this phenomenon 😡

Nurture first! Otherwise it would make you look upset

Kindergarten enlightenment books are fine, but don't write them as prenatal education. What a trap

The outline feels okay, but the writing style needs to be improved.

The writing is too slow, brother, where is the new technology?

You can keep up the good work. It's best not to be a supervisor.

The plot is a bit slow and feels a bit grinding.

The previous book was pretty good, but why did I become a eunuch?

Second post, take a look first

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Is it just a break or is it a eunuch?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I don't understand No passion at all