Record of the Great War

To be honest, I personally think that the protagonist, well, it's a bit difficult to describe him. I'm not saying that the writing is not good, but I think the protagonist's character would be better if he changed it. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it 🙏🙏

Every time I read "Honghuang", I feel very sad. To become a saint, you need perseverance and a firm mind. In the end, you become a saint. Your perseverance is gone and your mind is gone. You have to wait and see what the sky will tell you about what you do and what you cannot do. Is this a saint?

I don't know which little girl from Qidian did it. . .

If so, it's still very cliché, really super cliché. Empress Nuwa is obviously the ancient goddess of the human race, the goddess of creation.

Writing about Ancient Times means being rigorous, but this book is not rigorous at all. Seeing Wang Shu persuade him to retreat, it was poisonous.

I think the worldview of Demon Emperor Nitian is very good. We will not comment on the novel, but we will say that this worldview is really good. After reading it, the world view of other ancient novels became more and more unpleasant to my eyes. This novel should be very good.

Do you know why it's not popular? The starting point is too high. Within a few chapters, he was criticizing everything. You are already older, what's the point of looking at you? Personally, I think the best starting point for the prehistoric species is the innate divine being born at the end of the ferocious beasts. Just give birth to a baby, and then continue to develop and look for opportunities. The plot unfolds slowly. When you reach the Saint, you can open a new map. When you go down to Journey to the West, basically no one has written about the plot. This is a challenge. A main line can be written in both directions. If your pen is not strong enough, it is best to write in one direction. The logical position must be correct, human, demon, sacred, demon. It's not that I reincarnated into a demon, but I am a human soul, and I can sacrifice everything for people. These are too annoying. As a reader, what I want to see is a different perspective on the world in the book.

The new book is okay, I hope it writes a different kind of monkey!

I don't know what you want to write. You already know the cycle. Who knows what to do and still writes a chicken?

The new book needs your support, ah ah ah~~~

The beginning was okay, but Kai Tianhou is getting more and more vicious. After all these years, the main character is still a loser.

No wonder my grades are so bad. It's really a novice. Even if I copy the settings, it won't work. The writing is not good. The language is too rough and it doesn't feel like the ancient times.

I can't understand it. At the beginning, you had to keep a low profile to avoid being killed by Pangu, and you didn't even try to kill Pangu to create the world on your own in the middle of the chapter. If you have this ability, are you still looking for someone to do it? I don't even understand

It's understandable that the author drew on and perfected the prehistoric system, but it involves previous works and the causes and consequences are painful to watch!

The protagonist is so disgusting, even a woman has to hate him

Just like the title, all you guys, hurry up and vote.

This is a story about the protagonist's struggle with the ever-resurrecting heaven! I asked the author, could you please switch to another person to fight? Is it interesting to always stare at the way of heaven? Isn't this the same as eating, sleeping and playing Doudou?

It's too ridiculous. The starting point is to fight against Pangu and Daodao. After returning to the prehistoric times, there is nothing left! I don't understand what the author has in mind

I feel like it's just enough text in one lick, and the writing style is a bit poor, like a running account, the more I read it, the more annoying it becomes.

Some of them are hard to understand and a little bit less enjoyable.

I can't stand it anymore, it actually involves a rubbish book! Wouldn't it be better for you to just write a novel about people on earth traveling through the wilderness and snatching chance treasures? You can also lead Honghuang to another higher plane. Those who write about Honghuang are all a bunch of poor people enslaved by Hongjun. This treasure cannot be snatched, and that treasure cannot be taken away! To put it bluntly, the author doesn't want to change the original plot! The original legendary plot has been changed and I have to make it up myself! If it doesn't change, what's cool about it? ? ? ? ?

What the hell is the Gate of Mysterious Dao? It's unclear and boring.

Why is this prehistoric novel so similar to The Demon King of Prehistoric Times?

Why didn't you learn how to write essays when you were in elementary school? What to write! Nine out of ten sentences do not make sense. My head hurts from looking at it

Don't forget your original intention and live a free and easy life. Going against your own will and indulging in the desire for power will definitely lead to darkness, and you won't be able to go far. You don't have your own way. You will always just follow the footsteps of others. If others think it is right, it is right. If others think the good character of diaosi is rubbish, then it is rubbish. Anyway, you should be like others. Aren't you just a replica of that person? Are you yourself? A good temper should lead to failure, right? You are just cowardly.

What are you writing about? He was just a quasi-winner when he was just born. He could suppress 12 Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian with just a small pass, which made the 12 great Chaos Demon Gods not dare to attack him.

The writing is really bad and I can't stand it anymore.

I am not the king of poison, but I have also been poisoned 💀

The god who wrote How many worlds can you lick a dog? It's so disgusting. Elementary school student composition. I can't stand it.

What is this written about? ? ? ?