Cultivation of Immortality Is on AFK

This is the first time I write a long review. What I write are all my personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. First of all, the writing style is a bit rough, which is not suitable for old bookworms. And there are still many places where the word count is low 😅, but the protagonist's brain circuit is really weird. . . . Don't tell me that novels are less realistic, at least they should be consistent with reality. The characterization is also too vague, and the protagonist behaves too well in front of others. . . What's that? Although I didn't watch much, I did see the part where the sect becomes a disciple. The most important thing is that the protagonist is a killer. Even if he plays the son of a family, he shouldn't be so stupid. This way he can still be pampered by the family and he is not an only son. Ahem, it's generally pretty good. I personally recommend reading it for entertainment when you're in a book shortage. Anyway, being an old bookworm, I've decided to quit. I hope the author will keep up his good work 😡

I just want to know, is the first chapter an insult to our intelligence? I can only use two of the self-created footwork, but can't use the others? What the hell kind of setting is this? Insulting our intelligence? Just by reading the first chapter, I was hooked.

What the author is writing is no longer a fairy tale, but a typical fantasy novel. The world of Xianxia is full of intrigues and intrigues. The fantasy world is a slap in the face. This model of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. It's fantasy

The technique is poisonous, I insisted until I read Chapter 7 and was about to give up.

With my own kung fu, I was able to take two out of seven steps. How did I get the remaining five steps? Do what you dream about

Why can I only suck monsters but not people? Bad review! Do demons have something that humans don't have? Why do demons exist but humans don't? The author discriminates against humans→_→

Please note that there are typos in Chapter 28 🙂

The main character, Mo Wu, seems to have the same character as usual, but in fact the flaws are already huge. Don't forget that he was just assassinated by the guards and killed the guards in return. You still act as usual.

In fact, I think the protagonist doesn't have that funny personality and has a better character, and the word count is super low.

Why do you want to laugh when you never see the protagonist as a killer? ? ? ?

The character of the protagonist is really uncomfortable to watch Although we all know it's just an act, we really feel tired after watching it for a long time. I'll never leave this young master. To be honest, the more I look at him, the more he looks like a retard. There's nothing humorous or funny in it at all. No, just simple retardation It really gives me a headache after watching it for a long time

Why do all killer protagonists like to play games, read novels, and follow TV series?

The effect of spirit stones is too low, and spirit stones are said to be very precious. As the protagonist, you can only receive one spirit stone a year, which is already a disadvantage. Killing the first-level ones at will is much better than the spiritual stones. At least you don't have to wait for time. Then, the birthday banquet got a first-level one before, which was too cheap. Since the ones killed by others can't be absorbed, why not get a higher level one?

Go ahead and write about martial arts. This is an insult to cultivators.

Even if he pretends to be the original protagonist, there is no need to write a second-generation male protagonist for so long, right? ? It's really embarrassing to watch, and I can't tell that he was a top killer in his previous life. I just feel like pretending to be a sand wall, and then turning myself into a sand wall

I really hope that Pig's Knuckle's character can be changed back. It was interesting at first, but after a long time, I felt that Pig's Knuckle was so silly. Will it always be like this? It's best to be yourself

I've always been curious about one thing You are the number one killer on earth, you have rich combat experience and there is nothing wrong with you But the other world is so big and there are so many people, so there must be more powerful people. Then why can you always kill people beyond your level and kill with ease.

I don't know if the main leg is tired or not. Anyway, I was so tired after reading only the first two chapters that I threw the book in the toilet.

Likewise, it becomes more and more uncomfortable the further you go, the idle setting is good, and the acting skills are also good, but the protagonist forces himself to pretend to be stupid, and also forces the supporting characters to become really stupid. Everyone is a fool to cooperate with the protagonist, which makes me speechless. It's fine in my hometown because everyone has preconceptions, but it's still the same in the sect. Are you pretending to be like this and pretending that others have been cultivating for decades and hundreds of years? Will be beaten to death. Don't think that having a backer with the highest level of cultivation in every place will not be beaten to death. Also, what the protagonist does is too conflicting with the previous chapter about his true self, pretending not to attract attention and so on. Awkward! This is the first time I saw the idle setting. Let's raise it first after giving rewards. There was no need to pretend to be stupid at first. It was good to upgrade to monster-fighting equipment 13 and get slapped in the face. But later on, I couldn't stand it anymore and my split personality appeared. It makes me tired⊙⊙

I was attracted by the introduction, but I can't complain about the self-created footwork in the first chapter. Even if you write that you accidentally obtained the nameless killing method in your previous life, I can accept it. And no matter how awesome your footwork is, can you pass a bullet quickly?

If you change the self-created steps at the beginning to create the front steps, it would be okay if the rest are all in the exploratory stage! I made it myself but I can't use it. It looks so embarrassing.

You, a small family, can practice physical training, why don't other sects test them when they recruit people? There's nothing pretentious about it. It's pointless to keep hiding it all the time. It's not fun at all. Keep looking at the protagonist and you're just being a fool. Don't you think it's written so that everyone is instantly amazed and it's more satisfying to think that the protagonist has been hiding for so many years and has a deep scheming? No wonder it's so popular

. . It's so poisonous, it's okay to watch it without thinking

The author has updated two chapters, why doesn't it appear at the starting point? Creation has... The starting point of severe convulsions! 😰

The setting of this book is relatively novel, but the results may not be very good, and the ending feels a bit hasty.

How did you finish 750,000 words when the upgrade was so slow?

The talent roulette continues to be updated, the distraction mirror is gone...

The author has a problem with his writing. He has nothing to do with it. His little cleverness is good in one or two places, but I can't stand it anymore. Including the part where the little cleverness comes out later and is about cheating is not well written.

The writing is still very good, at least I read it from beginning to end, but the ending is not perfect. Since there is a fairy world, why not write some?

There are a few minor flaws, but they're not major problems. It's a pity that they're so unfinished.