The Immortal Who Devours the Starry Sky World

If you don't write the plot, it's just a low word count 😃(｀⌒´メ) It's so fierce

Do a survey and find out how many of those who read this book have only read Swallowing Stars, or only The Wilderness, or both. Or is there anyone who can read Zhou Gong's book without having read it? Please leave a comment. It is related to Zhou Gong's setting, characters, plot, etc. Do you need to be more detailed or more concise? Thanks for the support!

It's okay if you don't have to be a prisoner. I like watching this.

Recently, I asked several people in the author group to evaluate my book, and two of them said that I used symbols indiscriminately, ahem, [. . . . This is how I wrote the psychological description, and the dialogue between the protagonist and the system is also this. And "..." Is a dialogue. Every time I finish writing it, I will check it several times to make sure there is no confusion. I also know that psychological descriptions should also use quotation marks, but when I read the book, I couldn't quite tell what I said and what I was thinking. . . , let me explain to you, it is not a lack of basic cultural literacy. 🙂

In addition, the one in the introduction is definitely a prodigy and not a supernatural power. Also, I don't know how the author plans to deal with the cross-over of power between the two worlds. Personally, I feel that the cross-system power needs to be localized. For example, the "Sword Way" is useless in Devouring the Starry Sky, and the "Way of Flame" can be transformed into the "Law of Fire" to a certain extent. Kung Fu cannot be practiced directly in Devouring, but it can speed up the absorption of genetic energy. No more YY, go read a book

I took a quick look at it, and to be honest, the writing style is too offbeat, and humor should be used as a minor modifier rather than the main part. This system is really awesome.

Duke Zhou is a newbie. He doesn't know much about what to do during the recommendation period, what taboos should be avoided, and what benefits should be given. Can anyone who knows more please come in and give me some guidance? As for the writing style that is too secondary, it should be improved in the last few chapters. Please read it patiently 😊😊😊😊 Although Zhou Gong writes a fanfic, he only wants to learn from the world view and training system. There are other arrangements for the plot, but a few settings are slightly attached. I hope you like it. Finally, I don't know how to be a eunuch, I don't know how to be a eunuch, I don't know how to be a eunuch! ! !

If you are systematic and don't always talk out of tune, like a child, you should first determine the style of the entire article. Don't always write about other people's inner activities. Although it is clear about other people's thoughts, it is not what we readers want. We all like to guess and make associations. A lot of inner activities are just like watching a movie. All the actors are talking to themselves while acting, what are their thoughts and actions next? Doesn't it look like the whole movie is forcibly drawn to a cartoon that is worse than Calabash Baby? Swallowing and Manghuang Ji, whoever has the bigger fist is right. They yearn for a free and unfettered realm. For the sake of the people, well, and the common problem of all articles, they use their talents to show off. There is pressure and motivation. The protagonist seems to be traveling through time just to get benefits, so that he can get better benefits in the future, and spoil the story while doing so! Swallowing and Manghuang are so big that you can write them slowly in the future. Write a fanfic. Follow the plot and add some of your own ideas. They are all sacred books. Don't use childish dialogues. Suddenly I remembered that good books have very few dialogues. They all use dialogues to portray the entire picture. Also, no eunuchs!

It's pretty good. I hope you can stick to it. Come on＾0＾~

Author, God rewards hard work, persistence is victory

Those who click in are all people who are bored during the Chinese New Year. I am writing a book. Please take a look at it. If you are interested, remember to collect it!

I have a bold idea, emm. . . Theoretical visualization is to think carefully in your mind after looking at the picture. In Manghuang's original novel, Nuwa is the world god and should be perfect in front of mortals, and she is a woman - a perfect woman. Ji Ning's visualization is similar to Nuwa's self-portrait, and it seems to be a high-definition three-dimensional version. Being put in the head by Ji Ning for more than 10 years (note: mortal stage), as a man in the 21st century, a high-definition 360-degree three-dimensional uncensored woman is still the most beautiful woman in his head. By the way, has Ji Ning transformed into a Tathagata, imitated Bai Qi, and turned into a saint? (ಡωಡ)

Burn incense, bow once, bow again, and bow three times. After the ceremony, everyone spit before leaving.

The writing is okay, but you don't want to be a eunuch anymore.

Why do I feel so messed up when I look at it? It's so exciting.

The plot of the Golden Crow Immortal that is forcibly arranged now is stuck. It has been stuck in the water. I don't want to watch it anymore. Forget it, fatten up. Just skip it when the time comes.