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The writing is pretty good. If you polish it carefully, it could be a script for a series of movies!

Ding, a naughty and cute reader was successfully persuaded to quit in the first chapter.

I can completely understand Tian Shaoguan's dream of being indifferent and escaping from the world...

Looks like there's a hint of Dan Brown

The introduction of the characters is unclear, and there is no sense of substitution. The plot is unclear and mysterious. But who is Lao Ran who introduced the business? Who was the protagonist in the past? Is it too coincidental that the name of the system is the same as the one given by Lao Ran? Or is Lao Ran the system maker?

I really don't understand why there are more and more systems in novels nowadays. Can anyone explain it? I really hate system writing. All rules are set. Physical strength ➕1 intelligence ➕1. When I see this, I don't want to read it anymore. Is there any joy in novelistic imagery?

There are only 8 billion people in the world, tens of millions of people, basically everyone can meet, uh, according to the growth rate, it is better to wait to die

The amount of the first task is 50,000? ? Damn it, risk your life, that's all 😓

Why did I find several books today and lost a few chapters

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

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Is Jian Shisan a vegetable in his own world? The man in white is the attending doctor?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

After reading some chapters, I would like to share my feelings. I hope it will be useful to the author. Advantages: Character creation is okay; Environment creation is okay; Writing can feel above the average level; Disadvantages: The atmosphere is not good, the environment is good but the atmosphere is not as rich as it should be. I have seen Zhetian, Hell Apartment and Dark Blood Age before. Zhetian makes people feel majestic, and Hell Apartment makes people feel weird and unpredictable. The Age of Dark Blood makes people feel tragic; The opening chapter is not very good, and it is easy to be dismissed. There is no clear explanation of the characters, which makes people feel inexplicable. It is not a problem with the characters, it feels like the language is not organized well, and it should be more concise and transparent. It seems that there is another book called a thriller game (it seems to be this one). The protagonist is called Brother Jue. He has a distinctive personality and people will remember this person after reading it; It is not cool, if it can be achieved When it comes to creating an atmosphere like Tomb Raider Notes, it doesn't matter if it's not exciting. But now that the atmosphere is not in place and it's not exciting, it will make people unable to watch it. It's for this reason that I skipped reading it. I originally read the novel to relax my mood, but it turned out to be a bit boring when I saw it. When I saw Kunpeng, I thought about what would happen if things were exposed. Would some departments say that they have been our flower growers since ancient times? No one can hurt them. The protagonist is incompetent, and there is no special derogatory meaning. No matter whether the protagonist is self-reliant or reincarnated, there must always be clear improvement and strength. Maybe when I read it, I always felt that the protagonist had eaten the fruit of face 😅. It was okay for a short time, but I couldn't stand it for a long time. I am just a bastard. I can't enjoy the novel for a short time because the protagonist is incompetent and makes people very uncomfortable. I hope these things are useful to the author, come on, author!