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Big support for the author! ! !

The author's writing is very good. I have collected it and remember to reply.

Football persuades you to quit, do you have the ability to predict football? The thought of the national football team makes me sick, so I might as well write a system sports competition stream

The author's narrative is smooth, with obvious copying and balance, so there are inconsistencies in the length of the text. The more times it is revised, the more invisible traces there are of care. What can be improved is the narrative technique. Don't tell the whole story. For example, Chapters 1-3 are not enough to be played directly. You can understand the descriptions of the nurse, OL, etc., And you can pass it happily. Readers can see what the little characters look like, whether they are on the bus or in the elevator of an office building. If the characters' personalities change, they won't even mention them. But once they are colored, the bones inside will remain the same. Mutual fans of my humble work "No More Regrets YF"~~

Name: Lin Dong Gender: Male Remainder: Author's discretion

Hey guys, this is a football novel

I've seen the protagonist play basketball and table tennis, but I just don't want to watch football. Really, the national football team still has the nerve to play. I just think it's an insult to Chinese football.

Red envelopes for recommendation votes will be sent out in the early morning. I will check the number of recommendation votes tomorrow.

I just woke up and saw the comment you left on my book list, but when I clicked on the comment on the book list, there was no one from you, so I couldn't reply to you. Then I came here. After I read a few chapters, and if I think it's okay, I will add it to the book list for you. Don't stop updating (´-ω-`)

Already collected, please give the author a boost! !

It looks pretty good. Come on, sign up and put it on the shelves. I believe there won't be too many readers.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~ Come on, author.

I just voted for your recommendation! Come on