The Stranger Who Destroyed the World

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This book has become cold, so let's scatter it😭

Comrades, Chapter 3 has been revised. You can go and watch it with confidence 🙂 As for changing Chapter 4, we will discuss it tomorrow.

This author... I feel like the writing is very unnatural... Forget about the character transitions, how could there be such a big gap between brothers and sisters, and it feels like the author himself is just venting his anger, and his heart suddenly changed, which feels inexplicable.

Hmm... How do I put it... I don't know how many chapters the author published in one breath at the beginning, but as a Bengsan fan, I only started to enter the world of Bengsan in the sixth chapter, and the first few chapters only briefly mentioned Bengsan, and most of them were the experiences of the protagonist. There is a feeling of dissatisfaction..."The beginning is incomprehensible and too boring". Although these experiences are helpful in shaping the character, and also explain his subsequent cheating in the three worlds, there is a way for readers to understand, but... How to say? The plot is a bit uncomfortable. The protagonist feels like a child who has not yet grown up - maybe the author wants to create this kind of character who can grow up, but how can I put it... It feels not very likable. Causing the death of a loved one because of one's own emotional excitement, well... This is quite poisonous from a personal point of view. And also in the parallel world, the mood changes too quickly, making people feel that the protagonist... Is not particularly good. I don't know how to describe that meaning. Anyway, it just seems like the protagonist doesn't pay much attention to his family members. Of course, the protagonist must value his loved ones, and this can be seen later, but from that point of the plot... That is, after the death of a loved one, it is really a bit fast to get rid of the emotion that indirectly leads to the death of the loved one so quickly. Ah, I just went back and read the end of Chapter 5. There is one thing I want to tell the author, which is not to use too many jokes. It is normal for the author to play tricks, which can attract complaints and dilute some tragic emotions. But... What if... Well, what to say? When the plot is serious, all members must have IQs and EQs as high as possible. Playing jokes also requires... Well, just... Ah, I don't know how to put it. But there is some philosophical gag about traveling through time at the end, which looks a bit awkward. ... Personal feeling.

………………………… ……，，，，，，，，……（） …………， Extra, this extra is... I, this may sound a bit unpleasant, I... I am not very good at talking, and my emotional intelligence is relatively low, but this extra... Is it just making up chapters? As a Bengsan fan, or as a protagonist, I feel that this extra chapter is irrelevant. And it's Qingming... How do you say it? It feels like this Qingming Festival, except for the holiday, does not seem to have any content that can represent the deep meaning of Qingming. This episode makes me feel special, special... A little uncomfortable. Well, it's a little uncomfortable, a little uncomfortable. Hmm... When the author said that some content about the protagonist's original world would be updated, I thought it would be better to update the content between the protagonist and his family as much as possible. Because this extra episode was released in the early stages. This is... The shaping of this protagonist has not been completed yet, people... What readers want to know more is what kind of person the protagonist is, and then see if he is the type they like, and then they will want to know more about him when they like him. Now, they should complete the character of the protagonist and attract fans, rather than write about a very insignificant incident in his daily life. At the very least, what should be written now is what happened between him and his family, like why he had a falling out with his family.

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Well, how do you say that? ... How many times have I said this. (Wry smile) This, I finished reading that sleep and daily life. Well, I feel... If I criticize, I might feel sorry for the author, and I don't mean to criticize myself. I really want to say something. I don't know if what I want to say is bad or good. I don't know if it is good or bad for the author, and I don't know if it is good or bad for me... Ah, but it doesn't matter if it is good or bad to me. It's just... Oops, what do you want to say? Well... Forget it. The sleeping chapter... Maybe the author was touched by something when he posted it. What was the situation at home? Or is there some other reason for writing this? Of course the intention is very good, that is, the intention is very good. Although it has nothing to do with Beng San, the intention is really good, very good. In terms of description... The first half is a bit... The second half is very good! The first half just feels like a bandit army... Of course. I don't mean it in a disdainful way, I just say that language... How do you say it? Well, at that time... Although I studied literature, I was not very good at history. Just, I don't know about people's moral character or spoken language at that time, but how should I put it, it just... Feels like I have a bit of a bad mouth, ah, this is just my personal feeling, maybe. Then the daily life at the end is part of the author's daily life. Well, how should I put it? Hmm... I might be a little mean, or maybe I'm even a little bit evil, or I, I... Ah, I'm not a good person anyway. Yes, yes, yes, yes, I am not a good person! Just... Or maybe I'm forcing the author a little bit. Content like this should be digested internally. That is, I don't know if Qidian has this kind of partitioned submission method, that is, you have one column for the main text, and then there are extra columns and some other columns. I don't know if Qidian has this, because I am mainly a book reader. And then this... It's a bit awkward to suddenly insert it into the text. Of course, this will definitely not be included in the author's update. This has nothing to do with the update, and it is equivalent to adding an extra chapter for free. But... If you just read it like this from the beginning, you will feel... There are two things that have nothing to do with the main text, which makes it a little, a little bit uncomfortable. ... But the writing is good! This, this writing is good! Yes, yes, this writing style. Well, because the plot is adapted from real events, there is no problem with the plot. This writing style is such that you can see that there is progress, there is really progress! Come on, author. !

Okay, old friends, maybe one chapter a day. When you have time, you can take a look at the previous plots, and you will find that there have been huge changes (the book was revised at three or four o'clock in the evening, not only the changes, but also the new plots).