Roll Over, Xianyujun

It's not bad. It's the first book that you can add to the bookshelf after investing in it. Come on, salted fish.

Come on, keep writing. It doesn't matter if you sign or not, what's important is to stick to it.

A veteran salty fish likes to use the system, but discovers that the purpose of the system is to transform himself! Let him become a good boy named Guang Zhengwei in the new era? Could it be that I only have a salty heart but no salty life? This is a vulgar story about a young man who relies on the system to save the world. It is also a legend about a humble young man who wields a sword and kills the unknown. The background of this book refers to the Cthulhu Mythos, but it is not a system. (PS: Please skip the poisonous points in the early stage, they are all caused by the law of mutual attraction between different people!)

I also want to be a salted fish! I don't want to code!

This book is undergoing major changes and updates will be suspended. The main purpose is to slow down the pace of the story and make the protagonist's image and personality more realistic. Well, that's it.

As a senior salted fish, what else can I do? I can only collect it like this.

Come on 😊😊

The author's writing is great, keep it up.

There is no future for the first-time beast, so behead it. 🎺

It's an unconventional story. The main character is a salty fish just like me, so I somehow like this style of painting. His penis gradually becomes stronger, and he gets rid of the feeling of being a straight man. The painting style is also light and funny. Some parts are not very good, but I just like the feeling of salted fish. Finally, let me tell you my personal feelings. 1. This book is called Salted Fish Code, so let the protagonist be a salted fish, a salted fish that turns over and bask in the sun from time to time. The salted fish may also be made of piranhas, but in recent chapters, the protagonist's salted fish aura is no longer visible (ㅎ‸ㅎ). 2. One update a day will help you throughout your life. Do you also believe in my Buddhism? I seriously suspect that the protagonist's salty fish aura was eaten by the author. You can revise the text slowly, but don't hinder the updated content and plot. 3. Although there have been no daily scenes recently, the feeling of relief is not very obvious. The main reason is that everyone's reaction is too bland. In fact, you can secretly write a little bit to shock everyone, but don't write too much, and the style of painting must be maintained.

The pace of the book is a bit fast, with characters and scenes coming one after another. You can try to add some rendering and description of the scene, and it is best to strengthen the writing style. There are also many places that are too unnatural, and the characterization is too dull, without its own characteristics, and cannot be impressive. The supporting characters stand out too much from the protagonist, do not fit the identity of the characters, and are inconsistent and unnatural. Since it's a salted fish, it shouldn't be so prominent in the first place. Of course, the subject matter was well chosen, and the author's language is also interesting. If it could be improved to make the writing smoother, it wouldn't be a book that would be a hit.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

This is how I finished it, do I need to change it?

Is it a problem with my app or..., Why did the big chapter change?