Interstellar Technology Supplier

After watching it for so long, I still can't understand anything about the main plot.

Brother die! Just because I looked at you one more time in the sea of ​​books, I never forgot your words again!!!

The idea of ​​this book is pretty good, but I really can't understand the plot. One moment it's virtual reality, the next it's radar invisibility, it's chips, and it's smart driving. The plot line is so open. How do you want to write it? If you hit here and there and kick in the west, the book will be ruined.

It's poisonous! Every time I see the protagonist come up with black technology that shocks the world, I am very passionate and excited, but when I look back, I am immediately turned off by the interaction between the heroine and the protagonist. It's so embarrassing! I feel like I have nowhere to vent my anger. I hope the author can downplay the harem. .

The subject matter is very good, but the preparation seems a bit complicated. I read several chapters and I don't have a clear idea of ​​the characters at all. The whole person is vague and the characters have no characteristics.

It's been five chapters and I haven't gotten to the topic yet, so the author has wasted three golden chapters.

I've read Chapter 13, and it's a bit verbose.

The female apprentice is so annoying, I want to persuade her to quit!

In the beginning, the apprentice was completely redundant.

This book is very good. Author, you can write slowly, but don't write crookedly. Just follow this idea, and it will be a Platinum Master.