Dao Pattern Heavenly Sword

At first, I really liked the book Red Mansions, I liked it very much, but in the later stages, it gradually became boring. Then came the next book, and the next one. I also said in the group at that time that I suggested polishing it for a few more months. I was really a little anxious. The beginning was okay, but later on, I lost interest as I read it. I ordered a few more chapters and it was boring, so I canceled it. The next one is this one. It was good at first, but then it became a little boring as I read it. Then, after thinking about it carefully, I found that the late Red Mansions and the following books all have these problems: 1. The core of character creation and characterization are somewhat homogeneous. There are many people in one core, but they are just different appearances. Although their differences are described, they are only superficial. In the early days, it was okay to have a small number of people, but in the later stages, it was really hard to stand it when there were more people. 2. Some are reversed for the sake of reversal, and the description does not feel very good. 3. There are some words and phrases in the article that need to be thought about more, especially the words spoken. Some of them really feel awkward. 4. Some of the new ideas are acceptable, but how to make this new idea substantial and exciting is still lacking. I feel that the description is a bit, how should I say, a bit floating and a bit empty. Of course, these are just my personal opinions and rational discussions are welcome.

First of all, many people say that the skill of first-level immortal cultivation is to touch corpses. I really don't know how to explain this. The skills of first-level immortal cultivation are to touch corpses before they are alive. The corpse will not resist, bite, and has no intelligence. There are also corpses' belongings during life. We are really sorry, but we really can't find them from a simple corpse. And about Jiumei, I actually watched one of the American comics. The little pet with thoughts in it is really interesting. This is a reference. Hehe, if you say I copied it, okay, I copied it, I copied it, I copied it hard, I was so shameless that I couldn't kiss you. It's so cute and shameless. (Cute and extending claws) There are also some people who say that the protagonist has no regard for family and treason, and this must be contradicted. What does it mean to deliberately say the opposite? In which of my books does there not be a saying that "those who are not of my race must have different hearts"? (The claws are not cute, they are five, very sharp) In the end, the author of this book drank too much Wahaha and had a brain convulsion. He asked some deliberately troublesome pink-eye authors to detour. I wrote more than two million yuan for the book. I met countless pink-eye authors. When I saw the recommendations on the Internet, I started looking for trouble. If I didn't write the book from 1,000 collections to nearly 20,000, one year after finishing the book, book friends still asked, "Frog, when will I write that again?" I am still the same in this book. I let the world of mortals disturb me, I write my own book and love my book friends. It's that simple. The anxious mind has been eliminated, and the three corpses have been killed. I don't want to be a god and be famous in the world. I just want enough to eat, drink, and support my family. Ten years from now, let's see who turns into a dragon and who turns into a gray dog. Let me say this again with the heart of a good person: write more, read more, and study more so that you can write better and better, be worthy of your book friends, and be worthy of yourself. The Red Mansion of Immortals and Demons has more than 2 million words. I read the information more than ten times. I bought more than 20 physical books and read them all. This one is about ghosts. I read thick ghost stories late at night and read 4 of them. I looked for ones that could be adapted and had unique characteristics. By the end of the book, I worked no less hard than The Red Mansions of Immortals and Demons. Bizarre, scary, phantoms, and then all the way. This is true for books, and so is writing books.

Give me a cum (｀⌒´メ) super fierce (secret deal)

It's written in a mess, like a psychopath

Is it interesting for a mud horse to chat awkwardly with a golden finger about numbers using a pig's feet? It's baffling to see. Isn't it good to just touch corpses? It's so embarrassing to watch, the conscious setting of Goldfinger is disgusting

I'm drunk when an FBI returns to China to develop. Even if the country doesn't arrest you, it will definitely keep you under surveillance.

Messy, inexplicable, confused

There are no 404s in this kind of book. I am an American spy.

Emmm, self-aware plug-ins will be a poisonous point for some people (whisper)

Enter here and leave your footprints. No matter whether it is heavy snow or gentle wind and drizzle in the future, we have been here before. We are destined to be together. The growth of the child "Super Ghost" has everyone's bits and pieces. We are reunited by fate. It is not easy to earn the fate in the previous life. Thank you all for keeping the record as proof.

I don't even know what to write about, but I just talk about love at the beginning

This "gold finger" is poisonous,,,

Chapter 1: Persuasion to Quit. Forgive me, I don't understand the logic of this book at all. Slipping away

The pace is a bit too fast, rather fragmented, and the plot continuity is not good.

Just for this chapter, I will kill 996 and give you 5 recommendations and 1 monthly pass! Brother, Leverage, although it doesn't have any effect, it's fun to watch. In imagination--

Can I get a bonus if I add a monthly pass to the full subscription 😁

It looks good. I'll send you two monthly tickets and a reward. Please improve it. 🤓🤓🤓

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter, scumbag + confusing logic

What the hell are you writing? It's not cool

I didn't understand the first chapter. I'm too old to keep up. Goodbye.

I can't understand the first chapter. What the hell is written? It's a mess.

After reading a few chapters, I felt very confused.

The probability of the protagonist being Pangu is 70% and the probability of being Hongjun is 30%

I gave up after seeing that the system had a soul at the beginning and it was a female system. I'm afraid the system will try the protagonist again.

I'm trying to persuade you to quit at first. This kind of system is no longer popular.

It can be seen that the author was given happiness by the swordsman

I didn't want to read it when I saw Chapter 27. Did the author finish writing and realized that the word count was not enough, so he just used ah ah ah ah to write. Don't be so low on word count even if you are addicted to it.

Dingdang, these two words immediately persuaded me to quit.

Pay 30,000 yuan to save someone? Wouldn't it be better to come secretly and announce to the world that you have mysterious means? Still abroad

I'm really drunk, what the hell is this update of yours! It's not appropriate to celebrate the Chinese New Year. No, can you give me some help with this update? 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡